读后续写 ：陌生人的温暖
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
读后续写原题
It was an early morning, yet already it had been a very bad day. One thing after another, the downward spiral(螺旋）continued when a large bottle of orange juice slid from my hands and fell to the floor. Glass and sticky juice splashed to the farthest corners of the kitchen. Shocked, I looked at the mess. Then I dropped heart-brokenly down to the floor, my eyes filling with tears. The tears emed to show that “today is just not my day”。
Bad day or not, things had to be done. Filled with anxiety and negative mental baggage, I got in my car to drive into town. In the few minutes, it took to travel to the bank I made a decision. I would be careful not to pass my bad day off to anyone el. I would be friendly and polite. And I would not be angry when that careless driver pulled quickly and rudely in fr
ont of me causing me to brake suddenly.
Standing in line at the bank, I was silently talking to mylf. Actually, I was scolding mylf. All of the events that had accumulated contributed to my bad day were, in reality, so very minor and trivial. I was over-reacting. I was filled with lf-pity. I tried to imagine the innumerable, individual lives that had been affected by terrorist attacks, by war, by hurricanes, earthquakes, and other natural disasters.
For the cond time that day my eyes filled with tears as I realized how disconnected I felt from all tho individuals who are trying to cope with truly mirable experiences in their lives.
tariThey all emed so distant and unknowable, and this justified and strengthened my belief that I was being lf-centered and lfish. I was sure that all my efforts to be a caring and loving person were in vain.
thank you very much
A voice broke through my mental distractions. Somehow I had mechanically finished my
bank transaction(交易）and the teller was trying to get my attention. “Young lady,” she was saying gently, “Young lady! ”.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
Paragraph 1: I looked up and into the eyes of the bank teller, a silver-haired grandmother with a gentle beauty.
Paragraph2：In the moment of her touching my hands, my lf-doubt disappeared.
写作思路分析
由原文可知，我从早晨开始就特别不顺利，心情非常低落，现在正在银行办事。根据给出的续写第一段首句可知，我抬起头，凝视着银行出纳员的眼睛，她是一位银发苍苍的老太太，面容温柔美丽。根据给出的续写第二段首句可知，在她抚摸我双手的那一刻，我的自我怀疑消失了。
第一段可以写，银行出纳员感觉到了我情绪低落，主动安慰我。我的情绪和反应。同时注
意两段之间的衔接，在第一段最后写她抚摸我的手。第二段可以写，我的自我怀疑消失，情绪的变化以及我对她的感谢.
参考范文
I looked up and into the eyes of the bank teller, a silver-haired grandmother with a gentle beauty. hot potatoHer keen eyes reflected concern as she leaned forward and softly said, "I don't know what is happening inside of you, but plea, believe me when I tell you that everything will be okay. " And then she did something quite marvelous非凡的. My hands were resting on the counter. She took her hands and placed them gently on top of mine. The touch was quick but electric扣人心弦的adultery. And at that moment my world shifted.
In the moment of her touching my hands, my lf-doubt disappeared. I found understanding and acceptance. I knew that love was being channeled人教版初一英语上册输送 through the heart of this beautiful woman directly into my heart. I was filled with a deep awareness inside me that I am loved. I was speechless. I smiled and gave her a little nod. It was my first smile of the day. But it would not be my last, as from that moment on
my entire day was transformed.
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“JAMIE EVANS.”
Oh no. Plea tell me that Coach Cafferty did NOT just say my name. Not for the one-hundred-meter breaststroke (蛙泳). Except all eyes were turned to me when she announced it, and her eyes met mine over the clipboard (剪贴板) that held the list of events and swimmers for the Plain Township Aquatic Center meet. The PTAC meet was the first of the ason, and I was not ready.
练习的英文“Remember, the meet is on Wednesday night. Be here at four-thirty for and the race kicks off at six. I’ll e you at practice tomorrow.” Coach Cafferty added. The crowd cleared quickly and I headed back home, feeling desperate.
泰坦尼克号歌词>no place like home
“Did you find out your events for Wednesday?” Mom asked as she slid the pizza box across the table to me.
musyconcentrate“Yeah. One-hundred breaststroke,” I finally said, not meeting her eyes. “I don’t know why Coach didn’t give me backstroke (仰泳). She knows it’s my best. I can’t swim breaststroke!”
“Maybe she es something you don’t.” Mom said.
“Or maybe I should just quit the swim team.”
Mom frowned. “Is that what you want?”
I sighed. “No.” I took a bite of my pizza. “I’m terrible at breaststroke. What happens when I show up on Wednesday and race, and I sink to the bottom of the pool? Or even wor, come in last?”
