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“I’m going to miss you so much, Poppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions（情绪） get the better of him.
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His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son veral hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family huggedgetudto and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it,” he said. “I’ll e you back home in a month, okay?” His parents nodded, and they watched
as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy’s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”
The hou emed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn’t em interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didn’t.
They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful lf. Her owners started to get worried. “What should we do to cheer Poppy up?” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”qs全球大学排名
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the hou but us, this place could u a bit of fun. Let’s get a little dog for Poppy.
It didn’t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her no on it. Her tail began wagging（摆动）ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.
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Para 1. Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.
Para 2. A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university.
文本梳理
01语言处理
get the better of: win the victory over战胜，打败
02剧情梳理
1. Departure: Para. 1,2 &3
2. Separation: Para. 4&5
3. Recovery: Para. 6&7
4. Reunion: ........
Poppy 的情绪变化过程：
Reluctant--depresd/be in low spirits--calm--happy-- --excited
03
人物梳理
人物梳理：
Poppy, the boy, parents, + puppy
剧情设想
Para 1: Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. _____________________
1. How would Poppy react to the new-comer? (Action Description)--Main Line
2. Would Poppy be cheerful immediately? (Psychological description)--Main Line
3. How would parents react and feel? (Thought/Dialogue Prentation)--Sub-line
Para 2: A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. ________________
1. How would Poppy act at the sight of the boy?--Main Line
2. Would the puppy rush to welcome the boy?--Main Line
3. How would puppy announce its prence?--Main Line
4. How would the hou look like when the big-family gathered together? -- Happy Ending
词汇句型
01
犬的动作描写
退后几步：stepped /leapt backward(s)
摇尾巴：wagged its tail
嗅：sniff in the air
吠：barked; yipped; yapped furiously
舔：licked
窜：jumped/bounced
追：chad
蜷缩：curled up on the sofa
伸出毛茸茸的爪子：reached out its fluffy paws
探出头：popped its head out
抓住边缘：clung to the edge of the box
一课一练答案滚：roll on its back
02
人犬互动动作描写
扑：threw itlf into sb. arms
摸着它的头：stroke its glossy head
弯下腰：bent down
冲向（小主人）：come dashing/racing up to the boy
你追我赶：began a game of cha
03
句子
Upon the boy’s arrival, the dog leapt to his feet, snorted happily and bounded forward.
Poppy took much pleasure in rolling and rubbing their necks and backs with her paws.
Little puppy bit Poppy’s face and legs excitedly.
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Version 1:来自维克多英语
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy同等学力英语考试 jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog. She lowered her head to watch it curiously. Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box in an attempt to get clor. With the box tipping over, out came the little one, who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy. It didn’t take long before the two played around the hou, cheerfully running afte
俄语翻译招聘r each other.
dufuA few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university.中文翻译韩文 He had been missing his parents and the dog since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time. When the boy caught sight of Poppy, he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a big hug. Suddenly, the boy noticed the little dog. “Oh my god, who is this?” His parents laughed at the look of surpri on his face. “It’s Poppy’s new companion.” said Mom.
