专题02 读后续写：环境描写（原卷版）
借景抒情、寓情于景是写作中常用的手法。恰当的背景场景描写有利于推动故事情节的发展，烘托人物的心理活动，给读者身临其境的感受。背景场景描写要有全貌有细节，有全景有特写，要点面结合，重点突出。可以描写事件发生的时间、地点、环境等，也可以描写人看到的景象或感受到的某种情绪。
注意：环境描写只是起画龙点睛的作用，环境描写不要写太长，且环境描写一定为你的内容服务，而不是为了看起来高大上。所以我也提醒大家写作的时候千万不要本末倒置，写一些无关紧要的套句或者环境描写只会对情节起到反作用。那么接下来我们先看看环境描写的常见作用以及常见的环境描写素材。
自然环境描写在读后续写中的作用
1.衬托或突出人物性格、心理等
2.暗示或推动故事情节发展
3.增添或烘托某种气氛和意境，奠定基调
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4.揭示主题，深化主旨
1.气氛氛围（1）gre考试时间安排
A heavy silence blanketed the room.（描写房间的寂静）
A hush fell upon the class. （描写教室寂静）
The hou smelled musty and damp, and a little sweet, as if it were haunted by the ghosts of long-dead cookies.(描写屋内环境）
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An absolute darkness ruled the forest.（描写黑暗）
It didn’t take too long for the forest to be enveloped in darkness.(描写森林变暗）
There were a deathly stillness in the hou.（描写死寂）
There was a moment of sinister silence, then a multitudinous stirring of the leaves.（描写
暴风雨前的死寂）
An air of sadness ttled over the group. （描写悲伤氛围）
It suddenly emed frighteningly quiet. The air was charged with tension.（描写紧张气氛）
The silence of the forest was ripped apart by a sound like a roaring wind.（描写狂风打破寂静）lug
There was no view anywhere, nothing but the oppressive and silent scrub.（描写死寂的树林）
2.气氛氛围（2）
the blue sky 蓝天the songs of birds 鸟鸣the thundering clouds 雷霆万钧的云the fragile flowers 娇嫩的花the green grass 青草the fragrant ros 芬芳的玫瑰the tting / rising sun 落日 / 冉冉升起的太阳 Dark clouds were gathering in the sky.乌云密布。
The night sky was lit up by flashes of light. 一道道灯光照亮了夜空。
The clouds had spread and nearly covered the entire sky. 云彩扩散开来，几乎遮住了整个天空。mag
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The sun was now high in the southern sky. 太阳正高挂在南边的天空上。
The sun went in, and the breeze became cold. 云层遮住了太阳，微风有了些凉意。
The mist melted rapidly in the morning sun. 在早晨的阳光下，薄雾涣然消散了。
四月英文The mountain area is covered entirely in den jungle. 山区完全掩映在茂密的丛林中。
We climbed up a winding track towards a mountain refuge. 我们沿着一条蜿蜒的小道爬向山上的一处避难所。
The mountain top was covered with snow. 山顶被积雪覆盖。箱子的英文
The region is uninhabited except for a few mountain villages. 除了几个小山村之外，这个地区杳无人烟。
Bathed in the sunshine and delighted by fantastic scenery, we headed for the destination.沐浴在阳光下，享受着美丽的风景，我们向目的地出发。
3.江河湖海、山川峡谷、植物草地
The gurgle of the stream soothed me. （描写潺潺流水）
A clear little stream ran quite merrily along its narrow way.(描写欢快的溪流）
The fragrant flowers attracted lots of birds, lingering around them.(描写花香鸟语）
The lake mirrored the sky above, both of them blameless blue and shimmering.(描写天空映衬下的湖面）
The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.（描写波光粼粼的水面）
Dawn nt shimmering rays over the placid ocean, bestowing a golden path from the shore to the horizon.(描写黎明的海洋）
The expan of blue water stretched in every direction to the horizon, frothy waves lapping at a sand beach.(描写海水拍打沙滩)
The beach was bathed in the amber-like sunshine.（描写阳光下的沙滩）
Ripping crystal streams stretched away into the distance from the towering bluffs like the beautiful streamers of a fairy maid.（描写瀑布）
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The meadow was a glorious expans of grass and meadow flowers, grass rustling gently in the breeze.(描写青青草地)
Patches of weeds dotted the mountainside.（描写杂草）
The meadow flowed like a a of green over the hill, studded with the purple of thistles.(描写漫山的花草）
The peak looked to him exactly like a giant fist, with the thumb sticking straight up.(描写山峰）
The valley emed to grow quieter and quieter as he sat and stared at the bright delicate blueness. (描写山谷的寂静）
4.天气（风雨雷电，阴晴冷暖，雾雪冰霜）
The wind, so soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.（描写柔风）
A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain.（描写微风拂柳）
A light breeze blew, swaying the tree branches and making the rays of light glimmer and dance as if there was a fairytale world hidden deep within.（描写微风）
The breeze gently kisd her cheeks. (描写微风）
The fragile little tree cracked and fell in the wild howling wind.（描写狂风）
The icy wind started howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.(描写寒风）
It was the odour that always precedes a thunderstorm, and a nameless fear clutched at my heart. (描写暴风雨来临前）
Wind and rain now whipped the hou.（描写风雨击打窗户）
The drizzle kisd me on my cheeks gently. （描写细雨）
It has rained without ceasing for many days, with great gusts of wind.（描写刮风下雨）
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The thunder was rumbling in the distance. (描写雷电）
A fierce wind was roaring while the pounding rain was beating the ground. The rumble of thunder was heard in the distance.（描写风雨雷电）
