2022-2-15金太阳百校联考读后续写之不要以貌取人讲义2022届高考英语复习

2024年3月10日发(作者：鸽子会)

2022-2-15

金太阳百校联考之不要以貌取人

一、理解文章，设计情节（情节不用过于复杂）

（10-12

句）

Para 1 The

man just smiled and started to tell the truth.（那人只是笑了

笑,

开始 说出真相。）

事实上，那个人只是想把钱包还给那个女士。

1. 他解释说当那位女士进入她的车时，她不知不觉把钱包掉在街上了。（进一步 细节解

释）他刚好停车在附近，目睹了发生的一切。（进一步细节解释）

2. 所以他开始开车去追那位女士。（进一步细节解释）他归还钱包，那位女士确认钱包

没有东西丢失。激动和感恩，她向那个男子 鞠了一躬并拿出100美元递给他。

3. 然而，这个男子早已离开。

Para 2 Then, Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman.（然后,ill 姆陷入

了沉思，接着开始和那位女士交谈。）

Sam告诉她，虽然这个人长得不帅，但是他有一颗金了般的心。此外，告诫她

不应该以貌取人。

4. 听了这些话，那位女士为自己的行为感到尴尬内疚。

5. 幸运的是，她意识到自己的错误，并感激Sam和那个男人。

6. 通过这次经历，这位女士得到经验教训：当看到一些奇怪的东西，不要随意作 出判

断直到找到真相。

二、

列举续写常用

13

大句式：

（重温上一次的读后续写）句式1

：

With +复合结

构”又称为“with结构”

Unicom它看起来筋疲力尽，因为它受了重伤，左前腿流血不止。

It looked exhausted becau it was riously injured with its left front leg bleeding badly.

句式2 :并列谓语，细化动作When the announcer said "Next up is the girls' 100-

meter hurdles", Jodie took a deep breath and walked to the starting line slowly.

当播音员说“接下来是女子 100 米栏” 时，朱辿深吸一口气，慢慢地走到起跑线上。

句式3 :句子+inWed或ing/ed+句子用于表示动作伴随，原因或结果那是因为浓雾笼罩了

森林，几乎覆盖了一切。他们可以看到前面的地方，慢慢地 走着O

That is becau the thick fog blanketed the forest, covering almost evervlhin』They could not

e the place ahead end walked slowly.

他们松了一口气，激动开心K手告别。（with短语，句子，Ving表伴随）They

breathed a sigh of relief with excitement and delight, waning goodbye to it.

句式4巧用生动的无灵主语:

Al this moment, with the moonlight fading ,the whole forest woke up and winds sang

welcome to the dawn.这时，随着月光渐渐褪去fade,整个森林都醒了，风 在唱着欢迎黎明

dawn的歌。

句式5 :情感形容词+句子Tired and worried, they were always fixing their eyes

on their surroundings.他『J 又 累又担心，总是盯着周围的环境。

句式6

：

巧用时间状语，表达情节After what emed like a century, Eric heard

another voice. It was Slide Mountain

Rescue who finally came!好像经历了一个世纪之后，埃里克听到了另一个声音。 终于来

了，是雪山救援队！

句式 7

：・

“一 就 ”的表达法：as soon as, , the

moment/minute/cond/instant, immediately/instantly/directly, on/—

听到吼声，他们喜出望外，一边大喊Unicom, 一边冲过去。（一...就...）

On hearing lhat, they were oveijoved and rushed over while shouting , “Look! Unicom!,,句式8

：

巧用“某人想到”：

At the thought of the fact that she didn't have lucky spikes, she felt more anxious with her heart

beating fast and her feet sweating.—想到自己没有幸运的钉子，她就更加 焦虑，心跳加速，

脚出汗。

句式9 : 主句，which 从句（定语从句）他们别无选择，只能弯腰寻找血迹或脚印等线索，

这让他们走得更慢。

They had no choice but to bend down to arch for clues like blood splashes or foot prints,

which made them walk more slowly.

句式1（）

：

描写气氛或者氛围的句子。（情感词+fill+地点）Worry and anxiety

filled the air.空气中弥漫着忧虑和焦虑。

句式11

：

关于情感句子的积累：（表达情感的形容词+动作具体描写），用so.

・・

thatUnicom很顺从，并安静下来，终于，血止住了。（so...）

Unicom was so obedient and quiet that finally the bleeding stopped.

1. 兴奋:I was so excited/thrillcd that I gave a jump in the air.我劫得跳 了起来开心:I was so

happy/cheerful that I jumped up and down,我高兴得上跑下跳

2. 感动：I was so moved that I failed to say a word.我感动得一句话也说不出来悲伤:I was

so sad that I hid my face in my hands 我难受得用手捂住了脸。

3. （生气）1 was so angry that I failed to say a word 我气得一句话也说不出。

4. （害怕） I was so scared/frightened that my palms sweated and my heart pounded. 我害怕

得手心汗,心怦怦直跳。

5. （羞愧）I was so ashamed that I could feel my face burning.我羞愧得感觉自己的 脸

在燃烧。

句式12

：

副词修饰动词或句子

幸运的是，需要的东西都在急救箱里。David温柔安抚Unicom,而Harry立刻 熟练地动

手术。

Forlunately, everything they needed was available in the first aid zently comforted

Unicom while Harry was conducting an operation on it immediately and skillfully.

句式13

：

倒装或强调经过David和Harry的及时抢救，Unicom能够站起来，然后离开

了。

It was becau of David and Harry's timely rescue that Unicom was able to stand up and

walked away.

呼应主题常用句式

直到…才....

⑴倒装句：not until+时间状语did sb realize that+主题从句

（2）强调句:it was only then that sb realized that+主题从句

还记得某人的话， 某人

One's words echoed/ rang out in one's ears that+主题

的话还在脑海中

三、巧用句式，写好句子Para 1 The man just smiled and

started to tell the truth. （另K人只是笑了笑，开始 说出真

相。）

1. 事实上，那个人只是想把钱包还给那个女士。

2. 句式6

：

巧用时间状语，表达情节，句式12

：

副词修饰动词或句子他解释说当那位

女士进入她的车时，她不知不觉把钱包掉在街上了。

3. 句式7

：

.“一……就……”的表达法：

他刚好停车在附近，一停好车就目睹了发生的一切。

4. as a result所以他开始开车去追那位女士。

5. 句式5 :情感形容词+句子；句式2 ：并列谓语，细化动作他归还钱包，那位女士确

认钱包没有东西丢失。激动和感恩，她向那个男子鞠了 一躬并•拿出100美元递给他。

6. 句式6

：

巧用时间状语，表达情节然而，这个男子早己离开。

Para 2 Then, Sam was lost in thought and be^an to talk with the woman.（然后，山 姆陷

入了沉思，接着开始和那位女士交谈。）状语从句省略

虽然这个人长得不帅，但是他有一颗金子般的心。此外，告诫她不应该以貌取人.

2.句式3 :句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子用于表示动作伴随，原因或结果听了这些话，那位

女士为自己的行为感到尴尬内疚

3. Fortunately,...;句式2 :并列谓语，细化动作

幸运的是，她意识到自己的错误，并感激Sam和那个男人。

4.句式13

：

倒装或强调（倒装句）主题要符合社会主义核心价值观 通过这次

经历，这位女士得到经验教训：当看到一些奇怪的东西，不要随意作出 判断直到找到真

相。

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答案

Para 1 The man just smiled and started to tell the truth. （那人只是笑了笑， 开 始说出

真相。）事实上，那个人只是想把钱包还给那个女士。

As a matter of fact, the man just wanted to return the pur to the woman.

1. （时间状语）

他解释说当那位女士进入她的车时，她不知不觉把钱包掉在街上了。

He explained that when the woman got into her car, she dropped the pur on the street

unconsciously.

2. （―就）

他刚好停车在附近，一停好车就目睹了发生的一切。

He happened to park nearby and hardly had he parked the car when he witnesd what

happened.

3. as a result

所以他开始开车去追那位女士。

As a result, he started to drive his car to cha the woman.

4. 动作链（A,BandC）, 2个形容词+句子

他归还钱包，那位女士确认钱包没有东西丢失。激动和感恩，她向那个男子鞠了

一躬并拿出100美元递给他。

He returned the pur and the woman confirmed that nothing was d and

grateful, she bowed to the man, took out 10（） dollars and handed it to him.

5. 用时间状语从句before

然而，这个男子早已离开。However, the man had already left before she knew it.

Para 2 Then, Sam was lost in thought and becan to talk with the woman.（然后

，

山姆陷

入了沉思，接着开始和那位女士交谈。）状语从句省略

Sam告诉她，虽然这个人长得不帅，但是他有一颗金子般的心。此外，告诫她不 应该以

貌取人.

Sam told her that although not handsome, the man had a heart of gold. In addition, he taught

her not to judge people by their appearance.

1. hearing, + 句子听了这些话，那位女士为自己的行为感到尴尬内疚

Hearing the words, the woman felt embarrasd and guilty about her actions.

2. Fortunately,...

幸运的是，她意识到自己的错误，并感激Sam和那个男人。

Fortunately, she realized her mistake and thanked Sam and the man.

3. （倒装句，强调句）主题要符合社会主义核心价值观通过这次经历，这位

女士得到经验教训：当看到一些奇怪的东西，不要随意作出 判断直到找到真相。

Through this experience, the woman learned a lesson: when you e something strange, not

until you figure out the truth do you make any judgment.