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——读后续写 “细节描写” 素材
读后续写基本是以记叙文为主，而记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容，以叙述为主要表达方式来反映丰富多彩的现实生活的一种文体。一般来说，完成一篇完整的记叙文写作，需要选取合适的角度、按照一定的顺序组织素材进行叙述，其中包括六个基本要素：时间、地点、人物，事情的起因、经过和结果，即我们通常所说的五个“W”（what, who, when, where, why）和一个“H”（how）。除此之外，鲜明的主题和生动的语言，也是一篇优秀的记叙文所不可或缺的。
描写作为记叙文的一种辅助的表达方式对加强文章的表现力发挥着重要的作用，它要求我们善于捕捉细节、刻画细节，有时还可以用上比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞手法。一篇好的作文往往因为一两处细节描写而出彩。同样地，议论、抒情的表达方式对记叙文主题的展现也发挥着重要的作用。
一、情感心理描写
在写作中，对人物情感的描写常常能使人物的形象显得生动鲜活。人的情感可以分很多种，如喜悦、满意、失望、悲伤、憎恨、愤怒、惊讶、恐惧、赞赏等等。在英语中有很多不同的词和句式来表达这些不同的情感。
喜悦
1. He is very happy and sweet.
他又高兴又甜蜜。
2. They didn't know what to do with themlves for joy.
他们高兴得不知道怎么办好。
3. He jumped for fun.
他高兴得跳了起来。
4. Her face brightened up.
她喜形于色。
More examples
1. The smile on her face shone like a diamond.
她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
2. His eyes twinkled with pleasure.
他的眼睛因高兴而闪闪发亮。
3. I was wild with joy.
我欣喜若狂。
4. I was plead beyond description.
我高兴得无法形容。
5. She wore a shining smile on her face.
她脸上挂着灿烂的微笑。
6. Her smile lit up the whole room.
terra nova她的微笑照亮了整个房间。
7. She shed tears of joy.
她流下了喜悦的眼泪。
8. She was overflowing with happiness.
她洋溢着幸福。
9. Her flushed face was shining with excitement.
她激动得满脸通红。
10. I was floating on air.
我飘飘欲仙。
满意
1. The result is satisfactory.
结果令人满意。
2. It is difficult to plea everybody.
众口难调。
3. There is always a smile of contentment on her face.
她脸上总是挂着心满意足的微笑。
4. She belongs to tho who are very difficult to satisfy.
她属于那种极难讨好的人。
oxen5. Seeing their task finished gives them a n of satisfaction.
看到任务完成了，他们感到很满意。
惊讶
1. I'm surprid to find you here.
在这里看到你我很奇怪。
2. It's nothing to be surprid about.
这不值得大惊小怪。
3. To my surpri, he didn't come yesterday.
令我吃惊的是他昨天没有来。
4. She looked at me in amazement.
她惊奇的看着我。
5. Her appearance fairly took my breath away.
她的美貌令我神魂颠倒。
6. Everyone looked at her in astonishment.
大家都惊讶地看着她。
悲伤
1. He looks so sad.
他看起来很悲伤。
2. He is no stranger to sorrow.
他生活在悲伤中。
3. His sad story makes her feel pity.
他的悲惨经历使她深表同情。
4. His wife’s dia took away his appetite.
妻子的病令他茶饭不思。
5. The news depress her.
这个消息让她愁苦。
More examples
1. He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.
他静静地站着，眼泪顺着脸颊滚落下来。
2. I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.
我觉得自己好像漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
3. Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.
听到这个消息，他绝望得用酒淹没悲伤。
4. She burst into tears and ran out of the room.
她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。南宁会计培训
take5. She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.静安外国语小学
她哭着，用手捂着脸。
6. I tried to fight back tears.
我强忍住泪水。
7. My eyes were filled with tears.
我的眼里充满了泪水。
8. A frown（皱眉）now stood on his face.
他皱起了眉头。
9. The days he was in low spirits.
这些天他情绪低落。
愤怒
1. She was burning with anger.
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她怒火中烧。
2. He easily los his temper.
他很容易发脾气。
3. He was in a rage.
他大发雷霆。
4. She was red with anger.
她因为发怒脸涨得通红。
More examples
marry you歌词1. I was ized by anger.
我被愤怒攫住了。
2. His anger boiled over.
他怒不可遏。
3. He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.
他几乎无法控制自己的愤怒。
4. His voice trembled with anger.
他气得声音发抖。
5. He gave me a look of burning anger
他怒不可遏地看了我一眼。
6. He glared at me with burning eyes.
他用火辣辣的眼睛瞪着我。
7. His face clouded with anger.
他的脸因愤怒而变得阴沉起来。
感动
1. Touched deeply/immenly, we…
深深感动/极大,我们……
2. Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.
她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。
3. With tears streaming down her face,
她泪流满面，……
害怕
1. He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.
他转向我，眼里充满了恐惧。
2. She was struck with
panic
当……时，她吓了一跳。
3. She was choked by fear.
她吓得说不出话来。
4. Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.
dying in the sun
她脸色苍白，站在那里张口结舌。
5. Fear flooded over him.
恐惧淹没了他。
6. Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated（窒息）.
她的心跳得很厉害，几乎窒息了。
7. She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
她浑身发抖，感觉如坐针毡。
二、动作描写
动作描写也是描写人的重要一点。利用适当的词语对表达人们的心理和性格有很大的帮助。
表达说话的动词：
speak: 说，讲，说话，演说。着重开口发音。
迈克杰克逊的歌say: 说，说话。意义非常广泛，是一般用语。着重内容，指连贯的说话。
talk: 讲，说话。着重说话的动作，而不着重所说的话。它多指两个人或多个人在一起讲话。
tell: 说，告诉，讲。指把一件事情传达给别人或讲述一个故事等。有连续叙述的意思。
chat: 闲谈，聊天。多指非正式的，轻松的，愉快的，没有中心地、没有特殊目的地谈话或聊天。含有亲热的意味。
gossip: 只在后面说人是非，闲谈他人的事情。
1. Can you child speak yet?
你的孩子会说话了吗？
2. He said he wanted to go to town.
他说他想去城里。
3. I want to talk to you about an urgent matter.
我想和你谈一件紧急的事。
4. Tell me what happened.
告诉我发生了什么事。
5. They dropped in for a chat last night.
他们昨晚顺便来闲聊了一会儿。
