专四改革

专四新题型写作

自2016年起，专四考试写作部分改革，要求根据所给的题目、

图表或阅读材料等，写一篇200词左右的作文。出现的新题型命题+

材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求。考生可以

采取“简短概述材料—评论—总结”的写作模式。值得注意的是，在

写作过程中，概述材料和进行评论缺一不可，否则将可能被扣分。

例题1

PARTVIWRITING

Readcarefullythefollowingexcerptandthenwrite

yourresponinNOLESSTHAN200WORDS,inwhich

youshould:

1)Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt,and

then

2)Commentonwhetherstudentslearnmorefrom

classthanfromotherresources

Youcansupportyourlfwithinformationfromthe

excerpt.

Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,content

sufficiency,e

tofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossof

marks.

Dostudentslearnmorefromclassthanfromother

resources?

WiththeadventoftheInternetandother

telecommunicationstechnologies,thereisavastly

growingwealthofresourcesavailablefromanimmen

tshavetheabilityto

absorbinformationinaquickerandmoreefficientway

whenrearchingontheirownthroughreading

ult,

somepeoplearguethatstudentsnowlearnmorefrom

otherresourcesthanfromclass.

Conductingrearchwithonlinematerialsisan

activeprocess,whichallowsyoungsterstofocusin

greaterdetailratherthanpassivelylisteningtoalecture

inalargeclassroom.

TheInternetandTVarealsoeasilyaccessible

platformsforstudentsintheremoteplaceswhere

teachingresourcesarenotasabundantasthoinmore

developedregions.

However,teachershavethecapabilityofexplaining

theknowledgeinadeeperwayandnotonlyprovide

theoreticalexplanationbutalsopracticalexperience

veaccumulatedalargebodyof

intelligencethatisprofoundlymoreprecithanother

rsnotonlyfunctionasinitiatorswho

impartknowledgebutalsorveassupervisorsor

ventionalroleofinstructors,inthis

dayandage,havolvedtobecomeevaluatorsand

facilitators,guidingstudentsintheiracademicand

personalefforts.

范文1

Intheinformationage,thetraditionalstudent-teacher

relationshiphasbeenaffecteddeeplyandpeoplebeginto

doubtwhetherstudentscanlearnmorefromclassthan

fromotherresources.（介绍背景）Accordingtothe

conventionalview,teachersarestilltheprimarysource

fromwhichstudentsobtainprofessionalknowledge,

timelyclassinteraction,andeffectivesupervisionfrom

teachers.（总结第一种观点）Onthecontrary,nowadays,

manypeoplebelievethatstudentscanlearnmorefrom

otherresourcessuchasInternetandTVsincetheyare

moreaccessibleandengagestudentsmoreactivelyin

rearch.（总结第二种观点）

Forme,Iaminfavorofthefirstview.（表明立场）

Teachersplayanirreplaceableroleineducation,whether

it’sinthepastoratprent,sincetheynotonlyimpart

knowledge,butalsoeducatepeople.（总论据）Forone

thing,whatstudentslearnfromtheirclassismore

precithanfromotherresourceswhichprovidean

enormousamountofdataneededtobesiftedthroughto

determinewhichinformationisaccurate.（理由一）For

another,teachersinschoolputtheshapingof

personalityinaplaceasimportantastheteachingof

knowledge,whichishardforstudentstoobtainfrom

otherresource.（理由二）

Inconclusion,thedevelopmentofcutting-edge

technologyexertsabigimpactonmoderneducation.

However,itcannevereliminatetheneedforhigh-quality

professionalsinclassroom.（重申论点）(213words)

例题2

PARTVIWRITING

Readcarefullythefollowingexcerptandthenwrite

yourresponinNOLESSTHAN200WORDS,inwhich

youshould:

1）Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt,andthen

2）Commentonwhetherpeopleshouldchootobecome

indoorsy

Youcansupportyourlfwithinformationfromthe

excerpt.

Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,content

sufficiency,e

tofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossof

marks.

Shouldpeoplechootobecomeindoorsyinmodern

world?

Inmoderntimeswhenwecanbuyeverythingwe

needontheInternet,andcommunicateandevenwork

throughtheInternet,becomingindoorsymenorwomen

ast,ifyou

wanttobuysomething,youneedtogooutofyourhou,

gotothestore,andspendanhourortwochoosingthe

youcanjustsitin

frontofacomputerandclickyourmou,andthe

ndoorsycansave

peoplealotoftime.

Beingindoorsycanallowpeopletothinkandwork

mple,writerscanbe

quitecreativewhentheyarealoneathomewithoutbeing

interrupted.

Somesociologistswarnthattheindoorsylifestyle

peoplestayathomeforalongtime,theywillhavelittle

notknowhow

tohaveface-to-facecommunicationwithothers,andthey

maybecomeshy,uncomfortable,orlf-centeredwhen

indoorsylifestylewillhaveabadeffectontheirnormal

interpersonalrelationshipandtheirnormalwork.

Indoorsymenorwomenspendmostoftheirtime

sittinginfrontofacomputer,andtheyldomattend

ngthecomputerscreenfora

,many

indoorsypeopledonotliketoattendsportsactivities,

andinthelongrun,theirhealthwillgetwor.

范文2

审题思路

本题讨论“宅”生活是否可取。在具体行文方面，考生应首先简

要概述正方观点：“宅”是现代的一种新型生活方式。然后概述反方

观点：“宅”有种种弊端。接下来给出自己的观点：现代科技是把双

刃剑，我们要把握好，适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利，但过度依

赖则会对身体有害。最后总结全文，重申观点。

ShouldWeEmbraceIndoorsyLifestyle?

Withtheglobalizationofmoderntechnology,

especiallytheworld-wideaccesstoInternetrvice,

people’slifestylehasbeengreatlyinfluenced.(介绍背景)

ldthatindoorsy

rast,tho

againsttheideaclaimthatkeepanindoorsylifestylewill

doharmtopeoplebothpsychologicallyandphysically.

（总结材料）

AsfarasIamconcerned,moderntechnologyisa

double-edgedsword.（点明观点）Ifweconsideritasa

ufultooltoimproveourlife,itwillcertainlybring

eassistanceof

theInternet,onecansavehistimethroughworking,

shopping,orcommunicatingwithothersathome.（正方

理由一）Also,solitudeisn’talwayqualtoloneliness.

Freefromoutsideinterruption,onecanbecreativeand

keephismindsharp.（正方理由二）Ontheotherhand,

toomuchrelianceonorindulgenceintheInternetwill

certainlyhaveanimpactonournormallifeandwork.

Forinstance,indulginginsocialnetworkonlinemay

corrodepeoples’ecific,theymay

feellostwhentalkingwithpeopleface-to-face,which

mayaffecttheirnormalrelationshipwithfamily

membersandfriends.（反方理由一）What’swor,

sittinginfrontofacomputeralldaylongmeanslittle

outdooractivities,whichmaydamageone’shealth.（反方

理由二）

Inconclusion,whileenjoyingallthebenefitsthe

virtualworldhasbroughttous,indoorsypeopleshould

alsostepoutoftheirhomeandengagethemlvesinthe

realworld.（总结上一段）(234words)