中考英语作文总复习题
1．Write at least 60 words on the topic "Sometimes troubles can also make us go forward"． （ 请以"有时候麻烦也能促使我们前进"为题，结合自己的亲身经历，写一段不少于60 字，中心突出、语言正确、叙述流畅的短文）（标点符号不计入字数）
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learn from on the other hand overcome
【分析】【高分句型一】
Poor academic performance is one of the biggest troubles．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语poor academic performance"学习成绩差"；短语one of the + 形容词的最高级+名词的复数形式．"最…的之一"，因此此句可翻译为"学习成绩差是麻烦的最大问题之一．"
【高分句型二】
In the face of trouble，On the one hand we should attach importance to it，on the other ha
nd we should try our best to solve it and overcome it．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语on the one hand …on the other hand …"一方面…另一方面…"，短语attach importance to sth "对某事重视"，短语 try one′s best to do sth "尽最大努力做某事"，此句可翻译为"麻烦面前，一方面我们应该重视它，另一方面我们应该尽最大努力解决它并战胜它．"
【解答】Sometimes troubles can also make us go forward
As a middle school student， you face a lot of pressure every day．Poor academic performance is one of the biggest troubles．（高分句型一）If we want to get good grades ， we should strive hard．So Sometimes troubles can also make us go forward．（要点一，点明要点．）I remember when I was in junior high school，I didn't do well in math．I was under a lot of pressure．There were many worries．I wanted to give up learning it for a while ．I felt it was a troublesome matter． Later， with the help of teachers and classmates ， I worked hard ． I made great progress in Englishmath．By the cond year of junior middle school， my math scores were among the best in the
classs．{要点二，通过亲身经历，阐明要点．} Through this matter， I realized that our classmates should learn from each other and help each other． In the face of trouble，On the one hand we should attach importance to it ，on the other hand we should try our best to solve it and overcome it ．（高分句型二）In a word，sometimes troubles can also make us go forward．（要点三，通过此事，我学到了很多知识，明白了一个道理，有时麻烦也能使我们前行）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
