高考英语满分作文万能模板
marry me什么意思读后续写
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【题型分析与写作方法】
题型解析:
读后续写是写作的一种新题型,顾名思义就是我们在阅读一篇还未写完的文章之后,按照语段所给的开头写出两个语段(约150词),从而把这篇文章未写完的部分补充完整,使之浑然一体。
读后续写不仅要求考生准确使用词汇和语言框架,会合理润色语言,更重要的是,它还要求考生能够明白应该如何整理续写内容,以使得其形成和前文统一连贯的、能够表述完整信息的表达内容。
应该说,这种题型是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁,它不仅考查了考生在阅读文章的基础上分析文章逻辑的能力,又考查了考生的创造力、想象力,以及运用准确丰富的语言进行表达的能力。
引进英文解题方法:
下面是读后续写类作文的写作步骤:
1.读文
精读文章,确定文章线索。每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索,比如,是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索,这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜”完成续写。确定文章体裁和主要内容(话题)。注意文中的关键词,也就是故事中的时间、地点、人物和事件等信息。
2.审题
仔细审题,明确续写要求。一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制、续写段落的首句提示,这样考生才能做到“心中有数”。
3.谋段
在读文、审题的基础上,先仔细阅读续写部分所给出的两段段首文字,再构思这两段要写的段落大意。根据原文情节确定好段落大意,找出每一段的写作要点,然后再补充相关细节和常识,这两段加起来要能写出10到15个句子,以满足续写词数的要求。
4.初写
拟写草稿,修改错词病句。在确定了思路和内容之后,拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性及语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。写作时要注意,所用的人称和时态要与原材料一致。
5.定稿
完成初稿后,考生需先结合原材料中故事线索读一读自己续写的内容,既要确保所写内容没有与原材料相矛盾的地方,又要保证内容上前后连贯,语句通顺;然后润色续写部分,可使用高分单词或短语,运用各种从句、介词短语结构、非谓语动词等高级表达,合理添加过渡词;最后誉写文字,这个过程考生务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。
【万能模板之读后续写“八步走”】
1.情绪------情绪描写。从原材料中体会作者相应情绪,借助情绪的延续,以此为衔接,续写。
2.细节-----进一步描述。
3.转折----个人的努力或者借助外界的力量,使事情发生转折。
4.转机-----事情似乎有了转机,让人抱有希望,心理能感到安慰。
5.失望-ey---问题仍然没有解决或者又出现了新的问题。
6.想法----面对没有解决的问题或者新问题,突然有了想法或感触。
7.结局-----在想法或感触的影响下,事情有了最后的转折/转机。
8.点题-----呼应前文
understandable备注: 这八步不是固定的,考生可以根据自己的想法打乱部分顺序,也可以略写个别环节。此步骤,可让续写有话可说,让情节续写跌宕起伏,前提是要读懂原材料的中心,抓住文章脉络。
【模板范文】
前文提要:在我小的时候,我的家里有一个传统:在万圣节进行雕刻南瓜比赛。我很想赢得比赛,于是每年都选择一个很大的南瓜。有一年,我在雕刻南瓜的时候不小心把头卡在了南瓜里。
I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. My head span dizzily as if the 华尔街英语软件下载world swirled. At my wit's end, I felt a stab of fear. (“我”的情绪:慌张、无奈)“Don't panic! Papa, Papa, we need your help," Jason exclaimed. In time over came my father.(借助外界帮助)He embraced my neck and pulled back with strength while Jas
on pinned/presd down the pumpkin.(一系列动作描写)It didn't work, though. (问题未解决)“Why not tear the pumpkin directly?" suddenly rang out mother's voice. ( 新 想 法 ) In a split cond, a creak broke out overhead, followed by a ray of light, which I emingly hadn't en for ages. (问题得到解决)But what did I e? My mother was filming all the way. (衔接句)
That video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. To my surpri, soon my video was followed by a a of likes, my mailbox flooded with similar stories. (衔接句)My big red no and my sore chin became netizens' favorite topic. A little embarrasd as I was, a wave of warmth welled up inside. (细节描写之我的心情)Then a good idea flashed across my mind. (想法)“Isn't it a good idea to share stories online to choo the funniest? " I told Jason, jumping with joy.(做法,为结局做铺垫)“Amazing! Let's call it Pumpkin's Competition. "Jason giggled. (Jason的反应,照应开头)
【万能模板之高分素材】
【高分素材之单词和短语】
1.情绪描写&2.细节描写:
哭: howling(嚎哭), sob, weep, burst into tears, burst out crying. (one's eyes) brim with/be filled with tears
害怕: horror, frightened, 浙江英语scared, speechless, in(a)panic, in a cold sweat, be filled with terror, rooted to the spot, sb是什么freeze, one's knees feel weak, (hands)sweat
slogan goes here高兴、激动:(动词)dance, jump/leap with joy, feel a surge of joy/ excitement, whistle, overcome with happiness/ delight /joy /gradient excitement, (one's eyes) twinkle,(one's heart) beat/ pound wildly;
(形容词)delighted, overjoyed, excited, thrilled, wild with joy
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伤心、痛苦: feel a surge of sadness, (sadness) surge within sb. , one's heart ache, overcome with sadness
生气、愤怒:felt/ get angry/furious, feel a surge of anger/rage/fury, eyes blaze, storm out
of/into/off, storm/say angrily, sth. makes sb. 's blood boil, sth. makes sb. extremely angry, clasp one's fists/teeth, sb. 's blood is up
3.转折:个人努力或借助外界
鼓起勇气:pluck up/take/gather/summon up one's courage
毫不犹豫:without even thinking, without delay, without hesitation, without a cond thought
4.转机:事情似乎有了转机,并抱有希望,感到欣慰
似乎:as if, emingly, appear, em
欣慰:breath a sigh of relief, sigh with relief, to one's relief5.
5.失望:但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题:
徒劳 : in vain, no u, without success
茫然 : at a loss, at a, blankly, be lost in a fog
6.想法:突然有了一个想法(一句话说明这个想法)
occur to, hit, strike, flash into one's mind, crowd in one's mind, dawn on
7.结局:过段时间,事情有了最后的转折:
过了一段时间:not long, shortly afterwards, before long, for an instant/moment
令人惊讶的是 :to one's surpri, strangely enough
8.总结:点题,呼应前文
realize, echo, linger, whisper in one's mind, down deep in one's heart
【高分素材之句式】
★情绪描写&细节描写
哭:
1. A lump came to his throat.
2. Her eyes were red from crying.
3. Her eyes brimmed with tears.
4. Tears courd/trickled/streamed/ran down her cheeks.
害怕:
1. She was too frightened to tell her family what had happened.
2. His heart was pounding, as if he were frightened.
3. Liza was so frightened that she couldn't make a sound.
4. I bowed my head timidly and dared not look at my father's cloudy face.