专题01 读后续写速成:“天龙八步”法-攻克2021年高考英语读后续写技巧与训练(新高考地区专用)

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读后续写速成:
“天龙八步”法
目录:
读后续写,大部分都是围绕conflict,solution来运转的,首先你能看懂材料,如果这一步无法完成,那这篇文章并不适合你。然后,你要找到文章到底提出什么冲突或问题。大部分文章都是这个模式:
(1)情绪:消极情绪
(2)细节:进一步解释描写
(3)转折:个人的努力或借助外界
(4)转机:事情似乎有了转机,并抱有希望,感到欣慰
(5)失望:但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
(6)新法:突然有了一个想法(一句话说明这个想法)
(7)结局:过了一段时间;事情有了最后的转折
(8)总结:点题,呼应前文
第1步 情绪:情绪描写
第2步细节:进一步解释描写
例1
情绪描写∶ 笑
smile brightly;laugh; beam; light(sth)up; light up with; burst into laughter; burst out laughing; wear a bright/broad smile; give sb a smile
细节描写∶笑
看到直升飞机,Jane高兴地笑了起来。
(1)At the sight of the helicopter,Jane beamed with wild joy.
(2)Seeing the helicopter,Jane beamed with wild joy.
(3)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter,Jane's eays/face lit up with delight.
(4)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter,a bright smile lit up Jane's faceleyes.
例2
情绪描写∶哭
cry; sob; weep; burst into tears; burst out crying;(one's eyes)brim with/befull of/be filled with tears
细节描写∶哭
(1)A lump came to his throat.他哽咽欲哭。
(2)Her eyes were red from crying.她的双眼哭得通红。
(3)Her eyes brimmed with tears.她的眼里满含泪水。
(4) Tears courd/trickled/streamed/ran down her cheeks.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。
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例3
英语词性分类
情绪描写∶ 害怕
frightened; panicked; scared; speechless;in(a)panic; in a cold sweat;be full of fear; be filled with terror;be rooted to the spot; freeze;run away; flee; one'sknees feel weak; (hands) sweat
细节描写∶ 害怕
我感到很害怕。
(1)I felt very frightened/scared/panicked.
(2) I was in (a) panic/was full of fear.
(3)I stood rooted to the spot,brimming with fear/filled with fear.
(4)I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
(5)I froze with terror, too scared to move.
(6)I was ized by a strong n of horror; my palms sweating.
例4
情绪描写∶ 高兴激动
v. dance;jump/leap withjoy; feel a surge of happiness/delight/joyexcitement; whistle; be overcome with happiness/delight/joy/excitement;(one's eyes) twinkle;(one's heart) beat/pound wildly
adj. happy; delighted; overjoyed; excited; thrilled; wild withjoy
细节描写∶高兴激动
当她知道考试结果时,她兴奋极了。
(1)When she knew the result of the test, she felt excited/thrilled.
(2) When she knew theresult of the test, her eyes twinkled with excitement.
(3)When sheknew the result of the test,her heart was pounding with wildjoy.lami
(4))When she knew the result of the test,a wildexcitement took hold of her.
(5)Knowing the result of the test, she felt a surge of excitement.
(6)Knowing the result of the test,she was overcome with excitement.
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情绪描写∶伤心痛苦
sad; bitter; sorrowful; feela surge of sadness;(sadness)surge within sb; one's heart ache; be overcome with sadness
细节描写∶伤心痛苦她伤心不已。
(1) Sam felt extremely sad.
(2) A sadness came over her.
(3) Her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.
(4) Numb with grief, she became speechless.
(5)Feeling a surge of sadness,she couldn't help crying bitterly.
(6) Sadness surging within her, she burst into tears.
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情绪描写∶ 生气愤怒
felt/get angry/furious; feel a surge of anger/rage/fury;eyes blaze;storm out of/into/off; storm/say angrily; sth makes sb blood boil; sth makes sb extremely angry; clasp one's fists/teeth; speechless
细节描写∶ 生气愤怒
Sam感到非常生气。
(1) Sam felt very angry.
(2) Sam stood rooted to the spot, his eyes blazing with anger.
(3) Sam felt so angry that he stormed out of the room,slamming the door
furiously behind him.
(4) Boiling with rage,Sam shook his fist at me.
(5)Filled with fury,Sam was unable to uttera single word.
第3步 转折:个人努力或借助外界
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教师节英文祝福语简短
鼓起勇气; 他人的鼓励
pluckup/take/gather one'scourage(to do….)genuine leather
毫不犹豫
(1)sb could hardly wait to do sth
(2) without a cond thought
(3) without even thinking
(4) without delay
(5) without hesitation
第4步 转机:事情似乎有了转机,并抱有希望,感到欣慰
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似乎
(1) It was like doing sth
(2) It emed as if/that
希望
(1) hoping that..
(2) e/feel a glimmer of hope
(3) trying hard to do sth
四级作文
hearof欣慰
(1)…..breathed asigh of relief-sighed with relief 松了—口气
(2)(a wave of relief flooded through/washed over sb
planking(3)to one'srelief… 使人欣慰的/放心的是……

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