冲刺新高考英语书面表达20天集训Word版
Day 10
你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请以你在某个方面取得进步的经历为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.经历的过程；
2.你的感受。
注意：
1.琐碎的意思词数100左右；
2.短文题目和首句已为你写好，不计入总数。
An Experience of Making Progress
Dear teachers and fellow students, I'm here to share one of my experiences of making prog
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【答案解析】
An Experience of Making Progress
Dear teachers and fellow students, I'm here to share one of my experiences of making progress.
in turnWhen I entered high school, I found everybody el in my class was good at English except me. I had a small vocabulary and had difficulty understanding the passages. However, I didn't lo heart. I went to my English teacher, who advid me to u a dictionary while reading and try to get what the passages conveyed to me.
I worked harder, following the teacher's advice. Gradually, I felt better while reading and began to find English interesting. Now I have already caught up with my classmates.
This experience gives me a better understanding of the saying: Nothing is too difficult to a willing heart.
【分析】
晚宴妆的特点这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生以在某个方面取得进步的经历为题用英语写一篇短文参加作文比赛。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：提纲类作文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
要求：包含经历的过程；你的感受。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
fellow；share；progress；lo heart；why notconvey；catch up with
第三步：连词成句
1. Dear teachers and fellow students, I'm here to share one of my experiences of making progress.
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2. When I entered high school, I found everybody el in my class was good at English except me.
3. I had a small vocabulary and had difficulty understanding the passages.
4. However, I didn't lo heart.
5. I went to my English teacher, who advid me to u a dictionary while reading and try to get what the passages conveyed to me.
6. I worked harder, following the teacher's advice.
7. Gradually, I felt better while reading and began to find English interesting.
8. Now I have already caught up with my classmates.
9. This experience gives me a better understanding of the saying: Nothing is too difficult to a willing heart.
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,thailand是什么意思
3.表转折对比关系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clau(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Becau, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
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【点睛】文章结构合理，思路清晰，使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯，如“when，however，who”，也运用了一些高级词汇和表达，如“fellow；share；progress；lo heart；convey；catch up with”stuttering以及状语从句“When I entered high school, I found everybody el in my class was good at English except me.”定语从句“I went to my English teacher, who advid me to u a dictionary while reading and try to get what the passages conveyed to me.”等，增加了文章的亮点，体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。
