高二英语8篇读后续写集锦

2024年2月20日发(作者：元宵节的灯谜)

高二英语8篇读后续写集锦

1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Once upon a time, in a small village in Turkey, there lived a mother and her son was known by allas Bald Boy becau even though he was still quite young he had no hair on his head at Boy and his mother were very poor indeed and so each day Bald Boy would take up his basket andwent out into the woods in arch of day, as he was arching the forest floor for mushrooms, Bald Boy was sure that he could hear a younggirl he looked up he noticed a little squirrel(松鼠）sitting on the branch of the tree above squirrel was crying inconsolably(无法安慰的）and so Bald Boy took the little creature in comforted her and told her that everything was going to be at last the squirrel stopped crying,the two friends got to talking and the Bald Boy explained how helived with his mother and how they were very poor."I need to come into this forest each day in arch of food becau we have no money,"he told the was then that the little squirrel said,"You have been very kind to me today so I am going to help you inreturn."Then the little squirrel jumped out of Bald Boy's hands and said,"Follow me." The young boy followed thesquirrel through the forest for many hours until they reached a cliff edge(悬崖边） that could e the greenvalley below."You must climb down this cliff,"said the squirrel."When you reach the bottom you will find the will ask you three questions and you must answer them all correctly to receive the prize."注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:The squirrel climbed up onto Bald Boy's shoulder ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:"If you do not answer correctly,"she said in her cold voice,"______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Paragraph 1:The squirrel climbed up onto Bald Boy's shoulder and whispered the answers to the three questions in hiar. Then she jumped down and ran back into the Boy made himlf a rope,then climbed down thecliff edge and made his way to where the squirrel had told him the Forest Queen she saw himapproaching, the Queen stopped Bald Boy and demanded that he answer three aph 2:"If you do not answer correctly,"she said in her cold voice,"then you will lo your head.""How manycherries are growing on this tree?""Where is the middle of the earth?""Which is the heavier of the twoapples?" Confidently,Bald Boy spoke out the answers the squirrel had already told Forest Queen couldnot deny that all three answers were correct and so she unwillingly handed Bald Boy a large bag of gold thatwas his prize. He thanked the squirrel in his heart and happily returned home to his mother with the gold.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。文章主要讲述生活在一个小村庄里的秃头男孩和他的母亲相依为命，并且很贫穷。一天，这个秃头男孩遇到一个哭的伤心的小松鼠并安慰它，小松鼠受到感动决定帮助男孩的故事。【详解】续写第一段开头为：松鼠爬上秃头男孩的肩膀，小声说……后面应该写小松鼠怎么帮助秃头男孩去获取奖励，男孩怎样到达悬崖底部见到森林女王的过程。续写第二段开头为：“如果你答错了，”她用冰冷的声音说，“那么……后面应该写秃头男孩回答上森林女王的问题，最终获得奖励，回到家中和他妈妈分享喜悦。

【点睛】文章主题部分选用的是一般过去时，续写部分也用一般过去时，通篇时态把握准确；词语运用恰当并且高级，显示出较高的英语能力；文章中还使用大量的复合句，为文章增加色彩和高级感，如BaldBoy made himlf a rope, then climbed down the cliff edge and made his way to where the squirrel had toldhim the Forest Queen lived. The Forest Queen could not deny that all three answers were correct and so sheunwillingly handed Bald Boy a large bag of gold that was his prize. 这里的宾语从句和定语从句相结合使用，显示高级的英语水平，精准掌握了从句使用的要领；续写部分构思巧妙，衔接自然，思路清晰自然，表达完整，为一篇优秀的作品。

2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Jenny was a pretty eight-year-old day when she and her mother were checking out at the grocery store, Jenny saw a plastic pearlnecklace, by which she was totally defeated. How eagerly she wanted it! But when she saw the price, her heartsank a little. She gathered up her courage and asked her mother if she would buy it for her. Her mother said,“Well, it is a pretty necklace, but it costs an awful lot of money. I can buy you the necklace, but when we gethome, we should make up a list of houwork that you can do to pay for the necklace.” Jenny agreedimmediately, feeling a burst of joy. So her mother bought the pearl necklace for her. Jenny worked on herhouwork determinedly and earnestly every day. Soon Jenny paid off the had a very loving daddy. When Jenny went to bed, he would read Jenny her favorite story. One nightwhen he finished the story, he said, “Jenny, do you love me?” “Oh, yes, Daddy, you know I love you.” the littlegirl said delightedly, with a broad smile on her face. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” Hearing that, Jennyfroze there, an anxious expression twisting her face. “Oh! Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Rosy, myfavorite doll. Remember her? You gave her to me last year for my birthday. Okay?” “Oh no, darling, that’sokay.” Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss, gently and calmly. “Good night, little one.”A week later, her father once again asked Jenny after her story, “Do you love me?” “Oh yes, Daddy, youknow I love you.” the little girl murmured softly, trying to escape from her father’s eyes. “Well, then, give meyour pearls.” “Oh, Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Ribbons, my toy hor. Do you remember her? Sheis my favorite.” The little girl begged. “No, that’s okay,” her father said, smiling broadly and sweetly andbrushed her cheek again with a kiss. “God bless you, little one. Sweet dreams.”注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1：Several days later, when Jenny’s father came in to read her story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him onthe bed.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2：Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Paragraph 1：Several days later, when Jenny’s father came in to read her story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him onthe bed. When listening to the story, Jenny was totally abnt-minded, with her hands holding the necklacetightly and firmly. When the story came to an end, unexpectedly, Jenny offered her beloved necklace to herfather, with her fingers trembling automatically. No one knew what the necklace meant to her. She whispered toher father, softly and gently, “Daddy, you know I love you more than the necklace.” Then, the necklace slid intoher father’s hands aph 2：Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box. Much to Jenny’samazement, a beautiful real pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box, which t her heart racing. Jenny frozethere, a thrilled expression twisting her face. Before Jenny was able to say something. her father brushed awarm kiss on her face and gathered her into his arms. Holding the genuine necklace in her hand, Jenny liftedher lip, tears beginning to blur her vision.

【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。【详解】读后续写主要以故事类文本为主，考生在阅读时，不应该走马观花看情节，而应找出文章的六要素（who, when, where, what, how, why），然后将每个主要事件都用六要素串联成一句话。这样一来，冗长的故事就成了两三句，文章的结构自然清晰明了。同时，考生还应该分析已给出的两个开头句包含的主要句子结构，这样才能保证正确的写作方向。为了写出符合故事发展的“尾巴”，必须先分析原文的情节发展方向。除了采用上文提到过的六要素分析法，在审题时还应该着重分析三个点：起因、转折、高潮。只有确定了故事的起因，考生才能合理推断这个起因会导致的可能结果；只有确定了故事的转折，考生才能合理地将故事发展下去。不过，在设计情节时，同样要考虑六要素，将它们串联成一句话，再将这句话添砖加瓦变成段落。在语言方面，注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切，合理使用高分词汇、短语及句型；不要抄原文，情节合情合理；书写美观，保持卷面整洁。【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了高级句子When listening to the story, Jenny was totally abnt-minded, withher hands holding the necklace tightly and firmly.使用了状语从句的省略，和with复合结构；Holding theplastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box.使用了非谓语动词做状语；Much toJenny’s amazement, a beautiful real pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box, which t her heart racing.使用了which引导的定语从句。这些为文章增色不少，而且全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 We moved on into the jungle-- a forest where large numbers of tall trees and plants grow very clotogether. Old Mali went in front and I followed clo behind him. We stopped for the night about an hour beforeit began to get Mali lit a fire. When it was bight he showed me how to make a bed with moss（青苔，苔藓）.It was soft and comfortable.―Mali, how did you learn to make such a bed? I asked.

―I learned to make beds like that, Mali replied, ―by watching and listening to others. That is the realway to learn anything.―Will you let me watch you always? I asked Old Mali. ―I want to learn all the things you know aboutthe we had finished our supper, Old Mali got onto his bed and lay down. It was now completely dark. Inthe fire light, Old Mali emed to be fast asleep on his bed. I suddenly felt alone and day in the jungle, while we had been walking, I had heard nois of animals. Now they emed to bemuch nearer. The jungle was now a wall of blackness in the light of the fire.I felt frightened and suddenly my mouth went dry. I wanted to scream. I felt my mouth opening wide, readyto scream as loud as I did not scream. I saw Old Mali’s face in the firelight. This made me feel ashamed. I held my teethtightly together to stop mylf from screaming. I lay down and clod my soon as I clod my eyes. I heard a thousand nois. The whole jungle became alive with animalsmoving quietly and carefully all around me. Suddenly Old Mali took a deep breath and made a noi. I washearing so many imaginary noi and the real noi made by Old Mali gave me a terrible fright.I opened my eyes and jumped out of bed. I pulled my knife out and held it above my head.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:I was going to e if there was a wild animal beside the fire.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:Old Mali’s quiet calm voice made me feel better.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Paragraph 1:I was going to e if there was a wild animal beside the fire. Through the burning fire, I believed I saw itssharp teeth and cruel red eyes. Its craws would inrt into my flash without mercy as soon as I came into itssight. I couldn’t help trembling and screaming loudly at the thought of it. Then a soft voice came from the dark,“Are you Okey?” It was Old Mali who was now lying on his side with his eyes wide aph 2:Old Mali’s quiet calm voice made me feel better. Adjusting breath quickly and obrving carefully, I foundthe “animal” was just the shade of trees. I laughed in relief and told Old Mali what had happened just known the whole story, Mali gave me an understanding smile and told me his former experiences injungle. With the stories, I got back to my bed and lay down. Exhausted, I clod my eyes, and knowing OldMali was watching, I soon fell fast asleep. That night was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memoryforever.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。【详解】通读短文可知，作者跟随着Old Mali进入了丛林。夜色降临，吃完晚饭作者和 Old Mali各自休息，但作者一闭上眼睛就听到各种动物的声音，续写由此展开。第一段以“我去看看火边有没有野兽”开始，所以接下来要叙述作者所误认为的“野兽”以及当时作者的心理活动。这是Old Mali已经醒来，问作者“还好吗”。第二段以“Old Mali平静的声音让作者感觉好多了。”所以要接着写Old Mali告诉了作者所谓的“野兽”就是树的影子，并与作者讲起了以前的丛林经历，作者听了这些故事，很快入睡，那晚是作者最难忘的经历。【点睛】本篇范文层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色。使用高级句型有：…if there was a wild animal beside the fire和assoon as I came into its sight使用了状语从句；It was Old Mali who was now lying on his side with his eyeswide open.使用了强调句型和with复合结构：Adjusting breath quickly and obrving carefully, I found the“animal” was just the shade of trees.和Having known the whole story,…使用了非谓语从句；…what had

happened just now使用了宾语从句；Exhausted, I clod my eyes, and knowing Old Mali was watching,…使用了形容词作伴随状语和非谓语动词结构；That night was so unforgettable that it would stay in mymemory forever.使用了so…that…引导的结果状语从句。

4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。At Dana’s yard sale, Tim cho a baball from the toys spread on the card table and asked about the told him everything was a quarter except Nezumi, a cotton toy rat. It was grey with some cotton stickingout from the hole where an ear had been torn off.“Nezumi is extra special, so he is ten dollars. He needs a safe new home.” Dana sighed. Tim laughedsaying he didn’t have ten dollars. Dana laughed too and gave Nezumi to Tim as a free gift becau he was herfriend. When Tim whispered it was sort of old, Dana said old toys were the best. She then invited Tim to herbirthday party the next evening, adding that her parents were giving her a real rat for her birthday. Tim wasamazed and asked if it was a live rat.“Of cour.” Dana home, Tim’s mother showed him the gift she had bought for Dana. It was a knitting spool(针织线轴)shaped like a mushroom. Mom said Dana could knit a scarf for her doll. Tim sighed that Dana wasn’t a knittingkind of person but a rat kind of person. Mom laughed after knowing what had happened. Together they drove tothe pet store, where Tim arched and arched and lected a clear plastic ball, one in which the rat could runaround on the floor safe from cats and dogs. Tim thought of Nezumi’s ear and decided Dana’s new rat wouldneed this next day, Dana brought cupcakes to class. When she handed a cupcake to Tim, she asked if Timbrought Nezumi to school as Nezumi liked to ride in backpacks. Tim was at a loss becau Nezumi was athome on his bed. Then Dana asked what gift he was giving her. Tim replied it was a surpri. In silence they satfor a while before he heard Dana say her parents were giving her a new bike for her birthday instead of a liverat becau they thought rats would bite things.注意:1. 所续写的短文词数应为 150 左右;2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:At home that afternoon, Tim stared at the plastic rat ball.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:All of a sudden, he had an idea.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Paragraph 1:At home that afternoon, Tim stared at the plastic rat ball. Wondering about the u of the clear plastic ball ifDana had no rat, he started walking up and down the room with a frown on his face. Mom was surprid andasked him what was happening. Tim told her Dana wasn’t getting a live rat from her parents but a bike. As theywere racking their brains (绞脑汁) to come up with an appropriate gift, Tim turn around and saw Nezumi on aph 2:All of a sudden, he had an idea. He lifted Nezumi and squeezing Nezumi into the plastic ball with greatcaution so that Nezumi would be safe from cats and dogs. Seeing this, Mom asked Tim whether he was givingDana an old cotton rat with one ear as a gift, Tim nodded with a smile saying she would definitely like g at Mom’s confud expression, Tim added that Dana was a Nezumi kind of person who thought oldtoys were the BEST.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，Tim从Dana的庭院旧货出售会得到了有一只耳朵被扯掉了的玩具老鼠Nezumi，Tim很喜欢。Dana的生日快到了，Tim去商店里为Dana喜欢的老鼠买了一个透明的塑料球，可

以让它在里面跑，不会被猫和狗咬伤。第二天Tim听到Dana说她的父母给她的生日礼物是一辆新自行车，而不是一只活老鼠，因为他们认为老鼠会咬东西。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：那天下午在家里，Tim盯着塑料老鼠球。所以后文应该是讲述Tim得知Dana不会受到老鼠作为生日礼物后的心理活动，他觉得买的这个塑料老鼠球没有用了，于是他皱着眉头开始在房间里走来走去。妈妈很惊讶，问他发生了什么事。Tim告诉她Dana从她父母那里得到的不是一只活老鼠，而是一辆自行车。当他们绞尽脑汁想出合适的礼物时，Tim转过身，看见Nezumi躺在床上；第二段开头是：突然，他有了一个主意。本段应该写Tim为Dana准备生日礼物的过程，Tim要送Dana一只长着一只耳朵的老鼠。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：walk up and down, not…but…, with greatcaution等高级词汇；Wondering about the u of the clear plastic ball if Dana had no rat, he started walking upand down the room with a frown on his face.非谓语动词的运用和if引导的条件状语从句；Seeing this, Momasked Tim whether he was giving Dana an old cotton rat with one ear as a gift, Tim nodded with a smile sayingshe would definitely like it.运用了whether引导的宾语从句等高级句式。

5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Freddie woke up to e it was snowing-again. The world outside was white. Snow covered the roads, thecars, the hous, and even the driveway Freddie had just shoveled the day before.“Ugh,” said Freddie. “No more snow!” He got out of bed and headed to the bathroom for his regularmorning shower. As he reached for the taps, his mother appeared in the doorway.“I’ve got news,” she said. “There’s been so much snow overnight that the roads are slippery and dangerous.I just heard on the radio that they canceled the school bus for the day.”Freddie groaned. “Then how am I suppod to get to school?”His mom grinned. “I guess you don’t. It’s a snow day!”Freddie’s eyes lit up. He’d never had a snow day off from school before. What would he do first?“I’m going back to bed!” Freddie headed back to his room and climbed under the covers. After a fewminutes, he realized that it was too late. He was already wide awake. He headed down to the kitchen and thensat at the table, watching his father fry the eggs over in the pan and his mother pour juice and coffee. It wasrelaxing, thought Freddie.

After breakfast his mother suggested he go out and build a snowman. Freddie wasn’t too sure. He didn’treally like the cold and the snow. He’d rather stay inside and play video games.“You can play afterward, but how about going outside for a little bit? It’s good to get some fresh air, andwho knows, you might even enjoy yourlf.” Freddie unwillingly put on the warm clothes and headed ng alone in the front yard, with the cold wind blowing, was not Freddie’s idea of a good g his mom meant what she said, the boy sighed, thinking the quicker he completed his snowman, thefaster he could go back inside to his video games. He t to work packing up some snow into a large s later, he saw one of his friends appearing from his hou up the street. Dion waddledout in hisbig snow trours and heavy overcoat. He waved to Freddie.“Hey there! I saw you out here and thought you might want company. Snow days are awesome!” Dionlaughed.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:Freddie was surprid but happy to e his classmate.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his hou.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Paragraph 1:

Freddie was surprid but happy to e his classmate. “Yeah, sure. Help me make this snowman, wouldyou?” Dion nodded, and they got to work, building the snowman a solid ba and lifting a heavy snowball ontop of it. Dion found some stones for buttons, and Freddie stuck a couple of broken branches into the body tomake arms. Finally, the snowman was finishes! Then, they both had a good time. Suddenly, Dion said, “Hey, Iknow what we can do next!” He told Freddie his idea and Freddie aph 2:Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his hou. Seeing snow full of Freddie’s face and coat, hismother couldn’t help laughing. “Are you ready to come in?” she asked. “Not yet, mom.” Freddie said. Stillexcited, he asked his mother if he could go to the park with Dion and go sledding down the hill. KnowingFreddie would rather enjoy himlf outside, his mother agreed without hesitation. “Snow day are the best”Freddie yelled as he ran off to play with his friend.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。【详解】前文主要讲的是主人公Freddie很懊恼下雪天，因为他可能又要为了保持道路畅通继续出去铲雪。不过，在得知学校由于连日积雪而停课时，Freddie激动不已，心想着终于可以宅在家里打游戏了。但是，妈妈坚持建议他出门去堆个雪人，呼吸下新鲜空气。Freddie不情愿地来到院子，堆了个大雪球，同学Dion突然出现，兴奋地想要成为Freddie的同伴，同时表示喜欢雪天带来的快乐。在给的第一段开头“Freddie was surprid but happy to e his classmate.”中“happy”一词可以想象两人一起成功地堆了雪人的而快乐场景；同时第二段开头“Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into hishou.”中“excitedly”和“delighted”也呈现了Freddie的情感及态度变化。而“idea”一词可以推测两人在堆完雪人后有了进一步的想法，而这个想法也一定和户外玩雪所带来的快乐相关。【高分句型一】As Dion found some stones for buttons, Freddie stuck a couple of broken branches into the body to makearms. 当Dion找了一些石头做纽扣时，Freddie就把几根断了的树枝插进身体里做胳膊。运用时间状语从句。【高分句型二】His mother agreed without hesitation becau she knew Freddie enjoyed himlf outside. 他的母亲毫不犹豫地同意了，因为她知道Freddie在外面玩得很开心。运用原因状语从句。

6．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Through our lives, we can gain a lot and lo so much. But being honest should always be with us, ashonesty is always regarded as a virtue. Every time I talk about the topic, something crowds in my mind as if ithad just happened.I was 16 when one morning, Dad told me I could drive him to Mijas and then take the car in a nearbygarage to get it rviced. At that time, I had just pasd the driving test, and I hardly had a chance to u the car,so I said yes without hesitation.I drove my father to Mijas, promising to pick him up again at 4 pm, then I went to anearby garage, and put the car in there. Since I had veral hours to spare, I decided to go to a movietheater near the garage to e the movie. However, I was so absorbed in the plot of the movie that I forgot thetime. When the last movie finished, I looked at my watch：6 pm. I was two hours late!I thought my father would be very angry if he knew what I was doing. And he would never let me driveagain. So I decided to make up an excu. Then, I drove to the appointed place, my father was sitting in acorner, waiting patiently. I first apologized for being late, then told him that I wanted to get there as soon aspossible, but that something was wrong with some of the main parts of the car.I would never forget the way he looked at me. “I'm very disappointed that you thought you had to lie to me,Jason.” My father looked at me again and said, “When you didn't show up on time, I called the gas station andasked if there was anything wrong They told me you never picked up the car. So, you e, I know there'snothing wrong with the car at all."注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was thereal reason why I was late.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph 2:But father, it's exactly eighteen miles home from here , and it's dark. You can't walk back. " I begged.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考答案】Paragraph 1:A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was thereal reason why I was late. Dad listened carefully as a sadness pasd through him，“I'm angry, not with youbut with mylf. You e. I realize that I have failed as a father if after all the years you feel that you have tolie to me. I have failed becau I have brought up a son who cannot even tell the truth to his own father. I'mgoing to walk home now and think where I have gone wrong all the years”.Paragraph 2:But father, it's exactly eighteen miles home from here, and it's dark. You can't walk back. " I begged. Myprotests, my apologies and the rest of my words were uless. I had let my father down. and I was about to learnone of the most painful lessons of my life. Dad began walking along the dusty roads. I quickly jumped in thecar and followed behind. I apologized all the way,telling him how sorry I was, but he simply ignored me. For 18miles he kept walking. Seeing my father in so much pain was the most awful experience that I have r it was also the most successful lesson.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者驾车去接他的父亲，但是他因为去看电影而耽误了时间后，他谎称去修车了，最后谎言被拆穿了，这使得父亲非常生气。【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：一股负疚感席卷了我，我不得不承认我去看电影了，这才是我迟到的真正原因……，所以应该写父亲对此的反应是什么以及父亲的情感此时影视什么样的。第二段

开头是：可是，爸爸，那儿离这儿正好十八英里，而且天又黑。你不能走回去。我恳求。本段应该写父亲对我这么做的反应是什么以及我的心里活动是什么以及我从这件事情当中得到了什么经验教训。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：protest，apologies，ignore等高级词汇；非谓语动词 I apologized all the way,telling him how sorry I was, but he simply ignored me，Dad listenedcarefully as a sadness pasd through him. as引导的状语从句，I realize that I have failed as a father if after allthe years you feel that you have to lie to 引导的宾语从句。

7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。A gift of goldIt was the winter of 1937, just after Christmas. The Depression was still going on, but I was in good spirits.I was going to graduate from elementary school, but my mother still dresd me in shorts. Most of myclassmates had given up wearing shorts. For the graduation ceremony, all the boys were expected to wear whiteshirts and dark blue wool pants.I waited until a week before I told my mother. On a cold Monday afternoon I went home from school.“Mom,” I said, “”“Yes?” she answered.“They are going to give me the first-prize medal,” I working over the stove, she looked over her shoulder at me and smiled broadly. “That’s wonderful,Babe. Dad and I will be both there, and we’ll be the proudest.”She must have en by the look on my face that something was wrong. She turned her back and said, “So?”“So, I have to get long pants,” I said.“Babe, we don’t have money for new pants right now,” she said.“Okay,” I burst out.“Then I won’t go to graduation. Plus, I’m running away from home!”“If I were you, I wouldn’t pack my bags. We’ll solve the problem of pants somehow,” she following Saturday, when my mother said “Let’s go shopping”, I knew that she had solved theproblem. Then we left home. We took the trolley (有轨电车) and got off at Southern Boulevard, the bestshopping street. The clothing store was just a couple of blocks first we walked a short way down the Boulevard and stopped at a place I had never noticed before.

“Wait here,” she said. Then she entered a storefront that looked like a bank and opened the door with thehand with a gold wedding ring on her ring went out about ten minutes later with a pur in her left hand, and then we went to the pants store. Icho a pair of pants. After a patient bargain with the ller, my mother bought it at the price of three dollarsand fifty cents and handed it to me.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:I was holding the pants tightly under my arm when my mother went to pay the money.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:We took the trolley back home.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Paragraph 1:I was holding the pants tightly under my arm when my mother went to pay the money. As soon as I turnedaround, I saw her take a sum of money out of her pure in her left hand. I didn’t know where my mom got allthis money from. Finally she handed this money for the pants to the ller, who immediately gave my motherthe fifty cents change. Mom smiled at me and said, “Let’s go back, honey.”Paragraph 2:We took the trolley back home. And the trolley was crowded with many people, so my mother and I werestanding together all the time. However, I even imagined walking up to the stage in my new pants to receive my

medal, and I couldn’t help laughing. When we got home, my mother took out the key and wanted to open thedoor. And at that moment, I noticed that the gold wedding ring on her ring finger my mother had always wornwas missing. Perhaps it was mother who sold it, and I felt sad, lost in thought.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，1937年的冬天，作者即将参加小学毕业典礼，他告诉母亲他需要一条裤子参加毕业典礼，但当时作者的家里买不起一条新裤子。作者的母亲告诉作者会想办法解决。有一天，作者和母亲坐有轨电车来到了商业街，作者的母亲先进入了一家看起来像银行的店铺，之后花了三美元五十美分给作者买了一条裤子。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当我妈妈去付钱的时候，我把裤子紧紧地抱在怀里。所以应该写我抱着新裤子，看着母亲去付钱，当我看到母亲拿出钱的时候，我心中疑惑：母亲的钱是从哪来的。最后母亲付完款喊我回家。第二段开头是：我们乘坐电车回家了。本段应该写我和母亲在拥挤的电车上，但我却想到我穿着新裤子去领奖，这让我忍不住笑出声来。当我们到家，母亲去开门的时候，我注意到一直戴在母亲手上的金戒指不见了。我猜到母亲把它卖了，我感到很难过并陷入了沉思。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，情节生动，内容完整，符合题目要求。范文中使用的一些词汇和句型值得我们学习。高级词汇/短语，如：As soon as，immediately，be crowded with，couldn’t help doing，lost inthought等高级词汇；非限制性定语从句Finally she handed this money for the pants to the ller, whoimmediately gave my mother the fifty cents change.强调句型Perhaps it was mother who sold it, and I felt sad,lost in thought.。

8．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。It was a Saturday afternoon. The color of the sky was changing, first light gray, then dark gray, and finallydark and den. The wind was blowing heavily, and the trees were swaying in the strong wind. It began to raincats and dogs. Soon, the road was filled with puddles from the such a stormy afternoon, my mother took my five year old brother, Christopher, and me to a new big toystore she had read about in the newspaper. “So many toys，” the advertiment had shouted in full and flashy

color, “that we had to get a huge warehou to fit them all！”Christopher and I couldn't have been more excited. We ran across the parking lot, through the cold andbiting rain, as fast as our little legs could carry us. We left our mother outside to battle with the frustratingumbrella, which never worked when she wanted it to. “Christine! Take care of your young brother！” Mothershouted at the top of her voice.“Christine! I'm going to find the Lego ction (乐高积木区)! There's a new pirate ship I want, and I havefour dollars! Maybe I can buy it！” Christopher exclaimed and ran off excitedly. I only half heard him. I took aright turn and, to my wide eyed delight, found mylf in the midst of the Barbie (芭比) World.I was studying a Barbie and doing some simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap ofthunder roared from the storm outside. I jumped at the noi, dropping the doll to the floor. The lights flickered(闪烁) once and died, covering everything in a blanket of blackness. Thunder continued to shake the sky andlightning illuminated the store for conds, casting frightening shadows on my mind.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1：“Oh no，” I thought, “Where's Christopher？”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2：“Christine, I'm here.”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Paragraph 1：

“Oh no，” I thought, “Where's Christopher？” Scared and frozen on the spot, I felt the need to e, hug mybrother and make sure he was all right. My stomach twisted. I ran up and down the aisles in the dark, panicfilling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe. I knocked into displays of candies and tripped overtoys, while calling my brother's name like crazy. Anxious as I was, I could not find him. Tears of frustration andfear trickled down my face, but I continued to aph 2：“Christine, I'm here.” Excitement took my breath away — there in the Lego aisle I found Christopher. Hewas standing alone, perfectly still, next to the pirate ship t. I began to cry in relief, throwing my arms aroundhim and hugged him tightly. He hugged me back, saying, “I knew if I waited here, Christine, you would be ableto find me.” Then, I took his hand in mine and we went to look for our mother, who must be desperatelyarching the store for us.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。【详解】续写短文需要先理清所给短文内容，掌握文章脉络，可以先逐段总结大意：第一段：交代时间和天气背景，周六下午，大雨滂沱。第二段：交代人物和事件，作者的母亲带她和五岁的弟弟去一家玩具店。第三段：兴奋的姐弟俩先于母亲之前冲进了商店，母亲在后面大喊让作者照顾好弟弟。第四段：弟弟跑去了乐高积木区，作者还没来得及赶上去就被芭比娃娃给吸引住了。第五段：沉迷于芭比娃娃的作者被外面的闪电吓到了，让她想起可怕的事情。根据各段大意可知，这是一篇记叙文，已经将主干部分交代清楚，接下来应该按照故事的脉络继续发展下去，续写的第一段开头为：“噢不，”我想到，“Christopher哪儿去了？”也就是作者发现自己的弟弟不见了故事产生了悬念，所以该段的续写可以考虑从作者心情焦急、四处寻找弟弟这一方面去描写，其中可以参照原文的风格，加入一些细节描写和心理描写，制造悬念越紧张越好；而续写的第二段开头为：“Christine，我在这儿呢。”相当于是悬念后的一个反转，作者的弟弟并没有丢，所以该段的续写可以考虑从作者心情上的转变以及找到弟弟后两人的行动上去展开。