短文改错专练(二edition)bushing
Test 1
[2019·成都第三次诊断] Applying for a foreign university is a huge project. Here is my experience. I did voluntary work in Grade One. I listed all of my achievement and the voluntary work I have done. After complete the online admission process, I took a deep breathe and dreamed about my dream college. However, except offer from the University of California, San Diego (UCSD), I total got eight rejections. One day, I locked mylf in my room but thought about what I had done. Finally I understood that I could learn nothing from the experience even though tho rejections were made me sad. I accepted the UCSD's offer and adjusted mylf quickly. For this attitude, everything I saw of UCSD thrilled me.
答案与解析：
Applying for a foreign university is a huge project. Here is my experience. I did voluntary work in Grade One. I listed all of my and the voluntary work I done. After the online admission process, I took a deep and dreamed about my dream college. However, except offer from the University of California, San Diego (UCSD), I got eight rejections. One day, I locked mylf in my room thought about what I had done. Finally I understood that I could learn from the experience even though tho rejections were made me sad. I accepted the UCSD's offer and adjusted mylf quickly. this attitude, everything I saw of UCSD thrilled me.
①achievement改为achievements 考查名词。根据该句中的“all of”可知，这里表示不止一项成就，故要用名词复数。
②have改为had 考查动词。根据本句中的“listed”可知，这里讲述的是过去的经历，此处表示截止到过去这个时间点我已经做的志愿者工作，故要用过去完成时。
③complete改为completing 考查非谓语动词。介词After后面要用动名词，故应改为comp
leting。
④breathe改为breath 考查名词。根据前面的冠词a和形容词deep可知，此处应用名词，take a deep breath固定短语“深吸一口气”。
⑤except后加an/the 考查冠词。offer为可数名词，故前面要用限定词修饰；此处可表泛指，且offer的发音以元音音素开头，故用an；也可表特指，故用the。
⑥total改为totally 考查副词。修饰动词got要用副词形式。
⑦but改为and 考查连词。“我将自己锁在房间里”和北京英语培训“geton思考我所做的一切”之间不存在转折关系，而是顺承关系，故要用and。
⑧nothing改为something 考查代词。根据句中的“even though”并结合语境可知，虽然之前被拒绝让“我”很伤心，但是“我”也从中学到了一些东西，故要用something。
⑨删除made前的were 考查语态。此处表示那些拒绝让我伤心，应用主动语态。
⑩For改为With 考查介词。此处表示“带着这样一种态度”，故应用介词With。
Test 2
[2019·郑州高三第一次质量预测] This summer, I visited Hangzhou, and this journey had impresd me deeply.
Being a capital of Zhejiang Province, Hangzhou lies in the southeast of China. There are a lot of place of interest. Among them the West Lake is the bestknown attraction, where water em to melt into the sky by the distance. Besides, there are veral muums locating in Hangzhou that show its unique culture. What's more, you can enjoy many kinds of deliciously local food such as West Lake Fish in Vinegar Sauce and Dongpo Pork. The people there are friendly and kind, but they are working hard make the city more beautiful.
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答案与解析：
This summer, I visited Hangzhou, and this journey had impresd me deeply.
Being capital of Zhejiang Province, Hangzhou lies in the southeast of China. There are a lot of of interest. Among them the West Lake is the bestknown attraction, where water to melt into the sky the distance. Besides, there are veral muums in Hangzhou that show its unique culture. What's more, you can enjoy many kinds of local food such as West Lake Fish in Vinegar Sauce and Dongpo Pork. The people there are friendly and kind, they are working hard make the city more beautiful.
attractive and inviting Hangzhou is!
①删除had 考查时态。had done为过去完成时，表示“过去的过去advertiment”。但在此句中，visited先发生，impresd后发生，因此用一般过去时，had多余，故删除。
②a改为the 考查冠词。杭州为浙江省的省会，此处表示特指，故把a改为the。
③place改为places 考查名词。place为可数名词，且根据该句中的“a lot of”可知，此处应用其复数形式。
④em改为ems 考查时态和主谓一致。根据该句中的“is”可知，此处叙述一般的情况，应用一般现在时；该从句的主语是water，是不可数名词，故用ems。
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⑤by改为in 考查介词。in the distance固定短语“在远处，在远方”，故把by改为in。
⑥locating改为located 考查非谓语动词。be located in固定短语“位于……”，此处省略了be动词，故用过去分词短语作后置定语。
⑦deliciously改为delicious 考查形容词。根据语境及该句中的“local food”，可知此处应用形容词delicious。
⑧but改为and 考查连词。此处前面意为“这里的人友好、善良”，此处后面意为“他们正在努力工作以使这座城市更美丽汉日翻译器”，根据句意可知，前后句之间为并列关系，而不是转折关系，因此把but改为and。
⑨hard后加to 考查非谓语动词。参见上题解析。此处应用动词不定式作目的状语，故在hard后加to。
⑩Whatexclusive什么意思改为How 考查感叹句。根据该句中的“attractive and inviting”以及“How＋adj.＋主语＋谓语”结构可知，此处应用How来引导该感叹句。
Test 3
[2019·福建省质量检查] As everybody know, parents are worried too much about their child, especially when the young meet with challenges. So do my parents. They are even more nervous than I when a important test is coming. I have been thinking about talked to them. I'll let them know I have a goal and will work hard to achieve them. When they are convincing that I'll be responsible for that what I should do, they surely won't feel worried. Plea keep in mind that our parents love us unconditional. I hope my thought can be helpful to you in dealing the relationship with your parents.
答案与解析：
英语国庆节手抄报内容 As everybody ， parents are worried too much about their ， especially when the young meet with challenges. So my parents. They are even more nervous than I when important test is coming. I have been thinking about to them. I'll let them know I have a goal and will work hard to achieve . When they are that I'll be responsible for that what I should do, they surely won't feel worried. Plea keep in mind that our parents love us . I hope my thought can be helpful to you in dealing the relationship with your parents.
