2020⾼考全国2卷英语作⽂赏析
20xx⾼考全国2卷
假定你是李华，想邀请外教 Herry ⼀起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 展览时间、地点;
2. 展览内容。
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注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，已使⾏⽂连贯。
学⽣实例1
分数：24分四川德阳中学
Dear Henry
I'm Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chine culture. Now I'm glad to tell you there will be a Chine paper-cutting exhibition held by our school.
I sincerely hope you can t aside some time for the art feast.
The exhibition, the theme of which is "beauty of China", will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our club's works be displayed, but we also have a valuable t of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of uful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chine culture.inadequate
电源适配器维修 I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. I'm sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! I'm looking forward to your reply.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
像成功者一样思考 1. 逻辑性较好，层次分明，连贯恰当;
2. 运⽤词块、句型丰富;
3. 个别⽤词需要改进⽐如说leader, leave a wonderful impression不符英语表达习惯;瓶子的英语
greetings 4. 第⼀段不够简洁。
学⽣实例2
分数：23.5分岳池中学
Dear Henry,
I have known that a Chine paper-cutting exhibition who subject is about Chine festivals will be held in our city.
Knowing that you have a great interest in Chine traditional culture, I am writing the e-mail to invite you to visit the exhibition together with me. The exhibition will be held in the muum to 7pm. on June 15th, which will last for only one day. On that day, the works of paper-cutting artists from all over China will be exhibited in the muum. Just as I have told you, it is about Chine traditional festivals. Therefore, in the exhibition, not only can the skills of the paper-cuttin
g artists be enjoyed, but also you can know more about the customs of our Chine traditional festivals from the beautiful works.
Time permitting, plea contact me. I am looking forward to visiting the exhibition together with you.
Yours,
mdio
Li Hua
1. 覆盖了全部要点，使⽤了较多语法结构和词汇;
2. 没有明显语法错误;
3. 硬伤：主题句不够突出;
4. 句式套⽤⽐较⽣硬：例如：not only but also; time permitting…
学⽣实例3
分数：22.5 吉林磐⽯⼀中
Dear Henry,
Our school will hold a paper-cutting exhibition. It's a great honor for me to invite you as a special guest. Paper-cutting is an indispensable style of art. Therefore, I hold the opinion that this show is of extreme significance.
Main points are as follows. To begin with, it will start at 9:00 on 15th Jun and last for one week in our auditorium. Besides, a wide range of activities will be held, including the competitions between different class, which will be the highlight of this show. Last but not least, taking advantage of this golden opportunity, we can not only enhance our understanding of Chine indigenous culture, but also enrich our cultural life.
All in all, I'm longing to e you soon.
1. 覆盖了全部要点，⾏⽂流畅
存在即合理英文 2. 结构清晰，使⽤了较多复杂的语法结构和⾼级词汇;
3. 个别连接词，过渡句使⽤有些⽣硬、突兀。例如：Main points are as follows.
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