中考英语作文跑题
【篇一:中考英语作文要用好提示词】
中考英语作文要用好提示词
2009年英语“中考说明”作文部分新增了样题,考生写英语作文要用好提示词。
2008年中考英语作文有2道作文题:一是在汶川地震中,9岁学生林浩救了2名同学,然后步行7个小时到达安全地点。请考生就林浩的事迹,以“learn from the hero”为题,给学校英语专刊投稿。二是要求考生写一封回信。2篇作文都给出了提示词。
中考一直以来都是考记叙文,但2008年这篇属于“夹叙夹议”。这提醒了今年的中考生,要注意练习写议论文,而不能只拘泥于记叙文。在英语作文中,最容易出的错就是跑题,抓不住重点。如有些考生知道林浩的事迹,因此将作文未给的提示,如具体地震日期“5月12日”、林浩是班长、林浩被评为见义勇为少年等信息全部写上。这些虽不是不能写,但置提示词于不顾,非要挑战高难度,显然是本末倒置。
中考作文不是考生新句型的“练兵场”,考生要确保写作的每一句话都是正确的,没必要非尝试长难句不可。提示词实际上已涵盖了文章的重点内容,考生只要按部就班按中文句子和提示词将句子翻译出来即可。可惜有的考生并不领情,舍提示词不用。 此外,考生卷面尽量不要涂改,字迹要工整。一篇看起来杂乱不堪的文章,会让评卷老师没有耐心读下去,从而影响得分。
完美小姐进化论 动漫【篇二:中考英语作文话题之周围环境】
十、周围环境
(一)交通安全
(红灯)it’s very important for students to know about the traffic rules. when the red light is on, you must stop and you are not allowed to go on walking. even though you have something urgent to do or maybe you think the drivers dare not run over you. but do you know that rushing is at the cost of your life? so it’s not worth taking the risk.(绿灯)it’s safe to cross the road when the light is green. (成都新东方学校>oklahoma
黄灯)when the orange light is on, you must wait and be careful, becau the red light will be on very soon.
here are some suggestions to protect ourlves. first, we should follow the traffic lights and can’t break the traffic rules. cond, we’d better look left and right to make sure we are safe before stepping forward to cross the street. last but not least, don’t forget that it’s very dangerous to play on the street. from now on, not only i mylf will strictly obey the traffic rules but i’ll also call on my classmates and my family to do so.
(二)网络安全
利--- the internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. we can not only read news from home and abroad, but also get information, nd emails, make phone calls, attend on-line schools, read various books and study english by ourlves. what’s more, people can enjoy music, watch sport matches, play all kinds of games and go shopping on-line.
理学士>dia
弊--- however, every coin has two sides. it’s risky to make friends and shop on-line. what’s wor, some students who are addicted to the internet don’t study hard or even quit school.
个人观点--- for my part, i completely agree with the latter view that the internet has more disadvantages than advantages. it results in various computer crimes.
what is more, it is harmful to the growth of the young. something should be done as soon as possible to protect people from the negative effects of the internet.
(三)介绍沈城
最好的旅游季节 ---
2012江苏高考英语答案 the best time to visit shenyang is in spring which is neither too hot nor too cold, so spring is regarded as the perfect time of the year to be outside now that everything ems fresh and new.
介绍名胜古迹 ---
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i suggest visiting places of interest like shenyang imperial palace .it is worth visiting where there are royal buildings, fantastic artwork for people to enjoy. 说明注意事项 ---
before you come to shenyang, you need to know that it is of great necessity for you to travel with a map since looking for ways in this large city could be confusing. besides, you must be patient about waiting in line or large crowds becau shenyang is home to millions of people who come from different cities and countries.
十一 易错点整理:
(一) 审题:
在大家写一篇文章之前,我们肯定是要先看题目要求的,文章让写什么,什么文体有什么特殊的要求等等。比如海淀的期中考试作文,题目首先说:简单描述这种变化,这一点就告诉了我们,无论写什么要写两方面的对比,以前什么样子现在什么样子(文中题目实例已
经给出)。第二问的是你将如何处理好之间的关系,第三是原因或者理由,少了一点的话,要点肯定就不全了。
设计说明英文 (二) 时态:
看完题目了,马上构思先思考事件发生在什么时候,我们要拿捏准确事情发生的时间,英语写作中最忌讳两个错误,一个是跑题,一个就是时态错误,因为这样的错误非常严重。一般的文章时态比较好写,但是要注意有的文章是需要两到三种时态的。这个时候保持一个冷静的头脑很重要。
(三) 主谓一致:
写了文章之后,大家会有很多的大意,疏忽或者是不细心。本来句子写的很好,时态也注意了,但是往往大家在写完作文之后就会准备交卷,从而就忘记了检查,这个时候第三人称单数的问题就会出现,作文中出现的错误跟完成句子中所犯的错误基本一致,也可说完成句子就是写作的一个缩影。下面我给大家列举一下常见的几个主谓一致的错误,
很多同学会用doing动词的现在分词做主语,在写的时候就往往会写成:doing more exer
ci have a lot of advantages.而我们知道这里的have由于受到前面doing 的限制应当用第三人称单数has。再比如我们常用的there be 句型,请注意比较:there are three boys and a girl.与there is a girl and three boys.里面的be动词要取决于它后面紧跟着的名词。
(四) 多个谓语
多个谓语也可以说是多个动词出现在一个句子中,由于很多同学分不清或者压根儿就不知道谓语与非谓语的区别,从而导致了很多时候写出一个词之后不知道往后要接什么,那么我们常说:一个句子里有且只能有一个谓语动词,就是这句话让很多同学摸不到头脑,那么我换一种形式来说这句话,我们所学的时态:一般现在时(do或者do),一般过去时(did),一般将来时(will do),进行时(be doing),现在完成时(have/has done),被动语态(be done)都属于谓语动词,而单独出现的doing,to do,done就是我们所说的非谓语了,所以一个句子中不能有两个谓语形式出现,除非中间出现了连接词。
(五) 一些小错
我们在写作文的过程中,难免会有单词的拼写错误,这样的失分对于我们来说很遗憾。此外还会有一些比如我们的词组记忆的混淆,比如搭配记错,或者短语的介词运用的有错误。
(六)检查方法
针对错误的检查:我们写作文的时候要多加小心,毕竟是写一门我们不常用的语言,平常不坚持写作势必就会像刚刚加热过的牛奶一样,会自己冷却。一门外语也是如此,在这里跟大家分享一个好用并且能在最后几分钟发挥很大作用的改错方法:“三大时代介”,“三”就是说的动词的第三人称单数,“大”就是我们说的大小写问题,“时”就是我们所说的时态,“代”是代词,就是注意男女的指代词不要用错,“介”是介词。
小学数学评课>piv