老师作文之英语作文李华对老师的意见和建议

2023年12月28日发(作者：思前想后的意思)

老师作文之英语作文李华对老师的意见和建议

英语作文李华对老师的意见和建议

【篇一：中考英语提建议类作文】

1. 询问学习外语的建议

假设你叫李华，你的英国笔友linda为了来中国参观而报名参加了汉语培训班学习汉语。她最近写信向你询问学习外语的建议。请根据下列提示和你学习英语的体会给linda写一封回信。

注意：1．回信需要包括全部要点； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3．字数80左右。

參考范文：dear linda，

im very glad that youll come to china . i know it isnt easy to

learn a foreign language, but i have some ideas that may help.

firstly, its very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class

and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later.

condly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in

and out of class. dont be afraid of making mistakes. then try to

listen and read more in chine. whats more, youd better plan

your time well and study it regularly every day.

above all, you should be confident in yourlf and dont give

up whenever you meet with difficulty. im sure you will succeed

through your hard work.

best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in china.

yours,

li hua

2. 对考试作弊现象的建议

目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。

原因：1.考试太滥 2.自身勤奋不够 3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上 4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴

看法与建议：1、作弊有害；2、要做人诚实，学习发奋；3、学校应减少考试。

要求：1、字数80-100；2、围绕要点可适当发挥；3、文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。參考范文：at prent, a number of middle

school students have picked up a bad habit - cheating in

examinations.

there are three main reasons. first, schools have given

students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. cond,

some students are not hard-working and they dont work hard at

their lessons. third, they waste a lot of time playing games or

surfing the internet. so they havent enough time to prepare for

the exams. finally, students have to do so

to make their teachers and parents happy.

in my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our

study. we students should be honest and diligent, and only in this

way can we improve our study and make progress. besides, our

teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for

ourlves.

3. 对学习提出建议

假如你叫zhang fang，是美国中学生lucy的笔友，你收到了她的电子邮件。在邮件中她表达了不喜欢英语和历史科目，因为要记的

东西太多又乏味，上课经常想睡觉，考试也考不好，期末考试就要

来了，不知道该怎么办。针对她的困惑，谈谈你的看法，同时提出

一些建议，并表达对她的祝愿。

dear lucy，

i?m very happy to hear from you. don?t worry too much.

many students have the same problem

like you. i think it?s very common for students to dislike

memorizing. here?s my advice. but in fact english and history are

not as boring as you think. if you try the following things，you

may find they are interesting and you will not feel sleepy in class

again.

first you had better learn the new lessons by yourlf and

write down the difficult points before lessons. it can make you

become interested in what the teachers say in class. cond you

should listen carefully and try to answer the teachers? questions.

it can help you understand better and memorize more quickly.

what?s more， you also need to review the lessons regularly after

class. if you still feel unhappy， you can have a talk with your

teacher to ask for help. i really hope my advice can help you out

and get ?a? in english and history exams. keep trying， i believe

you will enjoy the school life and make great progress with your

study.

yours，

zhang fang

4. 对生活提出建议

假如你是韩梅，你的笔友alice 给你发来的e-mail，邮件中告诉你，最近妈妈总是对她说过马路要小心，要多穿衣服，在学校表现得好

不好，这些都让她很苦恼。给她写一封回信。与她交流看法，并帮

她排忧解难。

提示词语：listen to， mother?s love， care about，communicate with， get along with， smile dear alice，

as a teenager， i met the same problem as you. but now i

can get on/ along better with my mother. here are some ideas for

you.

your mother talks much， becau she cares about you. i?m

sure your mum loves you very much. maybe it shows your

mother?s love. so i think you should listen to her. if your opinions

are different from your mother?s， you can communicate with

her， and tell her what you?re thinking about. if your mother

doesn?t take your advice， just keep

silent and give her a smile.

i hope what i say here can help you a lot.

han mei

5. 对怎样缓解学习压力放松自己提出建议

中考即将来临，学生们学习时间长、压力大，专家建议学生每天课

后应采取适当的方式放松自己。为此，不同的同学有不同的放松方式，有的爱看电视，有的听音乐，有的做运动…请你谈谈你通过哪

些方式放松自己并说说原因，谈谈你的感受。

提示词语：relax， tv， music， think

the nior high school entrance examination is coming. in

order to make a success in the exam i think it?s high time for

us to relax a little. or we?ll be too nervous to work well in the

order to relax ourlves， we can turn to some of our

hobbies， different students have different ways --- some

watch tv，some listen to music… but for me i enjoy taking

exerci most. whenever i feel tired， i always spend an hour （in）

walking or jogging in the park. besides， i also play

table tennis with my friends after class. in my opinion，

taking exerci can not only rest our brains and eyes but also help

build our bodies. i think it?s really helpful to both my health

and my study. i hope all of my classmates can join me in

getting relaxed. i wish you all every success in the coming

examination！

6. 对不爱锻炼的同学提出建议

假如你叫李飞，是学校“校园英语报”的编辑。你收到你同学张丽的姐姐的来信。姐姐在信中说张丽在业余时间看电视看书，不喜欢锻炼，希望你能写信给张丽告诉她锻炼的重要性并提一些建议。请根

据这位姐姐的要求，给张丽写一封回信。

dear zhang li，

your sister is worried about you very much. becau you

don?t take any exerci in spare time. i think health is very

important to us teenagers. either study or work is bad on

strong body. doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and

energetic. if we don?t take any exerci， we may feel tired and

get sick easily. so you should go out instead of staying at home.

there are many kinds of sports you can do， such as running，swimming and ball games. just remember “exerci one hour a

day，keep illness away.”

good luck！

yours，

li fei

【篇二：英语作文建议信】

建议信（一）

假定你是李华, 你的朋友张柯发e-mail给你, 就买什么样的英语词典想听听你的建议。请根据下列提示, 用英语给他回一封120个词左右的e-mail, 推荐他买电子词典。

1. 方便、快捷;

2. 内置多部词典、能发音;

3. 能储存资料;

4. 其他……

建议信（二）

假设你是李华, 请根据以下要点写一封信, 劝说全校同学过低碳生活(live a low-carbon life)。

1. 陈述理由: 为什么要过低碳生活? (环境质量日益恶化等)

2. 如何过低碳生活? 提出至少三条建议。(必要时才开灯; 让电器按节能方式运转; 骑自行车; 限制塑料袋使用; 垃圾分类等)

【篇三：英语老师最喜欢的八类英语作文句型】

阅卷老师最喜欢的八类英语作文句型

积累一些段落句型，摆脱平铺直叙，对英语写作可以起到事半功倍的效果。关键是要有意识的把这些句型用到作文中去哦~，并且同学们需要记住这条真理：practice makes perfect.（熟能生巧）

一.开头句型

far as ...is/am/are concerned 就……而言例如：就我而言 as

far as i am concerned

can be said with 可以肯定地说......

the proverb says，... 正如谚语所说的，......

has to be 必须注意到......

generally 普遍认为......

likely that ... 这可能是因为......

这是很难的......

no denying the 毫无疑问，无可否认......

g is more important than the 没有什么比......更重要。

far more important 更重要的是…...

二.衔接句型

1.a ca in point is ... 一个典型的例子是......

the problem is not so simple. therefore，... 然而问题并非如此简单，所以……

its a 但遗憾的是…...

spite of the 尽管......

r, we hold the 此外，我们坚持认为，......

6..however , the difficulty 然而，困难在于…...

，我们要注意......

it has been 正如上面所提到的…

this respect,... 从这个角度上,......

r, 然而, ...…

三.结尾句型

1.i will conclude 最后我要说…...

ore, we have the reason to 因此，我们有理由相信…...

things considered= in a word=in conclusion 总而言之

may be safely 它可以有把握地说......

ore, in my opinion,... 因此，在我看来，......

what has been discusd above, we may safely draw

the 通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论...…

data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that…

通过数据我们得到的结论是，....

can be concluded from the 从讨论中我们可以得出......的结论

my point of view, it would be 在我看来，如果……也许更好

四.举例句型

is one more example.这里有不止一个例子.

… for example. 就拿……为例子

五.常用于引言段的句型

people think that… 有些人认为…...

be frank, i can not agree with their opinion for the

reasons below. 坦率地说，我不能同意他们的意见，理由如下。

3. i believe the statement is valid becau… 我认为这个论点是正确的，因为…...

4. i cannot entirely agree with the 我无法完全同意….这一观点的说法.

5. along with the development of…, more 随着……的发展，越来越多的...…

is commonly/generally/widely/ believed

/held/accepted/recognized that… 通常认为…...

7. as far as i am concerned, i completely agree with the

former/ the latter. 就我而言，我完全同意前者/后者的观点。

六表示比较和对比的常用句型

1. a is completely different from b. a和b完全不同。

2 the difference between a and b is/ a和b不同的地方是......

七演绎法常用的句型

1. there are veral reasons for…, but in general, they come

down to three major ones. 对于......有几个原因，但一般，可以归结为三个主要原因。

2. many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the

following ones may be most effective.有很多方法可以解决这个问题，但下面的可能是最有效的。

3. generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.一般来说，这些优势可以列举如下。

reasons are as follows. 理由如下。

八因果推理法常用句型

e/since we read the book, we have learned a lot. 由于

阅读这本书，我们已经学到了很多。

2. we read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence /

conquently / for this reason / becau of this, weve learned a

lot. 由于阅读这本书，我们已经学到了很多。

3. as a result of /becau of/due to/owing to reading the

book, weve learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书，我们已经学到了很多。

满分作文词组奉送

1.经济的快速发展 the rapid development of economy

2.人民生活水平的显著提高/ 稳步增长the remarkable

improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard

3.先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology

4.面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and

challenges

5.人们普遍认为it is commonly believed/ recognized that…

6.社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social

development

7.引起了广泛的公众关注 arou wide public concern/ draw

public attention

8.不可否认it is undeniable that…/ there is no denying that…

9.热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion/ debate

10. 有争议性的问题 a controversial issue

11.完全不同的观点 a totally different argument

12.一些人…而另外一些人… some people… while others…

13. 就我而言/ 就个人而言 as far as i am concerned, / personally,

14.就…达到绝对的一致reach an absolute connsus on…

15.有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons

16.双方的论点 argument on both sides

17.发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role

in…

18.对…必不可少be indispensable to …

19.正如谚语所说 as the proverb goes:

20.…也不例外…be no exception

21.对…产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects

on…

22.利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the

disadvantages。

23.导致，引起 lead to/ give ri to/ contribute to/ result in

24.复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon

25.责任感 / 成就感 n of responsibility/ n of

achievement

26. 竞争与合作精神 n of competition and cooperation

27. 开阔眼界widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision

28.学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills

29.经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden

30.考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/

consideration

31. 从另一个角度 from another perspective

32.做出共同努力 make joint efforts

33. 对…有益be beneficial / conducive to…

34.为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society

35.打下坚实的基础lay a solid foundation for…

36.综合素质 comprehensive quality

37.无可非议 blameless / beyond reproach

39.致力于/ 投身于be committed / devoted to…

40. 应当承认 admittedly,

41.不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty

42. 满足需求satisfy/ meet the needs of…

43.可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information

44.宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources

45.因特网 the internet (一定要有冠词，字母i 大写)

46.方便快捷 convenient and efficient

47.在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life

48.环保(的) environmental protection / environmentally

friendly

49.社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress

50.科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science

and technology

51.对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards

this issue

52.支持前/后种观点的人 people / tho in favor of the former/

latter opinion

53.有/ 提供如下理由/ 证据 have/ provide the following

reasons/ evidence

54.在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree / in some way

55. 理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice

56. …必然趋势an irresistible trend of…

57.日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social

competition

58.眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest

59.长远利益. interest in the long run

60.…有其自身的优缺点… has its me rits and demerits/

advantages and disadvantages

61.扬长避短exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions

and avoid unfavorable ones

62.取其精髓，取其糟粕 take the esnce and discard the dregs。

63.对…有害 do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to

64.交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/

information

65.跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep

abreast with the latest development of …

66.采取有效措施来… take effective measures to do sth

67.…的健康发展the healthy development of …

68.有利有弊 every coin has its two sides./no garden without

weeds.

69.对…观点因人而异views on …vary from person to person.

70.重视attach great importance to…

71.社会地位 social status

72.把时间和精力放在…上focus time and energy on…

73.扩大知识面expand one’s scope of knowledge

74.身心两方面 both physically and mentally

75.有直接/间接关系be directly / indirectly related to…

76. 提出折中提议 t forth a compromi proposal

77. 可以取代“think”的词 believe, claim, maintain, argue,

insist, hold the opinion/ belief that

78.缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relieve stress/ burden

79.优先考虑/发展… give (top) priority to sth.

80.与…比较compared with…/ in comparison with

81. 相反 in contrast / on the contrary.

82.代替 replace/ substitute / take the place of

83.经不起推敲 cannot bear clor analysis / cannot hold water

84.提供就业机会 offer job opportunities

85. 社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress

86.毫无疑问undoubtedly, / there is no doubt that…

87.增进相互了解 enhance/ promote mutual understanding

88.充分利用 make full u of / take advantage of

89．承受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure

90．保障社会的稳定和繁荣 guarantee the stability and

prosperity of our society

91．更多地强调put more emphasis on…

92．适应社会发展 adapt onelf to the development of

society 93．实现梦想realize one’s dream/ make one’s dream

come true

94. 主要理由列举如下 the main reasons are listed as follows:

95. 首先 first， firstly， in the first place, to begin with

96．其次 cond, condly, in the cond place

97. 再次 besidesin addition, additionally, moreover,

furthermore

98. 最后 finally, last but not the least, above all, lastly,

99. 总而言之 all in all, to sum up, in summary, in a word,

100．我们还有很长的路要走 we still have a long way to go.

实战演练假定你是李华，你的英国朋友peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据要点写封回信。要点：1. 参加中文学习班 2.

看中文书刊、电视 3. 学唱中文歌曲 4. 交中国朋友

注意：1. 词数100左右 2. 可适当增加细节 3.开头语已为你写好【写作指导】信件类型：建议信内容：写信人就某事或某问题提出建议主体时态：一般现在时

正文部分：必须给对方问题明确答复；建议的内容要层次清楚，目的明确，具有合理性和说服力；语言要正确、清晰、礼貌、体贴，

易于对方接受。

【范文】

dear peter,

i’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how

to learn chine well.

i have following suggestions. first, it is important to take a

chine cours e, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and

practice with your fellow students. what’s more, it also helps to

watch tv and read books, newspapers and magazines in chine

whenever possible. the last but not the least, it would be more

beneficial if you could learn and sing chine songs, becau by

doing so you’ll learn and remember chine words more easily.

you can also make more chine friends，who will tell you a lot

about china and help you learn with efforts can you

learn it well. i believe you can make it .try and write me in chine

next time.

best wishes,

li hua