02 家庭成员
2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略(全国通用版)ady
素材储备与相关话题写作指导
看到关于家庭成员的话题,首先要确立哪些人属于家庭成员:爸爸(father)、妈妈(mother)、爷爷/外公(grandfather)、奶奶/外婆(grandmother)、兄弟(brother)、姐妹(sister)。家庭成员都是和作者最亲近的人,般总是体现亲情。
实践案例
题目My mother
审题
看题目是全命题作文。妈妈是我们最亲近的人,留下最深刻印象的应该是对孩子的关爱和教育,当表达的中心都差不多的情形下,语言的运用是取胜的关键。
段落结构
从题目看,my mother,没有修辞词,也就是作者想写妈的任何方面都可以,但这样欧容易主次不分,往往会进行过多的外根损写。般像这样的写人作文。 可以得两句未要的外貌特征,面更多的是突出妈妈对我的爱和帮助,可以是泛面谈,也可以通过一件事进行描述,突出妈妈对于我的关爱。
核心词汇
描写人物外貌的常用词语
middle-aged中年的 overweight超重的
pretty漂亮的 attractive迷人的
good-looking长得好看的 white -haired白发苍苍的
straight 1 curly / long/ short hair直发/卷发长发/短发
medium height中等个头 slim苗条的
handsome英俊的 ordinary looking长相一般的
near-sighted近视的 well-dresd穿着讲究的
描写人物性格的常用词语
honest老实的 good-/bad-/quick -tempered好/坏/急脾气的
hot-tempered脾气暴躁的 easy -going好相处的
boxster怎么读
reliable值得信任的 energetic有活力的
generous大方的 punctual守时的
stubborn固执的 nsitive敏感的
open-minded思想开明的,愿意接受他人观点的
hardworking / diligent努力工作的,勤奋的
strict严厉的 friendly友好的
kind / warm-hearted好心的 reasonable讲理的
outgoing外向的 adventurous敢于冒险的
bad-mannered无礼的 talented有天赋的
enthusiastic热情的 traditional传统的
naive天真的
描写人物心情的常用词语
happy ! glad / plead高兴的 satisfied满意的
anxious焦虑的 eager急切的
exhausted精疲力竭的 surprid 1 astonished惊讶的
sorrowful悲伤的 难过的 stresd紧张的
worried担忧的 curious好奇的
abnt minded心不在焉的 disgusted厌恶的
calm平静的 relaxed放松的
terrified恐惧的
●核心词组
go to school 1 work上学/上班 do morning exercis做早操外国歌曲
cook delicious food煮美味的食物 be busy doing sth.忙于做某事
look after / take care of照顾 be 对...慈爱
ud to过去常常 read newspapers读报纸
pick up开车接某人 be full of wisdom充满智慧
get ready for ...为....做准备 be worried about ....对....担心
spend time doing sth.在做....上花费时间
参考句型
special
. He was born in ... on ... .......出生
visible是什么意思
e.g. He was born in Shanghai on January 1st, 1982.他于1982年1月1号在上海出生。
. He looks like ..他长得....
e.g. He looks like a model.他长得像模特。
He is a/an .. with ..他是...的男子
e.g. He is a handsome man with a strong and tall igure.他是一个身材高大的英俊男子。
■He is a/an .. 他是.的男子
e.g. He is a tall man who is hardworking.
他是一个工作努力的高个儿男子。
He is good at ..他擅长....
e.g. He is good at cooking.
他擅长烧菜。
■.. cares much about me in my life and study. ....在我的生活和学习中非常关心我。e.g. My mother cares much about me in my life and study.
我的妈妈在我的生活和学习中非常关心我。
普拉提培训While I am doing ... my .当我正....时我.....
e.g. While I am playing the piano, my mother always sits beside me.
当我弹琴的时候,我妈妈总是坐在我的边上。
■He always .. and looks like .是....看上去....
e.g. He always appears rious and looks like a judge.
他总是很严肃,看上去像-一个法官。
■Whenever I talk about my family with others, .. is always the one I feel most proudof.当
和别人谈论我的家人时,....总是让我感到最自豪的人。or
e.g. Whenever I talk about my family with others, my grandfather is always the oneI feel most proud of.
和别人谈论我的家人时,我的爷爷总是让我感到最自豪的人。
. Since the day I was born, I have been the apple of ... eyes,自从我出生以来,...视我为掌上明珠。
e.g. Since the day I was born, I have been the apple of my grandpa's eyes.自从我出生以来,爷爷视我为掌上明珠。
习作
My motherhierarchy
The person I have the most interactions with everyday is probably my mom.She is not a very tall person,but she is of the highest; place in my heart.She usually wears her hair up
qtvin a bun and she love wearing blue .That's how I recognize her in a group of people.I go for her whenever i need emotional support, for she is always there for me.. She always gives me uful advice. I love her deary, and I am grateful for everything she's done for her baby girl.
点评:文章虽不长,但开门见山点题,接着进行外貌描中的位置最高,讲到母亲把头发盘起来,一个干练自信的母着,作者说到了母亲在她有困难的时候给予她的帮助。最后语言个性化,符合角色性格特征,人物刻画得逼真形象。
相关话题精彩范文
(一)
A Happy Family
My name is Lin Min. I have a happy family. There are three people in my family, father, mother and 1.
My father is very tall, who likes to wear suits very much.He is very fond of reading. Even before he goes to bed, he always reads for a while. My mother is a thin lady with long hair. She often makes delicious food for me. | am of medium height with a pair of glass. I take great interests in incts. I am very happy when my parents take me to the countryside, becau I can obrve the incts there.
This is my family, a family with lots of happiness.
函授是什么
参考译文
一个幸福的家
northland
我叫林敏。我有一个幸福的家庭。我家有三口人:爸爸、妈妈和我。
我的爸爸非常高,他很喜欢穿西装。他非常喜欢看书。甚至在他睡觉前,他总会看-会儿书。我的妈妈瘦瘦的,留着长发。她经常给我做美味的食物。我有着中等身材,戴着一副眼镜。我对昆虫很感兴趣。当爸爸妈带我去郊外时,我很高兴,因为我可以在那里观察昆虫。