长感悟篇类的续写文章一般属于人与自我的主题语境
1. 2021.6浙江高考改
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and ud it to pay family expens.
I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker老师英文 and I thought that I would surpass (超过) anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.
Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone (长号).
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring chee什么意思farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we misd. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grass like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.
At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing upvague>barnet. I'm glad you will be contributing to the houhold." My dad's words made me landscape是什么意思realize精力充沛黑色裤子配什么颜色鞋子 that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
Para 1 When I returned home with my paycheck ---- it’s $119, my dad wanted to talk with
me.
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Para 2 I was surprid that he allowed me to u my money as I wished.
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Paragraph 1: When I brought my paycheck home—it was $119—my dad wanted to talk to me. ①零售业会计>寂静之声歌词Reluctantly following him into the room, I was overwhelmed/ consumed by a mixture of disappointment and sadness. I was sure he would ask me to contribute my income to the houhold. ②Smiling, my dad started, “I am proud that you have accomplished your first job, which is something worth celebrating.” What he said reminded me of the long hours of tiring work that I had done on the farm. I could hardly hold back my tears. ③He patted me gently on my shoulder and continued, “I know the world has moved on. You can contribute to our family in other ways. So keep the money or buy something you can u and will value.”
Paragraph 2: I was surprid that my dad allowed me to u the money as I wished. ①It was at the very moment that I got to realize my dad did understand my world and he had done something that his dad had never done for him. So moved was I that I hung/lowered my head, unable to utter even a single word. ②Looking up, I promid my
dad that I wouldn’t gmentationlet him down. I went to purcha gifts for everyone in my family, including one for mylf. Though they were not expensive, they reprented my love for my family. Then, I called the farmer to tell him that I would continue to work in his field.③ From that day on, I grew bigger and more real. By working hard, I learned to be responsible, contributing my fair share to my family.
2. 2022 济南十一校2月联考
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事
Let him learn the hard way
Paul was with me in the kitchen helping me out with the dishes. From his facial expression and his unmistakable body language I knew he wanted to ask something. Paul is doing his cond year in a famous high school. I have always been afraid of spoiling him with my love as he is my only child.
We are well placed in life. Both of us – my husband and I– are human Resource executive (主管). As I was about to switch off the kitchen light, Paul came near me with pleading eyes. “Mom, Our school is organizing a trip to the Yellow Stone National Park this time. They are charging only 200 per student, which covers all expens--train tickets, food and stay. Mom, plea, plea let me go. You have more than a month’s time to pay the money. And we are going only in our holidays.”
