读后续写：故事开头六大绝招
一个好的故事开头就好比是一个带着香味十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地看完。而一个拙劣的故事开头，定会让读者大倒胃口，恹恹欲睡。俗话说：“well begun is half done！”可见，写好一个好故事的好开头是多么的重要。那么到底在时间紧迫的考场上如何写出靓丽的开头呢？
第一招：副词开头
Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass.
Joyfully ，he skipped up the street.
我们来看 2022年高考真题。故事大致是这样的：夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，迷路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次救援但没有看见她，她感到很失望。
第一段开头的提示句是：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.意思是：没有直升机来了，天又黑了。同学们，可以想一想，我们该怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们来看看下面的写法：
Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest.
第二招：形容词短语开头
我们先看两个例句：
Curious to know what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave.
Unable to say a word, he was rooted to the spot.
我们来看2022年高考真题，讲的是爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场游玩而迷路的故事。第一段开头给的提示句是：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my hor. 突然，一只小兔子跳到了我的马前。怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：
Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my hor.
我们来看这篇文章的 第二段开头： 文章给的提示句是：We had no idea where we were and it got dark.我们不知道自己在哪里，天变黑了。怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）
我们可以这么写：
Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back.
第三招： 非谓语开头
先看这个例句：
Looking around him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly clod the door.
我们来看 2022年高考真题第一段开头，刚才提到过，讲了妻子在森林里迷路的故事。
thickness文章给的提示句是：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.但是没有直升机来了，天又黑了。刚才我们用副词开头写了一个句子。现在我们用非谓语开头，怎么写呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：
Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night.
我们再来看 2022年10月高考真题第二段开头：
文章给的提示句是： It was daybreak when Jane woke up. 简醒来的时候天已经亮了。
怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：
Feeling refreshed,暴发户 英语 she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.
这里用feeling refreshed的形式，很好体现了后一个动作“walk”的伴随状态。
第四招：对话或独白开头
先看一个例句：
“Let’s e who gets there first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.“
类似的写法，我们来看 2022年高考真题，文章主要讲的是作者和朋友一起骑车游玩，途中遇狼的故事。第一段开头文章给的提示句是：The car abruptly stopped in front of him. 汽车突然停在他面前。
怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写："Get into the car." Paul shouted at Mac. 汽车保养用品 “
第五招：背景描写
我们来看 2022年高考真题，文章讲了作者与健忘的妈妈一块去旅游的故事。
第二段开头的提示语是这样的：We drove through veral states and saw lots of great sights along the way（我们开车穿过了几个州，沿途看到了很多好风景。）
怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：
I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys, holding me entirely in their fascination.
这里用“视觉+环境描写+拟人”的写作手法，也成功地抓住了读者的注意力！
第六招：行为描写
Furry started wagging his tail and running around in circles when he saw his master taking a leash out from the drawer. Furry was all ready for his evening walk.
rng什么意思当他看到他的主人从抽屉里拿出一条皮带时，Furry开始摇，绕着圈跑。 Furry准备好了晚上的散步。一连串有关Furry的动作链，像放电影一样，印刻在读者的大脑中。为后面情节发展做好了铺垫。
我们来看 2022年高考真，仍然是作者与健忘妈妈一块去旅游的故事。
文章的第一段的提示句是：The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.（第二天，我们想起了我们带来的那个全新的帐篷。）怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：
Dad exchanged a glance with me. Why not camp to satisfy Mom?
这里就用到了动作描写+问句衔接。很好勾起了读者的兴趣。
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读后续写语句积累：情感描写
Her eyes twinkled with merriment.
她高兴得双眸闪闪发亮。
Mack went into raptures and burst into laughter.
麦克欣喜若狂，大笑起来。
A ripple of laughterinaccordance went through the crowd.
人群中传来一阵笑声
Lily's laughter lingered in the room for a long time.
丽丽的笑声萦绕在房间里久久不能散去。
Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the letter.
当她打开信时，她的手激动得发抖。
After heard this satisfactory outcome, Steve felt a n of joy and happiness surging through him.
在听到这个令人满意的结果后，史蒂夫感到一种喜悦和幸福的感觉涌上心头。
Overwhelmed with gaiety, he jumped up and ran excitedly around the tree.
他欣喜若狂，跳起来并绕着那棵大树跑了几圈。
In his excitement he couldn't remember her name.
他兴奋得甚至把他自己的名字都给忘了。电影铁娘子
Ro felt blissful as if she was in posssion of everything.
罗丝感到很幸福，好像她拥有了全世界一样。
She was carried away by pleasure.
她被快乐冲昏了头脑。
I nodded, with a big smile spreading across my cheek.
我点点头，脸上露出灿烂的笑容。
She couldn't conceal the excitement and rushed home to tell her mother the good news.
她掩饰不住兴奋，急忙回家告诉母亲这个好消息。
She is always ready to help others in need and always wears shining smile on her face, so many classmates are willing to make friends with her.
她总是乐于助人并且脸上总是挂着灿烂的笑容，因此很多同学都愿意和她交朋友。
I'm over the moon.
我太开心了
around是什么意思
It is easy to infer that he is in rapture through his big smile.
从他那灿烂的笑容很容易推断出他是兴高采烈的。
He woke up that morning with a feeling of excitement.
他一起床就感到很兴奋。
Her excitement grew as the day of the wedding came nearer.
随着结婚的日子越来越近，她越来越兴奋。
I am overflowing with happiness纳思书院.
