2021高考英语浙江卷续写：第一次挣钱题目：阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and ud it to pay family expens.
wow什么意思I didn't really understand his world either：He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass（超过）anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.
Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone（长号）.
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we misd. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned
to identify different grass like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.
yesterday once more mp3At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing up. I'm glad you will be contributing to the houhold." My dad's words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
写作指导：smart原则举例
先分析本文：
Read for clues
开头很重要：
A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities.
I didn't really understand his world either：
这两句说的父子两人彼此不理解，根据读后续写的规则：最后两人一定彼此理解了。
本文属于change类，从负面道积极。
英语六级听力真题同时本文还有一个conflict，即：
but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
这市作者的心理并说明了原因，这是很重要的线索，说明了我不想交钱给爸爸。这个线索如何照应也是需要思考的。
一篇文章可能还有很多线索，但是我们无须全部照应，我的经验是：过多的线索照应并不是好事，它会让你的文章逻辑显得拼凑一样。我们照应围绕主题的线索就可以了。
Read for plot:
barked
极简思维就是根据两个提示句上下各思考一个场景，达到每个段落两个主要场景就行了。越是极简，越能接近作者的本意。
The pay day arrived at last.
传宗接代英文
场景一：我的感受（开心，同时失落；不想把钱交给父亲）
场景二：看到父母的焦虑（不要直接说，下面的提示句是突然明白了，说明这里父母的焦虑不是直接点明的，我设计的是：我交上钱，父亲突然说，你的学费没问题了。）
说明：这样的情节构思和我个人的经历有关，我小时候的学费对于父母非常头痛，80-90年代的上学年纪的人应该深有体会，中美都一样）
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
场景三：父亲的反映和我的反馈
美国极寒天气
上文我稍微埋了一个关子，因为我要照应我如何不交钱。如果不埋关子完全没关系。
场景四：主题升华
coral我采用通过父亲的话来引出主题，然后我的感慨强化主题。
正文：
The pay day arrived at last.
scene 1. my emotion
I carefully counted the money again and again.(用不断说明我的开心）It was 80 dollars—exactly a great fortune!（心理活动，一大笔财富）My eyes sparkled but soon my heart sank at the thought of handing it over.（表情描写）Suddenly an idea came into my mind.（抖包袱）scene 2. my father’s concern
When I got home, I found my parents kept sighing, their forehead deepening.（抖包袱，说父母的焦虑）Before asking why, I handed them 40 dollars and said it was my two weeks’salary.（我的主意）“Great! Your tuition fee is ttled,”My dad exclaimed.（第二个包袱解开）
stand by me 中国好声音
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
scene 3. told him the truth
Every year, my school tuition was a big family expen.（衔接句）“Boy, proud of you,”my father gave me a big hug.（爸爸高兴的动作） However, my face flushed for my lfishness.（我的惭愧）I took out anther 40 dollars and murmured out my lie. (我吞吞吐吐说出原因）“Just keep it! You have grown up.”My father patted me on the shoulder.（父亲的话引出主题）scene 4: the theme
At that moment, I was sure we understood each other and I realized I was grown-up enough to shoulder due responsibility.（照应了文章的开头并升华了主题）
(150 words)请看考试范文，我特别喜欢最后一句；
That night, before I went to bed, l thought I would tell the farmer the next day that I would continue my work, after all l grew up.
这句不仅照应了文章的but I wasn't interested，还顺便升华了主题，同时用动作和心理描写更加有代入感。
这种写作方法非常值得学习的。
Paragraph 1:
The pay day arrived at last. I was glad that I finally got the payment after working hard for two weeks. While walking back home with an excited mind. I conceived many plans about how to dispo of it. I needed a new football becau the old one we played had already worn out.
I intended to purcha my favorite chocolates. Upon approaching the hou, I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old truck, looking sadly. It emed as if something unpleasant happened. “How much do we still need to pay for a new truck?". asked my mother. Three hundred dollars, but we just had two hundred left.”
Paragraph 2:
wednesday怎么读I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. Really, the truck my dad drove often broke down on the way, which made my dad in trouble. My parents had intended to buy a new truck but couldn't afford it. Suddenly, I realized what I should do. Stepping forward, I said, “Dad, here is what I received for my work. I think it would help you a little.”
A little surprid at what I said, my mom hugged me tightly. That night, before I went to bed, l thought I would tell the farmer the next day that I would continue my work, after all l grew up.
