专题10 读后续写高分技巧综合训练
谢尔维一、请运用所学技巧翻译下面的段落。
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Jim 看到袭击者逃进了黑暗中，他想到了那个姑娘。Jim 仍然喘着粗气，朝着她走去。那姑娘坐在灌木丛后面哭着。尽管Jim在黑暗中几乎看不清那姑娘，他还是能确定地感觉到她惊魂未定。Jim不想再吓着她，他隔开一定距离和她说话。Jim轻轻地告诉她袭击者已经逃跑了，她安全了。姑娘许久没说话，接着他吃惊地听到姑娘问道：“是你吗，爸爸？”
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Seeing the attacker flee/disappear/run into the darkness, Jim thought of the girl. Still breathing heavily, Jim walked towards her. The girl was sitting behind the bushes, sobbing. Although in the darkness Jim could hardly e the girl clearly, he could n her trembling alarm with certainty. To avoid frightening the girl further, Jim spoke to her at a distance. In a saurin
soft voice, Jim told her that the attacker had run away and that she was safe. There was a long silence and then in astonishmentgislle he heard the girl ask, “Dad, is that you?”
【点评】这篇短文用到了前面学过的Ving、副词和介词短语，丰富了表达形式，使情感描写和动作描写更加细腻生动。
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第二天，Meg去跟Mrs.Gilson 解释了她为什么不交回家作业。为了不让同学知道这件事，她趁没人注意时悄悄地溜进了Mrs. Gilson的办公室。Meg低着头，她告诉了Mrs.Gilson她的回家作业找不到了。“我保证我完成了回家作业。。。。。。”她解释道，眼里含着泪。见此情景，Mrs. Gilson 打断了她。她笑着告诉Meg她已经在上一天把她的作业和试卷一起交起来了。她知道Meg不会因为偷懒而说谎。听到Mrs.Gilson的话，Meg 如释重负。她开心地笑了，眼里的泪水落了下来。
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The next day, Meg went to tell Mrs. Gilson why she couldn’t hand in her homework. To av
oid being known by her classmates, she cretly slid into Mrs. Gilson’s office without being noticed. Her head drooped, Meg told Mrs. Gilson the truth that she just could not find her homework. “I promi that I did finish my homework and…” she explained, tears welling up in her eyes/ eyes brimming with tears. Seeing this, Mrs. Gilson interrupted her. With a smile, she told Meg that she had handed in her homework with her paper the day before. She knew Meg was not lying becau of laziness. Hearing this, Meg felt a surge of relief. She smiled brightly, drops of tears rolling down her cheeks.
【点评】这篇短文用到了前面学过的Ving、副词、介词短语、情绪表达和独立结构，尤其是独立结构。文中三处使用了独立结构，生动细腻地描写了Meg的情感变化。
二、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
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From the first day he entered my classroom, Willard P. Frank existed in his own world, shutting out his classmates and me. My attempts at building a friendly relationship with hi
m were met with complete indifference. I could e that his classmatesin the flesh>灵动喷射 fared no better. Willard was strictly a loner who emed to have no desire or need to break his silence．
Shortly after the Thanksgiving holiday, we received word of the annual Christmas collection of money for the less fortunate people in our school district.
“Christmas is a ason of giving，”I told my students. “There are a few students in the school who might not have a happy holiday ason. By contributing to our Christmas collection, you will help buy food, clothing and toys for the needy people. We will start the collection tomorrow.”
When I called for the contributions the next day, I discovered that almost everyone had forgotten except for Willard P. Frank. The boy dug deep into his pants pockets as he walked slowly to my desk. Carefully, he dropped two quarters into the small container.
“I don’t need milk for lunch，” he mumbled. For a moment, just a moment, he smiled. Then he turned and walked back to his desk.
tengaThat night, after school, I took our few contributions to the school principal. I couldn’t help sharing the incident that had taken place.
“I may be wrong, but I believe Willard might be getting ready to become a part of the world around him,” I told the principal.
“Yes.” he nodded.“And we might do well to have him share a bit of his world with us. I just received a list of the poor families in our school who most need help through the Christmas collection. Here, take a look at it.”
As I gazed down to read, I discovered Willard P. Frank and his family were the top names on the list. Seeing this, I decided to do something for him．
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
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3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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On that Sunday, I paid a visit to Willard’s family._________________________________________________
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The next day, I had a special class for Willard.___________________________________________________
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On that Sunday, I paid a visit to Willard’s family. On entering his hou, I was surprid to find a barely empty room日语翻译机 with only a broken bed and a dirty cond hand sofa. Willard told me that his mother died a few years ago and that his father was missing, leaving him to live with a sick grandma. When asked why he had given the two quarters,_Willard mumbled,_“There are people poorer than me, so I just want to do some help by contributing my milk money.” Hearing his words, I couldn’t help bursting into tears. I thought I should help him break his silence.
