A
【2019全国卷I】I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone’s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.
【答案】
1. interesting改为interested 2. where改为when
3. suddenly后面加a 4. but改为and
5. hardly改为hard 生蚝怎么吃
6. surprising改为surpri
7. player改为players 8. say改为saying
9. now改为then 10. my去掉
【解析】
1.考查形容词用法。“interest（使感兴趣；使关注）”的形容词有interesting（使人感兴趣的）常修饰物；与interested（表现出兴趣的）常修饰人。本句的意思为：多亏一个偶然的事件，我对踢足球产生了兴趣。主语是I，故将interesting改为interested。
2.考查定语从句。先行词one afternoon表示时间在定语从句中作状语，所以关系词使用when。故将where改为when。
3.考查冠词。名词football为可数名词，前边需要有限定词。这里football第一次出现，故在football前加a。
4.考查连词。句意：突然一个足球落在我前边并且差点打到我。“足球落下来”与“打到我”两个动作是顺承关系，不是转折关系。故将but改为and。
5.考查副词。“hard（努力地；费力地）”与“hardly（几乎不；几乎没有）”都为副词，但是词义不同。本句意思为：我挡住足球，并使劲地将它踢回操场。故将hardly改为hard。
6.考查固定搭配。“to one’s+名词”在句中表示结果，“to one’s surpri”意思为“使某人惊讶的是…”。故将surprising改为surpri。
7.考查名词的数。“player（运动员）”为可数名词，所以all（所有的）后需要用player的复数形式。故将player改为players。
8.考查现在分词。本句句意：操场上所有的足球运动员大声欢呼，说我有足球天赋。句中谓语动词为cheered，say在这里作伴随状语。与主语players是主动关系，故将say改为saying。
9.考查固定搭配。句意：从那时开始，我放学后跟同学一起踢足球。且“from now on（从现在开始）”后边句子应该表示从现在开始所发生的动作或存在的情况，不能用一般过去时。
此处后面是一般过去时，表示“从那时起”是from then on，故将now改为then。
10.考查固定搭配。“踢足球”的英语表达为“play football”，中间不能加冠词或者代词。故将my去掉。
B
【2019全国卷II】Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, who uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher becau I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered mg goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after eing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
【答案】
11. job改为jobs 12. coolly改为cool
13. five改为fifth 14. too改为very或so
15. high前面加in或at 16. or改为and
17. They改为There 挫折作文800字
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18. amazing改为amazed
19. more去掉 20. is改为was
【解析】这是一篇记叙文。作者讲述了从小到大自己的职业梦想随着求学经历不断改变的过程。
11.考查名词的数。“job（工作；职业）”为可数名词，用different（不同的）修饰时意思为不同种类的工作，应该用名词的复数形式。故将“job”改为“jobs”。
12.考查形容词的用法。句中的“looked（看起来…样）”为系动词，系动词后需用形容词作表语。故将coolly改为cool。
13.考查序数词。年级、班级是按数字顺序排列的，所以“在几年级”中的数词需要用序数词。故将five改为fifth。
14.考查副词。句意：在五年级的时候，因为我非常喜欢我的英语老师，所以我想变成一名老师。“so much”在句中一般表达肯定意思，可与that连用表示“如此…以至于”。而“too much”表太多，一般与to搭配，表达否定意思“太…以至于不能…”。本句话表达肯定意思，非常so much或very much，故将“too”改为 “very/so”。
15.考查介词。“在高中”需要用介词in或者at，故在“high school”前加“in/at”。
16.考查连词。句意：在高中学化学的时候，我重新考虑了自己的目标并决定变成一名医生。“重新考虑”与“决定变成一名医生”之间是顺承关系，不是选择关系。故将“or”改为“and”。
17.考查there be句型。句意：有两个原因可以解释这个决定。句中的they在前边句中找不到指代关系，且后边句子中的“one”与“the other”是对这两个原因的解释。故将 “they”改为“there”。
18.考查形容词用法。“amaze（使惊奇；使惊愕）”形容词形式有amazed（大为惊奇）与amazing（令人大为惊奇的）。本句话中主语为I，句意:病人看完医生就会感觉好很多，对此我感到惊奇，而不是我令别人惊奇。故将“amazing”改为“amazed”。
19.考查形容词比较级。句中better为well（健康；身体好）的比较级形式，多音节的形容词或副词构成比较级用more加形容词或副词，即“more”不能与 “better”连用。故将“more”去掉。
20.考查一般过去时。本篇文章使用的全是一般过去时，且与最后一句并列的“one was that…”用的也是一般过去时，所以最后一句话时态应为一般过去时。讲述当时做决定时的原因。故将“is”改为“was”。
A
【湖南省2019-2020学年高三上学期模拟检测】My parents and I visited my uncle in Seattle on last July. My favorite experience was our trip to Mount Rainer, an volcano near Seattle. Before we left, my uncle gave us hats to protect us from getting sunburned, I suppod that it will be very hot. When we drove up the mountain, I found the top covering with snow and ice! My uncle led me to a small path to increa our chances of eing wildlife. Suddenly there appeared a field that small wild flowers grew up through the snow. Little animal stood still; tiny birds ro highly into the air. It was the most beautiful sight that I’d never en.
【答案】
1. 去掉on 2. an改为a
3. I前面加so 4. will改成would
5. covering改成covered 6. me改成us
7. that改为where 8. animal改成animals
9. highly改成high 10. never改成ever
【解析】这是一篇记叙文，主要描述了去年七月，我和父母、叔叔一起去雷尼尔峰游玩的经历。
1.考查介词。去年七月是last July，不用介词。
2.考查冠词。volcano是以辅音开头的，所以用a泛指一个。
3.考查连词。前后表示因果关系，所以用so引导结果状语从句。
4.考查时态。本句是过去将来时，所以用would。
5.考查非谓语动词。top与cover之间是被动关系，所以用过去分词作补语。
6.考查代词。这里是指代的我的父母和我，所以用us。
7.考查定语从句。先行词是field，在定语从句中做状语，所以用where引导。
8.考查名词的数。这里是看到的所有小动物，所以应该用复数形式animals。
9.考查副词。high作为副词表示具体的高度，highly是抽象的高度，鸟飞的高度是具体的，所以用high。
10.考查副词。根据句意，这是我看过的最美的景色，所以用ever。
B
【山西省大同市第一中学2020届高三2月模拟】Recently I found a couple of donation box in my living community. People come to it when they have clothes they don’t wear. The donation box, I think, is of great uful. I have a lot of clothes which don’t fit for me any longer. I have no idea before about how to deal with the clothes that are real new and still in good condition. Now I know how to do next. I will donate them or help tho people in need. So I think the donation box is good idea that lights up our life and make the world a better place to live in.
