20-21版:Writing—An essay about a story(步步高)

2023年12月24日发(作者：归纳总结)

Writing—An essay about a story

写作指导

本单元的写作任务是根据本单元的故事写一篇短评。写作时需要注意以下几点：

1．简要介绍故事发生的时间、地点、人物；事件发生的起因、经过、结果；

2．对故事中的人物进行评论；

3．最后阐述你对这个故事的感受并解释你的感受。

常用表达

1．Once upon a time，there was a．..

2．Unfortunately，they were stuck

3．They were very brave in

4．They never gave

5．Later，they managed

6．From this story，we

7．All of us were moved by the

8．We should learn something from

请根据下面的提示写一篇短评。词数80左右。

1．欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们一起登上了名字为“坚忍”号的大船。途中“坚忍”号被冰山困住了，大家弃船后逃到了大象岛。沙克尔顿驾船去寻求帮助。最后，尽管困难重重船员们还是活了下来。

2．在这个故事里面船员之间真诚的关心和爱以及他们在困难面前的忍耐力和毅力也使我深受鼓舞。

3．从这个故事中我学到一个教训：无论遇到任何困难，都不要放弃！

审题

写作要求是根据本单元的故事写一篇短评。写作时应注意下面几点：

1．确定文体：这是一篇短评，写作中应注意短评的常规格式。

2．主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。

3．主体人称：由于是写一篇短评，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。

谋篇

第一段：介绍背景。

第二段：简要介绍这个故事。

第三段：表达自己对这个故事的感受。

核心词汇

1．上船 go aboard

2．在途中on the way

3．被……困住be/become stuck in

4．沉入sink into

5．放弃，抛弃abandon

6．逃跑escape

连词成句

1．欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们登上了名字为“坚忍”号的大船。(aboard；Endurance)

Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship who name was Endurance.

2．不幸的是，途中“坚忍”号被冰块困住，沉进了大洋中。(unfortunately；be/become stuck

in；sink into)

Unfortunately，on the way Endurance became stuck in the ice and sank into the ocean.

3．在放弃那艘船后，他们逃到了大象岛上。(abandon；escape)

After they had abandoned the ship，they escaped to Elephant Island.

句式升级

1．用非谓语动词改写句1。

Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named Endurance.

2．用非谓语动词改写句2。

Unfortunately，on the way Endurance became stuck in the ice，sinking into the ocean.

3．用非谓语动词改写句3。

Having abandoned the ship，they escaped to Elephant Island.

用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。

参考范文

This story is about a great expedition in history.

Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named unately，on the

way Endurance became stuck in the ice，sinking into the abandoned the ship，they

escaped to Elephant eton left them to find crew were able to survive in

spite of so many difficulties.

I was deeply moved by the concern and love between them and I’m also inspired by their

endurance and perverance in face of a word，I have learned an important lesson

from the inspiring is，whatever difficulties we meet，never give up.