高考英语短文改错练习
Proofreading 1 (2022届山西运城测试) 话题:瞻仰凡·高 难度:易
July 29, 2021 marks the 131st anniversary of Van Gogh's die. As a big fan of Van Gogh, I fulfill my lifelong dream this summer by taking a trip to Europe. I first traveled to the Netherlands, where Van Gogh born and lived for most of his life. In Amsterdam I went to the Van Gogh Muum but viewed hundreds of his works, including much of his greatest paintings. Before visiting Amsterdam, I drove to Saint-Rémy. There Van Gogh, depressing and lonely as he was, he made one masterpiece after another. My last destination was The Church at Auvers, where continues to keep the subjects of Van Gogh's paintings looking just as they did when he painted them. At that moment I had never felt clo to Van Gogh.
答案
1.第一句:die改为death
2.第二句:fulfill改为fulfilled
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3.第三句:在born前加was
4.第四句:but改为and
5.第四句:much改为many
6.第五句:Before改为After
7.第六句:depressing改为depresd
8.第六句:把made前的he删除
9.第七句:where改为which
10.第八句:clo改为clor
Proofreading 2 (2022届昆明一中摸底)话题:一位公交司机的壮举 难度:易
The hero in my heart is an ordinary bus driver, who did what he could save the lives on the bus.
In a cold morning, he was driving on the freeway while he had a sudden heart attack. He bears the great pain and braked the bus with perverance. Finally, he was pulled up on the emergency lane, bring 54 pasngers back from the death line. Therefore, he was unconscious and lost his life.
He is a common individual, but he did a awesome deed. It is due to his strong n of responsibility that he saved life in that urgent moment. He t a good example for me and what inspires mylf in my life is the spirit of being devoted to others.
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旅游英语作文
1.第一句:在could后加to
2.第二句:In改为On
3.第二句:while改为when
4.第三句:bears改为bore
5.第四句:去掉was
6.第四句:bring改为bringing
7.第五句:Therefore改为However
8.第六句:awesome前的a改为an
9.第七句:life改为lives
10.第八句:mylf改为me
Proofreading 3 (2022届成都七中测试)话题:给东京奥运健儿的一封信 难度:易
Dear athletes,
With your excellence, your joy, or your tears, we created the magic of the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games. You were competing fierce with each other for Olympic glory. You inspired us by the power of sports. This was even more remarkable given the many chall2011考研时间
enges you had to face becau of pandemic. In this difficult time, you gave the world the most precious gifts—hope. For the first time since the pandemic begins, the entire world has come together. Sports returned back to the centre stage. Billions of people around the globe were united by emotion, share moments of joy and inspiration, what gives us hope and faith in the future.
哈尔滨环球雅思国际英语学校Yours,
Li Hua
答案
1.第一句:or改为and
2.第一句:we改为you
3.第二句:fierce改为fiercely
4.第三句:by改为with
5.第四句:在pandemic前加the
6.第五句:gifts改为gift
7.第六句:begins改为began cellular版是什么意思
8.第七句:删除back
9.第八句:share改为sharing
10.第八句:what改为which 冗余是什么意思
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Proofreading 4 (2022届河南天一大联考阶段性测试)话题:成为环保卫士的建议 难度:中二级人力资源管理师
Would you like to be a greener person to protect the environment? Here was some advice. You should reduce the waste you produce daily. You can u all sides of the paper and collecting the drinking bottles. Remember to sort the waste so that it can be well recycle. It would be better for you turn off the power in your hou when you go out. Instead of driving your car everywhere, you can save energy by either walking nor riding
a bike. Beside, take a bag along when shopping to avoid using too many plastic bag. Last but not least, never spit in the public. It is real easy to be an eco-friendly person.
答案
1.第二句:was改为is burning out
2.第四句:all改为both
3.第四句:collecting改为collect
4.第五句:recycle 改为 recycled
5.第六句:在turn off前加to
6.第七句:nor改为 or
7.第八句:Beside改为Besides
8.第八句:bag改为bags
9.第九句:去掉the
10.第十句:real改为really
Proofreading 5 (2022届河南许昌质检)话题:以“劳动”为主题的班级活动 难度:中
Last week, our class carried out an activity, which theme is about labour.
bernAt first, the important of labour was emphasid by our teacher. Keep what he said in mind, I packed the suitca all by me before tting off. Then come the two-day activity. We were asked to helping the fruit farmer pick and deliver the watermelons. Exhausted though I was, I experienced great n of achievement from hard work.
When I came back to home, I couldn't wait to share with my parents the forgettable experience. I harvested very much from the activity that they were both proud of me.
