英语作文评分标准

普通高中毕业班综合测试英语作文评分标准

三、基础写作

7-8 具有很好的语言运用能力；语法和句

子结构准确性高，词汇方面使用较好，

只有少许错误。

5-6 具有较好的语言运用能力；语法和句

子结构准确性较好，有一些语法结构

或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。

语

3-4 语言运用能力一般；语法和句子结构

基本准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错

误不影响理解。

贯

连

言

1-2 语言运用能力较差；语法和句子结构

基本不够准确，语法结构或词汇方面

的错误较多，而且影响了对句子意义

的理解。

0 语言运用能力很差；语法、句子结构、

备注 每多或少写一个句子，扣1分。

5 包括了所有信息内容。

4 包括了大部分信息内容。

词汇错误很多，句子意义无法理解。

包括了基本信息内容。 3

包括了小部分信息内容。 2

包括了少许信息内容。 1

没有包括所提供的信息内容。 0

1.5 内容连贯性比较好，而且结构比较紧

1 内容连贯性较差，而且结构不够紧凑。

0 内容缺乏连贯性，而且结构松散。

备注 文不对题，给0分。

凑。

四、读写任务

1．分概括及写作两部分评分。前者占5分；后者占20分。

2．基本采用整体评分法。

3．没有写文章标题的扣1分。

项分值

目

按照要求概括了原文的全部主要信息，没

有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文

的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。

概

括

2

3

4

5

基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没

有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文

的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。

基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但

包含一些不相关的信息，有个别句子抄自

原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。

不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含

较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭。语言

结构不够准确，行文不够规范。

评分标准

0-1

没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本

是不相关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文。

语言结构不准确，行文不规范。

包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要

18-20

点。主题明确，内容丰富。

词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的

语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。

篇章结构的连贯性好。

包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要

关。

词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运

用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。

篇章结构的连贯性较好。

写

14-17

点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相

11-13 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要

作

点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者

不相关。

词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运

用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。

篇章结构的连贯性较好。

4-6 只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内

容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄

原文。

词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的

句子出现语法错误。

篇章结构的连贯性差。

1-3 只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单

词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。

词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎

没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。

0 以下几种情况，给0分：

1）完全抄袭原文（或其他文章）。

2）文不对题；

3）只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完

整的内容。

附录：2008年高考广东卷读写任务试题

第二节 读写任务 (共1小题,满分25分)

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短

文。

Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college.

The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment.1

went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher

and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I

needed to know some basic life skills. such as balancing a

check—book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to

handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really

tough for me at first and I got badly homesick.

Once that first mester was over and I got ud to the college

life, I loved it—good facilities, helpful instructors. and a good

library. The Students’ Union organizes various parties every

week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend

Saturday nights in pubs and clubs.

One thing I think is important is to get yourlf active in

things. I was on the dance team in college and met a ton of

people that way ••• it was so much easier to make friends when

you had a common ground.

[写作内容]

学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“大学

校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后，你准备写一份发言

稿，题目是“Preparing Mylf for College Life”，内容要点包

括：

1. 以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点；

2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括：

(1) 对中学生活的感受；

(2) 理想的大学生活；

(3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。

[写作要求]

1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以

参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

008年高考(广东卷)英语读写任务评分标准解读

广东卷高考英语读写任务主要考查考生的篇章概括和语言表

达能力，满分25分。今年读写任务的抽样平均分为11.32，比

去年略高。下面是2008年高考广东卷读写任务的考场评分标

准。

一、评分标准

在评分时，应注意以下几个方面：

1. 按照评分标准，实行分析综合法评分；

2. Mike的发言概括部分必须包括以下要点：

(1)Some basic life skills are necessary for a freshman to adjust

himlf to the college life.

(2)Mike loved college, which offers students good facilities and

rich activities.

(3)To Mike, the important thing is to get himlf active in

things.

3. 写作内容应该包括：

(1)对中学生活的感受，考生可以泛泛而谈，也可以谈具体的某

一方面；

(2)想象中的大学生活，内容可以包括理想的大学、进大学的心

情（如：兴奋、担心等）、理想的大学生活（包括校园环境、

学习环境、师生关系、社团活动等）等；

(3)概况中学生活与大学生活之间的差异，比如：大学生活更丰

富、更自由，或大学生活更富有挑战性、更需要独立性等等。

(4)给分时在通篇把握的基础上，考虑要点是否完整，语法是否

规范，句型是否多样，词汇是否丰富。

下面以15篇专家评分的考场作文为例，解读今年的评分标准。

[示例1]

At first Mike didn’t adjust himlf well to the college life

becau of the lack of basic life skills and homesick. However,

he got himlf active in things and gradually enjoyed his new

life.

It is obvious that high school life is quite different from

college life. We generally study the basic knowledge and

ldom work out a project by ourlves. Additionally, most of

us live with our parents and we aren’t independent enough to

live alone. High school life is simpler than college life.

However, college life is more challenges, Students not only

studying their own majors but also learn how to realize their

dreams. They meet more new friends and gradually go into the

real society.

I enjoy my high school life a lot, which provides me with

lots of uful skills and valuable experience. But I discover

that I still lack some important life skills, which requires me to

improve mylf. In order to adjust mylf to the coming

college life, I decide to gain more knowledge about the society

and life skills. I will try my best to become an independent and

mature college student.

All in all, I am looking forward to the new college life. I will

prepare mylf well and make improvement bit by bit.

专家给分：4＋20。

评析：该篇作文属于第一档。其概括部分能按照要求概括了原

文的主要信息。语言结构基本正确，行文基本规范。写作部分

包含题目所给全部内容要点，主题明确，内容丰富，词汇丰富，

用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且极少语法错误。

篇章结构的连贯性好。虽然写作部分有些许语法错误（其中

homesick应该用名词形式，即homesickness；college life is

more challenges应为challenging），但其篇章结构严格按照写

作内容分段写，较为直观，受到专家的青睐，给了20分的满

分。

[示例2]

According to what is mentioned that Mike shares his

experience in his years of college. After the hard adjustment,

专家给分：3+16

评析：该篇作文的概括部分基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信

息。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。写作部分包含题目所

给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或

者不相关。有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，

有少许的语法错误。

篇章结构的连贯性较好。

[示例3]

After hearing Mike’s speech, I know how different between

College life is so different from high school life. However, like

it or not , we should adjust it. we should ask teachers or

roommates for help.

专家给分：2+14

评析：此篇考场作文概括部分不能按照要求概括原文的主要信

息，包含较多不相关的信息。没有按要求概括Mike的发言要

点，用错人称。作文部分包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容

要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。有个别用

词错误。运用了一些合适的语言结构，有一些语法错误。

[示例4]

anything in fresh, is that right. So I feel the life in college is of

great comfort.

I think that we haven’t anybody take care of us and blame us

strictly in college as nior school. We should uncomfortable as

well adjustless. Otherwi, I believe that we must adjust it

through our hard work.

I think that I will practice do some houwork and take care of

mylf to prepare mylf for college life.

In my eyes, the college’s life should be full of rich and

colourful. As a college student, we only have class in

morning. and we should have much time to know by ourlves

and do our things. Such as we can go to libraried to read

books . we want to, do some activites in varies club. And we

should have many actives to make friend and learn some

social skills.

I think I will try my best my college’s life if college life has a

great difference to my sinor’ life. I am confident to adult it.

专家给分：2+10

评析：此篇考场作文概括部分不能按照要求概括原文的主要信

息，包含较多不相关的信息，语言结构不够准确，行文不够规

范。作文部分包包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，

clubs. But I should live in school without my parents and have

less time to care them.

When I study in college, I will study hard and more care about

my parents.

专家给分：2+6

I though, my middle school’s life is warmly. my parents

usually treave with me until grade 3. I usually plays football

with my father. I though it is my happy time.

I will go to university. I though my college unerity is may

make many friends. Do some works in common. Becau a

good team and have many good thing wait for me.

I know, middle school’s life and university life have difference.

But, I feel. I sure I can and I will a good unerity student. I

ready to my anything. I will have my college unverrity life.

评析：没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信

息。只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确。

词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇

章结构零乱。

[示例10]

But at the college I needed to know some basic life skills, such

as balancing a check-book. laundry, and the things you have to

be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school!

The Students’ Union organizes various parties every week.

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