四级真题范文(3套看图作文)

2013年6月英语四级写作分析以及例文(3套看图作文)

第一套

The importance of doing small things

before undertaking something big

对白

子：Dad, I'm a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste（处理核废料）

父：If you can empty the dustbin（垃圾筒） here, you can do anything

范文：

We can e from the illustration there is a father talking to his son. Having heard his son’s words

“Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapons”, the father replies, “If you can

empty the dustbin here, you can do anything”, pointing the garbage can beside him.

Funny and common as the conversation sounds, father intends to advi his

son to do small things before undertaking the big. With out any doubt, doing small things is the

first step of success and will lay root for doing something big. By doing something small, we are

enabled to accumulate experience, master skills and train ourlves to be more patient. In other

word, we can be well prepared for further challenges in the cour of fulfilling small things. By

contrast, tho who t out to do something big will be constantly haunted by disappointment,

frustrations or even failures. As when opportunity “something big” appears, they can hardly ize

them becau of the lack of experience and confidence stems from doing small things. Taking the

picture prented above as a ca in point, how can the little boy succeed in disposing of nuclear

weapons if he even doesn’t know how to empty the dustbin?

From my perspective, under no circumstances should we undervalue the power of doing small

things. Instead, we should regard small things as the source of experience, skills and the

prerequisite of success. “Great achievement only belongs to tho who can do small things

perfectly.” Aristotle once said.

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第一部分：考试分析

一：形式

1. 有图片，图片要点为：一对父子就一个问题展开讨论；

2，英文提示：a 简要描述图片；b 给出有关于主题“the importance of doing small things before

undertaking something big”的观点

二．写作应对

1. 简要描述图片：

简要描述，即，描述图中主题，并引出相关的主题即可，使用描述句式如下：

A：简单型

As we can e from the picture，there are two persons, debating about the importance of doing

small things before undertaking something big, who are a father and his son.

B：复杂型

As is vividly depicted in the picture, two men ，who are a father and his son，are talking about

what should be done firstly，the small thing or the big ones. Simple as it is, what the picture

conveys to us is thought-provoking.

2. 判断写作类型：

题干中有明显的两种观点，即先做小事，或者大事，只不过，出题人要求学生写的是关于先

做小事的重要的意义，故可以使用两种观点对立的“观点分型”写作模板带入如下：

第一段：说明现象 第二段：观点讨论 第三段：观点总结

3. 主题

该主题，可以被分为三个部分，即：

A：the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big

B：doing small things

C: doing something big

以上三个内容在每段中确保出现1-2次，该作文便不跑题。

第二部分：例文写作与模板对比

第一段：描述图片+说明现象

As we can e from the picture，there are two persons, debating about the importance of doing

small things before undertaking something big, who are a father and his son. Recently, the issue of

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the importance of doing small things has aroud wide concern among the public. Especially the

young generation living in the big cities, they tend to do the big ones firstly, paying no attention to

the fact that this behavior may po underlying threat to their precious life and may even endanger

others.

（原有模板）

Nowadays/recently, the phenomenon/ issue of …… has arou wide concern among the public.

Especially the young generation living in the big cities/metropolis, they tend to do sth,

ignoring/paying no attention to the fact that this behavior may po underlying threat to their

precious life and may even endanger others.

第二段：观点讨论

Does anyone claim the same attitude towards this issue? Definitely not，actually, opinions vary

from person to person. Some maintain that the doing some big is beneficial to students. However,

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To my way of thinkingFrom my perspective, The problem mentioned above will bound to

generate vere conquences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it.

Measures should be adopted before things get wor. What we should do is to encourage the

merits and diminish the demerits to the least extent. It is high time that all of us ,parents，

educators，and the authorities, make combined efforts to put an end to this situation. We should

appeal to the relevant administration departments to strengthen supervision over. With the

measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the

near future

总结：

改作文中，第二段落内容容易较为单薄，故建议同学们将原模板的第三段内容中，我的观点

写到第二段的结尾处，已调整三段之间比例。

The picture shows us a dialogue between a father and a son. The son told his father, “Dad, I’m a

bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste”. While his father told him, “If you can empty the

dustbin here you can do anything”. It reveals the importance of doing small things well before

undertaking something big. There is also an old Chine saying to go with this that a person can’t

sweep the world before he can sweep his own room.

I agree on the point that it is of great importance for a person to do small things well before

undertaking something big. First of all, doing small things well entail the qualities that needed in

doing great things such as patience and ability of controlling time. For example, when we sweep

our room, we need to manage our time and energy reasonably. Accordingly, if we sweep a bigger

room, for example, a classroom with our classmates, we should learn how to cooperate and allot

assignments as well. And a big advantage is that we can draw uful lessons from the failure of

performing well becau they didn’t cost a lot.

In another word, though the things em trivial, they reinforce our manipulative ability and thus

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can empty the dustbin, you can do anything. (如果你能把垃圾桶倒掉，你就能坐好任何事情)” ，

说话间，手指着垃圾桶。

这幅图画和2012年6月的六级漫画作文非常相似，当时的图中，也是两人对话，女儿和父

亲。父亲问女儿：“ Hi, sweetie, how was your school today ? (嘿，小甜心，你在今天在学校过

得怎么样？)” 女儿非常冷漠的回答：“Dad, you can read all about it on my blogs. (爹哋，你自

己可以在我的博客上读到所有内容)”，然后呢，女儿拔腿出门，留下父亲一脸惊愕。

作文的第一段，要进行简单描绘图画内容，这是必须的，也是题目中强制要求的（a brief

description of the picture）。描述的时候，只要把父子两的对话移植到第一段，然后把父亲手

指垃圾桶的动作描绘一下就可以了，非常简单。

作文的第二段，进行主旨提炼并且论述。这幅图画很容易看出主题，那就是做大事之前，

要先做小事（一屋不扫，何以扫天下）,而且题目中其实早就已经透露了主题了 （express your

views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big.）因此，第二段

通篇论述小事做起的重要性就可以了。属于我在课堂上讲过的作文三大分类之“积极主题，

论述意义”

作文第三段，总结，启发。这一段再次强调小事做起的意义，我们不能低估他的威力。文章

最后可以以名人名言作为结尾。

请看范文：

We can see from the illustration there is a father talking to his son. Having heard his son’s words

“Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapons”, the father replies, “If you can

empty the dustbin here, you can do anything”, pointing the garbage can beside him.

Funny and common as the conversation sounds, it reflects that the father intends to advi his son

to do small things before undertaking the big. Unquestionably, doing small things is the first step

of success and will lay root for doing something big. By doing something small, we are enabled to

accumulate experience, master skills and train ourlves to be more patient. In other words, we

can be well prepared for further challenges in the cour of fulfilling small things. By contrast,

tho who t out to do something big will be constantly haunted by disappointment, frustrations

or even failures. As when opportunity “something big” appears, they can hardly ize them

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becau of the lack of experience and confidence stems from doing small things. Taking the

picture prented above as a ca in point, how can the little boy succeed in disposing of nuclear

weapons if he even doesn’t know how to empty the dustbin?

From my perspective, under no circumstances should we undervalue the power of doing small

things. Instead, we should regard small things as the source of experience, skills and the

prerequisite of success. “Great achievement only belongs to tho who can do small things

perfectly.” Aristotle once said.

如果是图画作文，一，不要忘记描绘图画的内容；二，提炼出图画里面的主旨，要么积极

的向上的好事，需要我们领悟和执行；要么是消极的负面的坏事，需要我们理性分析看待，

最后给出一些看法建议。不难，别怕。主题，如果是正面文章，可以关注下 taking actions （采

取行动的意义）the consciousness of innovation ( 创新意识) 等等；

如果是图表作文，一、第一段描绘图表内容，不难；二，提炼主旨和论述，这个和图画作

文一样。三，提出个人观点，预测图表趋势，友善建议提醒都可以。

如果是引语作文，关键是要看出引语内含的主旨，并进行论述就可以。

The importance of doing small things

From the carton, we can clearly e that the boy is worried about disposing of nuclear waste, while

his father tells him to empty the dustbin first. This carton reminds me of a Chine saying: If you

don't clean the room(solve your problems), then how can you control the world. However, most

people always attach great importance to something big, but neglect small things.

In my opinion, it is necessary and important to do small things. On the one hand, doing small

things well helps us to develop good habits, which t a good foundation for our future

development. There is no doubt that one of the greatest differences between success and failure is

the importance placed on little things. On the other hand, the big is the little. If something needs to

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The Big is the Little

Nothing can be done except little by little, the French poet Baudelaire Charles once said. Most

people, however, often ignore such a truth. So does the little boy shown in the picture. He

express his worries to his father about disposing of nuclear waste, but is told that he can achieve

nothing if he doesn’t empty the dustbin first.

Every single little thing you can do today matters. The truth has been tested for ages, and

thousands of great people have t good examples for us. For instance, Leonardo da Vinci, the

world-renowned master in painting, starts his career with repeated egg-drawing. Lu Xun, the great

man of letters, reminded himlf to get up early by inscribing the character “morning” on his desk.

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第二套

The importance of reading literature

The drawing portrays a classroom scene in which a teacher is telling a student to read a piece of lit

erary works. Undoubtedly, the picture aims at highlighting the magnitude of reading classics for y

oung students, which is worth discussing among general public for the time being.

As we all know, the classical literature is the reprentation of the outstanding art of our nation.

Some familiar characters such as Monkey King express the good wishes of our common people.

There is no doubt that young people will benefit a lot from reading classics. For one thing, classics

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prerequisite of success. “Great achievement only belongs to tho who can do small things

perfectly.” Aristotle once said.

第三套

第一段 This picture shows that when teachers teach students basic skills students all think that

tho basic skills are of no importance.

第二段Having the basic life skills can help us to live in the society independently. If we

don't have any basic life skills , we lo the meaning of living in the world

第三段 Above all, we can e the importance of learning basic skills. Only if we learn the

things well in school, can we find a good job in the future. A journey of a thousand miles begins

with a single step.

The importance of learning basic skills

We can e that in this picture, a teacher is teaching her pupils to deal with arithmetic q

uestions, but some of them think that learning the mathematical skills is uless. They a

rgue that by the time they are in the job market, the skills will be outdated. As to whe

ther it is important to learn basic skills, people hold different views.

As far as I know, it is very important for one student to acquire basic skills. At first, ma

stering basic skills well can lay a solid foundation for learning advanced skills. Basic skill

s are a floor, not a ceiling. Students must learn them first so that they can move on to v

arious advanced skills. What’s more, learning basic skills helps to improve confidence and

enhance lf-esteem. Individuals with basic skills are likely to be more confident and acti

ve.

All in all, if we want to keep progressing, it is important to learn basic skills well. By

mastering basic skills and learning new things, we will have a bright future!

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