读后续写:战胜恐惧--2022届高考英语专题备考

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玛丽娜是一个非常怕黑的女孩。一次偶然的机会,瓦莱丽阿姨决定告诉她一个小秘密, 这个秘密会对玛丽娜产生什么影响呢?
Marina was extremely afraid of the darkness. When the lights went out, everything and every shadow appeared to her as the most terrible monsters. Her parents explained to her every day with great patience that the things were not monsters. Marina understood her parents, but she could not stop feeling an awful fear whenever it was dark.
One day her aunt Valerie came to visit. Valerie was an incredible woman. She was famous for her courage, and had been to many journeys of adventure, some of which had been made into books and movies. Marina wanted to conquer her fear of the dark, so she asked her aunt how she became so brave, and whether she had ever been frightened.
the towersubstituted“A great many times, Marina,n answered her aunt. ul remember when I was young, I was terribly afraid of the dark. I couldn't stay in the dark for even a moment.5, Marina became very excited. How was it possible that someone so courageous could have been afraid of the dark?
"I'll tell you a cret, Marina. It was some blind children who taught me how to be brave. They can't e, so if they had never discovered the cret of how not to be afraid of the dark, they would have been forever frightened.
"It's true! said Marina. "Can you tell me that cret?
“Of cour! The cret is to change your eyes. Since blind children can't e, their hands are their eyes. Clo the eyes of your face and open the eyes of your hands like them. Lefs make a deal: Tonight, when you go to bed and put out the light, if anything makes you afraid, clo your eyes, carefully get out of bed, and u your hands to e what makes you scared. Tell me how you're getting on with the fear tomorrow.” Marina accepted. However, she was rather worried. When her parents took her to bed, she put out the light by herlf. After a little while, she felt afraid of one of the shadows in the bedroom again.
Reading check
阅读上面的短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
注意:
1bitch什么意思.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
scandal2.续写局部分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1
Following the advice of Aunt Valerie, she clod the eyes of her face and opened the eyes of her hands.
Paragraph 2:
The next morning, Marina came into the kitchen with a big smile on her face.
写作导引
一、语篇研读
I . Sort the elements
II.Analyze the characters' personalities
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III.Explore the theme
What is the text about?
二、语言学习
I . Analyze language features
1. which引导非限制性定语从句,which代替前面的先行器司journeys,整个从句起补充 说明的作用。
She was famous for her courage, and had been to many journeys of adventure, some of which had been made into books and movies. (Para. 2)
2.现在分词作伴随状语,与逻辑主语为主动关系。
Following the advice of Aunt Valerie, she clod the eyes of her face and opened the eyes of her hands.(续写开头句)
Il. Uful expressions
1.be afraid of 害怕
2.cannot stop doing sth不能停止做某事
3.be famous for 因而知名
4.put out the light 德西健身学校关灯
5.awful可怕的
edas6.courageous 勇敢的
7.mysterious 神秘的
8.be scared to death 被吓得要死
9.feel terrible 感觉害怕
10.can't help trembling 忍不住颤抖
11.be filled with horror 充满恐惧
12.summon up courage to do 鼓起勇气去做
三、情节构思
续写步骤
(一)文章主要讲述了玛丽娜害怕黑暗,向瓦莱丽阿姨寻求帮助的故事。听完瓦莱丽 阿姨的故事和建议,玛丽娜决定尝试挑战自己。瓦莱丽阿姨曾经也非常胆小,但她最终克 服了恐惧。按照这个线索去续写的话,玛丽娜是可以成功克服她之前的恐惧的。
(二)根据续写第一段的段首句,我们可设置以下问题链并进行推测:
1.How did Marina feel?
2.Was Marina still feeling frightened or did she become brave enough?vampire什么意思
3.What did Marina do to overcome fear?
(三)根据续写第二段的段首句,我们可设置以下问题链并进行推测:
1.Who would be in the kitchen?
杭州电脑培训2.What would Marina say to the people in the kitchen?
一、语篇研读
I . Sort the elements
I.narration 2. Aunt Valerie 3. was extremely afraid of 4. hands
II.Analyze the characters1 personalities
1. brave 2. patient 3. courage
III. Explore the theme
The text tells us a story about a girl who conquers her fear of the darkness by touching the things which terrify her by hands.
三、情节构思
Paragraph 1 :
Following the advice of Aunt Va-lerie, she clod the eyes of her face and opened the eyes of her hands. Determined to behave as her aunt told her, she was willing to clo her eyes and go to touch whatever it was that was frightening her. She thought to herlf: Will the shadow become a monster? ” As she went clor, she was trembling more violently. She was trying to cover herlf with the quilt, but her heart still beat quickly, as if it would jump out of her chest. It emed that the monster was approaching her. After sum-moning up all her courage, she went over to touch that mysterious shadow. It's her teddy bear! She cried.
Paragraph 2:
The next morning, Marina came into the kitchen with a big smile on her face. She couldn't wait to share her joy of ma-naging to overcome her fear of the darkness and express her
sincere grati-tude to her aunt Valerie. It was her cret that helped her out. She came up to her mom who was making breakfast with Aunt Valerie. ult*s feeling good to be not afraid of the darkness any more. Thanks, Mom and Aunt Valerie.
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