英语论文评语大全
【篇一:英语作文评语大全】
英语作文激励性评语大全
一、 宏观性评价
1.整体印象类评语
super!excellent!perfect!wonderful!fantastic!marvelous!
采用整体印象类评语对于起始阶段的学生有较好的激励作用,但若千篇一律使用此类评语,就会使学生无法正确认识自己的写作水平,最终导致教师的评语失去应有的作用。
2.规范导知类评语
beautiful.clear. d hand-writing.
you’re careful of using pronunciation.
tothebeginning
glad to e your improvement in handwriting.
i’m expecting clearer/more beautiful hand-writing from you next time. you’d better pay more attention to word order.
better be more careful of your spelling.
it’s important to compo a graft beforehand.
3.情感调控类评语
i appreciate your handwriting.
you have a good knowledge of english proverbs.
you are quite aware of making meaningful ntences.
you are richer than others in collecting and using typical ntences and idioms.
i’m expecting greater progress from you in writing .come on.
if you need my help,never hesitate to come to me.
警句:
hard work leads to success.
con是什么意思
not to advance is to go back.
no one is without faults.
keeping is harder than winning.keep it up.
二、 微观写作技能方面的评语
1.专项点拨类评语
it’s proper to u the proverb in para.2 quite clever.
you are good at using attributive claus in your writing.
the “struck” ntence is perfectly ud.
you’d better u “third person” in the first para.
it’s good to u the past ten in your writing.
2.佳句欣赏类评语
教师可以在句尾统一标注赞美性的符号(如e—excellent)或标识不同星级等。
what a wonderful ntence using “cover”.
it’s really clever of you to u this beautiful ntence.
the inverted ntence is well wtitten.
3.谋篇布局类评语
a good beginning.
a perfect ending.
死了都要爱英文版well-organized. perfectly-expanded.
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the first para. makes a good beginning.
the last para. makes a perfect ending.
朋友用英语怎么写
all the points have been covered.
it’s clever of you to u a topic ntence at the beginning of a para. it’s wonderful to u proper conjunctions between ntences.
you are good at developing para.
you have made great progress in developing passage.
i am glad to e the ntence conherence in your last para.
better pay more attention to the relationship between ntences. it’s really wonderful to start/end your ntences with adverbials.纳尔逊曼德拉
ca937航班 在起始年级应侧重对学生写作行为规范的引领,重在对学生进行词语方面的引导;对高年级学生则应侧重对文章的结构、行文的逻辑、句子的变化等方面的指点和引导。natue
虽然这些评语对我们大部分学生来说不太适合,以为他们连老师评他们什么都看不懂,但我们平时对作文的批改确实没做到这么仔细,有很大启发。
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【篇二:英文论文审稿意见汇总】
英文论文审稿意见汇总
以下12点无轻重主次之分。每一点内容由总结性标题和代表性审稿人意见构成。
1、目标和结果不清晰。
it is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with experti in technical english editing paying particular attention to english grammar, spelling, and ntence structure so that the goals and results of the study are clear to the reader.
2、未解释研究方法或解释不充分。
◆ in general, there is a lack of explanation of replicates and statistical me
thods ud in the study.
◆ furthermore, an explanation of why the authors did the various experiments should be provided.
3、对于研究设计的rationale:
also, there are few explanations of the rationale for the study design.
4、夸张地陈述结论/夸大成果/不严谨:
the conclusions are overstated. for example, the study did not show
if the side effects from initial copper burst can be avoid with the polymer formulation.
5、对hypothesis的清晰界定:
a hypothesis needs to be prented。
6、对某个概念或工具使用的rationale/定义概念:
what was the rationale for the film/sbf volume ratio?
7、对研究问题的定义:
try to t the problem discusd in this paper in more clear,
write one ction to define the problem
8、如何凸现原创性以及如何充分地写literature review:
the topic is novel but the application propod is not so novel.
9、对claim,如a>b的证明,verification:
unclethere is no experimental comparison of the algorithm with previously known work, so it is impossible to judge whether the algorithm is an improvement on previous
work.
10、严谨度问题:
mnq is easier than the primitive pnqs, how to prove that.
11、格式(重视程度):
◆ in addition, the list of references is not in our style. it is clo but not completely correct. i have attached a pdf file with instructions for authors which shows examples. ◆ before submitting a revision be sure that your material is properly prepared and
formatted. if you are unsure, plea consult the formatting nstructions to authors that are given under the instructions and forms button in he upper right-hand corner of the screen.
12、语言问题(出现最多的问题):
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有关语言的审稿人意见:
◆ it is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with experti in technical english editing paying particular attention to english grammar, spelling, and ntence structure so that the goals and results of the study are clear to the reader. ◆ the authors must have their work reviewed by a proper translation/reviewing rvice before submission; only then can a proper review be performed. most ntences contain grammatical and/or spelling mistakes or are not complete ntences.