2021届高考英语读后续写专题(一)

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2021高考英语读后续写专题(一)
一:典题技法指导
Once there was a slave named Androcles, who was so badly treated by his master that he resolved to run away from him. He therefore cretly left his master’s hou and hid himlf in a forest, some miles distant from the city.
After wandering about for some time, he came to a large cave, and overcome by hunger and tiredness, he lay down in it, and soon fell fast asleep.
He was suddenly awakened by the roar of a wild beast; a great lion stood right at the mouth of the cave. There was no way he could escape!
Androcles expected nothing el than to be at once torn to pieces, but to his great surpri, the lion came gently towards him, without showing any signs of anger. It gave forth a low and mournful (悲哀的)sound, as if it were begging for his assistance. As the lion approached him, he noticed that one of its feet was swollen.
He then went up to the lion, took hold of the wounded paw(爪子), and examined it as a surgeon would examine a patient. He was not long in finding out the cau of the swelling; for he saw in the ball of the foot a very large thorn (刺). The slave pulled out the thorn, and presd out of the wound a quantity of matter, which gave the lion immediate relief.
Then, the lion began to show his gratitude by every means in his power. He jumped about like a playful spaniel (西班牙猎犬), wagged his great tail, and licked the hands and feet of his physician. From that moment Androcles became his guest; the lion always shared his prey.
The slave continued to live like this for veral months. At length, wandering carelessly through the woods, he was ized by a company of soldiers who were nt by the master to arch for him.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 应使5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: He was ntenced to be torn by a lion in查看硬盘序列号 the public arena (竞技场).
Paragraph 2: However, the lion didn’t act as most had imagined.
二、写作思路
1. 确定主题:寓言讲的是奴隶与狮子的故事,奴隶帮助了狮子,狮子知恩图报(From that moment Androcles became his guest; the lion always shared his prey.),最后救了奴隶。故事告诉我们善有善报。
2. 时空变化:根据两句句首提示语,第一三年级下册班主任工作计划 段地点应该发生在角斗场,时间应该是即将与狮子角斗的时候。第二段在时间与空间上与第一段一致,时空变化不大。
3. 续写难点:很难确定故事寓意,可以是善有善报,也考虑过珍惜友谊。
、下水续写
Paragraph 1: He was ntenced to be torn by a lion in the public arena (竞技场).
1.The terrifying day finally arrived.
2. All the people in the city went there to e the brutal fight between the poor slave and a bloodthirsty beast.
3. When Androcles appeared in the arena, they began to cheer and hoot.
4. All eyes were on him, and time emed to stop.
5. Overcome by a stab of fear, he almost collapd to the ground, his heart pounding and his knees shaking.
6. And then came a furious roar and the great lion charged at him with its flaming eyes and gaping jaws.
7. Desperate and hopeless, the slave clod his eyes and dropped his sword, thinking that he was done for.
Paragraph 2: However, the lion didn’t act as most had imagined.
1. Much to their surpri, the savage beast stopped short , knelt down and then licked the slave’s hands and feet.
2. He behaved like a pet dog.
3. And then he let out a low roar, as if whispering to his friend, “Didn’t you recognize me?
4.Indeed, it was the very lion the slave had helped in the forest.
5. Sighing with relief, the slave stroked his neck gently, tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes.
6. So moved were people by the story that they begged the master to t free the slave a
nd the lion.
7. One good turn derves another, and in the end, Androcles, the slave, became a free man.
四:参考范文
Paragraph 1: He was ntenced to be torn by a lion in the public arena (竞技场). The terrifying day finally arrived. All the people in the city went there to e the brutal fight between the poor slave and a bloodthirsty beast. When Androcles appeared in the arena, they began to cheer and hoot. All eyes were on him, and time emed to stop. Overcome by a stab of fear, he almost collapd to the ground, his heart pounding and his knees shaking. And then came a furious roar and the great lion charged at 中国有几大盆地 him with its flaming eyes and gaping jaws. Desperate and hopeless, the slave clod his eyes and dropped his sword, thinking that he was done for.
Paragraph 2: However, the lion didn’t act as most had imagined. Much中国诗词大会观后感 to their surpri, t
he savage beast stopped short , knelt down and then licked the slave’s hands and feet. He behaved like a pet dog. And then he let out a low roar, as if whispering to his friend, “Didn’t you recognize me?” Indeed, it was the very lion the slave had helped in the forest. Sighing with relief, the slave stroked his neck gently, tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes. So moved were people by the story that they begged the master to t free the slave and the lion. One good turn derves another, and in the end, Androcles, the slave, became a free man.

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