高考英语读后续写话题5-性格品质
高考读后续写话题-性格品质
语境考察
例题展示
形象设计培训
主题语境：优秀品行
语篇类型：个人故事
语篇难度：★★★
关键词：delivery
短文词数：340
建议时间：23 mins
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
There was a rich couple who was throwing a big New Year party at their hou. So they went shopping at the market where everything was of high cost and fixed price. They wanted to maintain their level of standard so they didn't mind paying for it. After purchasing all they needed, they called a porter to carry everything and drop it at the their home. The porter who came was of an old age, and looked very unhealthy, and his clothes were torn, and he looked as if he wasn't even able to meet his daily needs.
记账凭证装订
They asked the porter about the charges for delivering their goods to their home. The old porter quoted just $20, well below the market price. Yet, the couple argued and bargained with the porter and finally ttled for $15. The porter was struggling to make even one time's meal so he needed anything he could earn.
The couple was very happy thinking how well they bargained with the poor porter and paid him $15 in advance and left after giving the porter their address for delivery. They reached their home and one hour pasd, and two hours pasd, but the porter still didn't deliver their stuff.
The wife started to get angry at her husband, "I always tell you not to trust such person, but you never listen to me. I am sure instead of delivering the goods to our home, he must have disappeared with everything. We must immediately go back to the market to inquire and then to the police station to file the complaint against him."
They both left towards the market. On their way near the market, they saw another porter. They stopped him to inquire about the old porter and noticed that he was carrying their goods in his cart! The angry wife asked him, "Where is that old thief? This is our goods and he was suppod to deliver them. It ems you poor thieves are stealing our goods and going to ll them."
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：When the porter heard the angry wife asking,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2：Upon hearing this,the husband had tears in his eyes,____________________________
文章来源
文章来源本文选自英文网站moralstories，原文题目为“Last Delivery”《最后一次送货》，作者不详。
清洁工的英文语篇解读
本文是记叙文。作者叙述了一场误会。一对夫妇在集市购买举办聚会的物品后，让搬运工送货到家，但是几个小时过后还没有送到，这对夫妇就返回集市，结果在路上遇到另一位搬运工在运送他们购买的物品。他们认为这些人是小偷……
难句分析
原文：The porter who came was of an old age, and looked very unhealthy, and his clothes were torn, and he looked as if he wasn't even able to meet his daily needs.
译文：来的是一位年老的搬运工，看上去非常不健康，他的衣服撕破了，他看起来甚至好像无法满足他的日常需求。
分析：这是一个并列复合句。关系代词who引导定语从句修饰先行词the porter，连词as if 引导表语从句。
笔前点睛
★审题分析
审要求
读后续写，本文语篇类型属于记叙文；
审人称、时态
kapo
第三人称、一般过去时；
审要点
要点一：the porter escaped ? run after the porter ? call the police ? e the old porter again
要点二：hearing the explanation ? buy a meal for the old man ? The old man explained the reason ? say sorry to each other
原文所给的关键词分类
地点：at their hou、at the market、home
人物：rich couple、porter、police、thief
事件：delivery
事物：hour、meal
学习的英文
在续写时，除了注意原文给出的关键词，还需要注意以下线索：
1. Why did the porter escape after hearing the wife asking？
2. What did the couple do while the porter escaped？
美容职业培训3. What did the couple do at first sight of the old porter？知识改变命运演讲稿
4. Why didn't the old porter deliver the goods by himlf？
5. What did the couple do after they knew the truth？
★思路点拨
spinalcord
本篇续写线索清晰，首先要把握住诚信的搬运工与以貌待人的夫妻之间的交谈，了解这对夫妇态度的转变，从而涵盖要点，抓住所给的提示信息，掌握续写方向；用自己有把握的句式增加得分点；运用高级词汇以及过渡词提升表达层次。
高分范文
Paragraph 1: When the porter heard the angry wife asking, he turned back and rushed to the market. ①Seeing the porter escaping quickly, the rich couple ran after him while calling the police. The police nearby rushed. At last, the porter stopped at the market, out of breath. ②The police ized him fast, but at this moment, they saw the old man lying there near the porter. ③When the couple arrived, they recognized the old man was the porter who they asked for delivery for them. Therefore, the angry wife shouted, "A thief here." ④However, the police stopped the woman and asked the old man to tell what happened to them.哈尼英文
Paragraph 2: Upon hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes, and the wife felt ashamed. However, they didn't say a word. Suddenly the wife went to the market and bought a meal for the old man. ⑤After the old man finished it, he struggled to his feet, saying sorry to the couple.⑥ Becau he was badly ill, he couldn't finish the delivery to their home. And he had to ask hi s workmate to do that. ⑦After the police knew they had ttled the problem, they were willing to deliver the goods for the couple." (174 words)
★篇章分析
①为现在分词短语，在句中作状语表示时间；“while+现在分词”为省略结构，在句中作状语。
②并列连词：but 连接的前后分句，其中but后的分句是e sb.doing sth，构成的复合宾语结构。
豪斯医生 第六季③连词when引导的从句作时间状语，而主句中关系代词who引导的是定语从句。
④本句中的what引导的从句作动词tell的宾语。
⑤连词after引导时间状语从句，主句中现在分词短语saying.为伴随状语。
⑥连词becau 引导原因状语从句。
⑦连词after引导的从句是时间状语从句，其中动词knew 后为省略连接词that的宾语从句。
