读后续写:纠正自己的错误 讲义-高三英语写作专项

更新时间:2023-07-18 22:16:29 阅读: 评论:0

读后续写原材料:
Paul grabbed his bat and glove, and raced out of the door towards the Steve’s. Summer vacation just began. The boys planned to play baball every day, so they could make the team in the following mester.
摇滚音乐下载Paul was waiting outside for Steve. "What are you doing? Where's your stuff?" Steve asked, lifting his bat onto his shoulder. Paul shook his head, "I have to clean Mr. Thompson's garage before I can go. With his broken arm, he can't do it himlf. My mom always volunteers me to help the Thompson's. She thinks they're kind of old and can't afford to hire a cleaner."
To get the work done earlier, Steve offered to help. The boys went down the block to the Thompson's and got started. They found a couple of brooms. Before they swept, they put boxes scattered around the garage floor on shelves. As Paul put a big box on a shelf, it fell off and with it fell an envelope. He picked it up. It wasn't aled, so he opened it. Out of his surpri, there were veral one hundred dollar bills inside.
符合英文"You've got to e this." He pulled out the bills and showed Steve, "It just fell down when the box fell. There's got to be veral hundred dollars here." Paul looked past Steve to the garage door and continued, "Nobody's here. If we take some, I bet no one will ever know." Before his voice died away, Paul had already drawn out one bill and stuffed it into his pocket.
Steve frowned and shook his head. "Are you crazy? That's stealing." Paul ignored him and protested, "Well, I do a lot of chores for them and don't get paid. It's not really stealing. It's kind of payment for my hard work. And one hundred will do for a bat and glove in I go's Sports Store". With this, Paul put the rest money back.Steve was about to grab the money from Paul's pocket when they heard a voice, "Hello, boys. Come in for a chocolate cake! I made one for you."
Paragraph 1At the sight of Mr. Thompson, Paul and Steve froze in shock.
Paragraph 2When they were about to leave, Mr. Thompson handed Paul a brand new bat and glove.
已知线索:
neSteve邀约Paul外出打棒球——Paul答应妈妈帮Thompson先生打扫车库——Steve提议一同干活然后再去玩——打扫时有信封掉落——孩子们发现大量现金——Paul想据为己有——Steve极力打消Paul的想法。
可续写线索:Paul 与Steve之间会有争吵?Thompson夫妇会发现他们的行为吗?Thompson拿来蛋糕后两位孩子会有怎样的思考?
设置问题链:
Para.1: Q1: How did the two boys react?be动词的用法
      Q2: What did Mr. Thompson say?
      Q3:What was Paul’s inner thought when he was having the cake?
      Q4: How long did they finish the task?soforth
加油的英语怎么说
Para.2: Q1: How did Paul take the bat and the glove?linsky
      Q2: Why did Mr. Thompson give Paul the gift?
      Q3: What did Paul decide to do when receiving the gift?
      Q4: What lesson did Paul learn from this experience?
 参考范文
“Boys, I baked a chocolate cake,” Mr. Thompson walked into the garage. Catching sight of Mrs Thompson, the two froze with fear and followed his step with racing hearts. A few minutes later, they were rved with large slices of cake. Delicious as the cake was, they didn’t have any appetite. Mr. Thompson emed to notice something was wrong, “Boys, do you like the cake?” Paul nodded with his eyes dropping to avoid any eye contact with Mr. Thompson and growing guilt crept into his heart.
When they were about to leave, Mr. Thompson handed Paul a brand-new bat and glove. Paul looked at them, his face blushing with shame. “Th ... thanks so much.” Voice trembling, Paul then bravely poured out everything about the envelope and apologized fo
r his behavior. Mr. Thompson, instead of boiling with anger, patted him on the back and said gently: “Oh, thank you for helping me find the envelope. I totally forgot where I had put it.” In that split moment, it dawned on him that what really matters is simply honesty and kindness.
分析:
1.Catching sight of Mrs Thompson, the two froze with fear and followed his step with racing hearts. Ving+句子+with复合结构, 写出了两个小孩的害怕。
2.Delicious as the cake was, they didn’t have any appetite. As的倒装写出了小孩有心事的表现。
3.Paul looked at them, his face blushing with shame.aggressively 句子+独立主格结构写出了Paul的羞愧。
4.dreamlandIn that split moment, it dawned on him that what really matters is simply honesty and kindness. It dawned on sb. 和 what matters is ....句型来升华主题.
         
       
下水作文:
Paragraph 1: "Boys,I baked a chocolate cake,"Mr. Thompson walked into the garage. Quickly thrusting the money into his pocket, Paul nudged Steve with his ankle, signaling him not to say anything about the money. Steve’s face flushed red and he was yelling in his heart, “when did Paul become so dishonest and lfish?” However, at no time would he betray his best friend. Both boys quickly regained their composure and forced a respon, “thank you so much, Mr. Thompson, we could hardly wait to sample your yummy chocolate cake!” Then, they followed Mr. Thompson into the kitchen and munched on the cake with a wandering mind.
prima

本文发布于:2023-07-18 22:16:29,感谢您对本站的认可!

本文链接:https://www.wtabcd.cn/fanwen/fan/90/181581.html

版权声明:本站内容均来自互联网,仅供演示用,请勿用于商业和其他非法用途。如果侵犯了您的权益请与我们联系,我们将在24小时内删除。

标签:写出   孩子   小孩   发现   结构   线索
相关文章
留言与评论(共有 0 条评论)
   
验证码:
Copyright ©2019-2022 Comsenz Inc.Powered by © 专利检索| 网站地图