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【作文题目】
请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，以show more concern over the disabled为题，写一篇120字左右的短文。
konstIt is reported that there are approximately85 million disabled people in our country.They are a disadvantageous group of people in our society who need help both from the government and from the whole society.If w e do a little for them in our life, it will make a great difference to them.
【素材分析及写作策划】
文体特征：根据题意，应该写一篇夹叙夹议的文章，文章要求以身边的事例突出主题，最后表明作者自己的观点。
curitycode人称特征：叙述一件身边的事例应以第一人称为主。议论部分提出的观点应切合实际，能使人受到启迪。
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时态特征：文体决定时态，叙事部分应当以过去时态为主，议论部分表达的是作者的观点，应以现在时态为主。
写作重点：文章首先应当简要概述一下本文的写作背景，引出下文，然后根据文章的要求，重点在叙事上，讲述日常生活中帮助残疾人的事例。议论部分为文章的点晴之笔，表明作者的态度。
亮点策划：本文为夹叙夹议的文章，前面主要以叙事为主，要注意语言的流畅，在叙述的过程中运用多种句型（如强调句，倒装句，分词作状语，with的复合结构及各种从句），并用适当的连接词使文章连贯、流畅。
【习作1】
S how More C once rn O ve r the Dis a ble d
As far as I know,there are so many disabled people in our country.In view of the practical need of society,it is esntial to show our love and more concern over the disabled.The disabled people are a weak group.It is high time that something should be done to help them.Though w e have done ma
ny things for them,w e should put our heart on them.
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It was a cold winter morning.Many people were busy going to wo rk,but I w as looking out of the w indow.Suddenly I saw a people w alking across the street.H e walked slow ly and held a stick.It emed that he w as blind.In no time did I rush out my home.“Can I help you?”I said out of breath.The blind nodded with a smile.When w e crosd the street,he was delighted and said “thanks”to me.I feel so w arm though the tempera-ture is low.
In my opinion,w e should give more love and concern to thedisabled and talk mo re w ith them.On-ly with our heart can w e expect the w orld to be-come w armer and w armer.
西悉尼大学【亮点赏析】
1.全文层次分明，详略得当，发挥适度，语言流畅；时态使用恰当，通过生活中的经历来引出人们对残疾人的关注。
2.In view of the practical need of society,it is esntial to show our love and more concern over
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