热点14 读后续写
读后续写满分25分,提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容和所给段落开头语进行续写 (150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
题材内容:可读性强,多以具有冒险色彩的故事出现, 如野外游玩走散、野外遇狼或者被北极熊袭击; 但也有相对贴近考生生活的题材。
读→编→造
第1步:读出原故事的六要素 (相当于抓住原故事的主题和重点)
操作步骤:
(1)边读边想象场景,在大脑屮构造画面、拍电影。
(2)边读边用中文把主要情节写下来。(可以避免反复看原文而浪费时间)
(3)主要情节即“记叙文六要素”:人物、时间、地点、起因 、经过、结果
(谁在什么时间、什么地方,因为什么、做了什么、最终怎样。)
第二步:编依据原文中的六要素,用中文编新故事
原则:时间/地点/人物不变,起因/经过/结果顺承)
操作步骤:
(1)编情节:根据两段的首句,猜测故事发展的脉络。(可用正负法,结局一定是正向的,符合社会主义价值观;如果有标题,最后一定要点题)
(2)编细节:为续写的两个自然段各想4-5句话(用中文记下4-5个要点。)
第三步:造
disabled什么意思翻译 & 造句
kick your ass
遵循七大黄金原则
针对读后续写的题型特点, 我们可以按照以下的方式进行解题:
1.不增加人物。
由考纲样题及近5年高考真题中所给的段落首句可知,续写的故事情节发展都是由原文的人物所推进,因此,强行增加人物有可能会偏离情节发展。
2. beefcake不增加旁支情节。
圣诞节歌曲大全题目要求“考生根据所给情节进行续写”,旨在延续原材料的故事情节,并不是要发展新情节。
3.不用过多对话。在续写中展示对话,虽能丰富内容和语言, 增强语篇的连贯性, 但使用过多
的对话,会显得篇幅累赘且很难在限定的词数里把整个后续的情节发展补充完整。
4.不用负能量结局。结局设计绝对不能负能量。内容应该积极向上, 能增长知识或传播正能量。如样题的结尾, 我们可以有两种设定:这个年轻人就是银行抢劫者footballclub,而Arthur因此成为一个大英雄; 或者Arthur误会了这个年轻人是银行抢劫犯,但最终警察们还是表扬了他见义勇为的行为。
5.不在文末设置悬念。题目要求是“视野英语使之构成一篇完整的短文”, 若在文末设置悬念, 就会给人一种还没结束的感觉,这样的故事是不完整的。
6.不偏离原文主题。续写的情节应时刻围绕着短文的主题去推进,如上面的样题, 由续写第二段首句提到的“警察局”可推测, 我们可以围绕勇气及正义的主题去进行续写
7.不违背逻辑常理。情节和细节的想象要合理,符合生活常识及具有逻辑性。
冒险经历,感恩,无私奉献,梦想,克服困难,感悟等等。
(2022年1月district简写·浙江高考)
When Dr. Henderson was assigning (指定) project mates for his psychology class, I cretly hoped that he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with. Above all, I hoped he wouldn’t assign me to work with the fiercely competitive and extremely rious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match. As fate (命运) would have it, Dr. Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid.
I went up to my new teammate and introduced mylf. He looked at me as though I weren’t there. I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make hi
m fail to get an A in the cour. He wasn’t mean or abusive; he just gave me the impression that he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if he did it alone.
Needless to say, I didn’t look forward to an entire term of being brushed off, but I tried to make the best of it and didn’t say anything for fear that I would make things wor.
The project required each team to develop a hypothesis (假说), t up an experiment to test the hypothesis, do the statistical analysis and prent the findings. Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both students.
When my teammate and I met to discuss our project, I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades — the exact opposite of me. I actually wanted to drop the class at one point, but stopped short becau I didn’t want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out. I decided to stick to it no matter what.
After long discussions we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well-being of teenagers. I wasn’t sure what it meant exactly, but at least we had a topic.
阴惨
注意:
学汽车美容1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。psas
Paragraph 1:
We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.
Paragraph 2:
One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a rious dia.
(2021年6月·新高考)
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surpri they were planning for Mother's Day. How plead and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the cond stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within conds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.