新译林版高一英语必修一unit3作文精讲
高一必修一unit3作文精讲
Section ⅢIntegrated skills
写一篇交友日记
[写作指津]
本单元的写作项目属于新课标中应用体类别中的“日记”，语境话题是交友。
日记就是用文字记述自己一天生活中发生的有意义或重要的事，以及自己对某事的感受或评议。
1．主体人称为第一人称。记叙已发生的事多用一般过去时；描述自己对某事的感受或评议时多用一般现在时。
2．第一行左上角写日期和星期，右上角写天气，接下来写内容。常用today, this morning，
tonight, at that time, now, first, then, finally, at last, happen to, on my way to, on foot, hold, attend, feel, happy, delighted等词语。
3．开头可以以“Dear Diary(亲爱的日记)”起笔，也可以省略掉。
4．日记作为一种个人写作形式，日记内容通常不是任何人都能读到的。
5．语言风格上尽量使用非正式的英语，好像你在和一个亲密的朋友说话。第一人称“I”经常用于日记中。
[词句助力]
一、写作常用词汇
1．friendly adj.友好的
2．friendship n. 友谊
3．quality n. 品质
4．supportive adj. 支持的；拥护的
5．trouble n. 麻烦
6．confud adj. 困惑的
7．lfless adj. 无私的，忘我的
8．overcome v t. 克服；战胜
penis
9．honest adj. 诚实的
人教版高一英语单词10．humorous adj. 幽默的
11．helpful adj. 乐于帮助的，有益的
12．respect v t. 尊敬
13．bring out 展现出；使显露
14．get over 克服
15．get along well with 与……和睦相处
回到16．have difficulty/trouble (in) doing sth.
在做某事上有困难
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二、写作常用句式(注意黑体表达)
1．I am so anxious about losing my good friend Jack.
我很担心失去我的好朋友杰克。
2．Today is a sunny day.I went camping with my good friend Peter.
今天阳光明媚。我和我的好友彼得去露营了。
3．It is normal for teenagers to have some conflicts among them.
青少年之间有一些冲突是正常的。
4．I hope my friend is humorous and fun.
我希望我的朋友幽默又有趣。
5．I want to get along well with everyone.
我想和大家和睦相处。
6．He is lfless and we all highly respect him.
他是无私的，我们都很尊敬他。
7．He's very hard on me./He's mean to me.
他对我一点儿都不友好。
8．I owe him a lot for everything he has done for me.
我非常感谢他为我所做的一切。
9．I have been reflecting mylf the days.
这些天我一直在反思自己。
10．What happened today has left a deep impression in my memory.
今天发生的事在我的脑海里留下了很深的印象。
11．Everyone who knows him likes to make friends with him.
每个认识他的人都乐意与他交朋友。
marker是什么意思12．In my opinion, he is a kind-hearted, humorous and responsible teacher.
string是什么意思在我看来，他是一位心地善良、幽默、有责任心的教师。
13．Thanks to his help, I have made much progress and caught up with others.
多亏他的帮助，我取得了很大进步并赶上了其他同学。
[典题导学]
假定你是李华，你和好朋友Jenny因为一次误会影响了你们之间的友谊。请你写一篇日记，倾诉自己的苦恼，并说出你的打算。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Friday, October 2Sunday
Dear Diary，
[四步成文]
第一步：审题谋篇
第二步：要点翻译
1．我很担心失去我的好朋友珍妮。(anxious)
额发I am so anxious about losing my good friend Jenny.
2．我希望我们能消除我们之间的误解。(rid, 宾语从句)
I hope we can rid the misunderstanding between us．
3．这些天我一直在反思自己。(reflect)
I have been reflecting mylf the days．
4．即使是最好的朋友有冲突也是正常的。(it作形式主语)
It is normal for even best friends to have a conflict.
5．我不需要为此感到太难过。(need, upt)
I don't need to feel too upt about it.
6．我应该主动向她问好。(should, offer)
I should offer to greet her．
7．我应该找出真正的问题是什么。(what引导的宾语从句)
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I should find out what the problem really is．
8．我必须尊重和支持她做的选择。(respect，support，定语从句)
I must respect and support her choice she makes．
9．如果可能的话，我愿意承认我的错误，并真正原谅她。(admit, forgive)
If it is possible, I will offer to admit my mistakes and truly forgive her．
10．通过我们的谈话，我相信我们仍然是好朋友。(宾语从句)ola
Through our conversation, I believe we're still good friends．
11．在不久的将来，我们的友谊将比以往任何时候都更加牢固。(比较级)
In the near future, our friendship will grow stronger than ever．
第三步：词句升级
升级句式一：用连词so将第二步中的句4和句5合并为一个并列句
It is normal for even best friends to have a conflict, so I don't need to feel too upt about it.升级句式二：用动词不定式升级第二步中的句6和句7
I should offer to greet her to find out what the problem really is.
升级句式三：用状语从句省略升级第二步中的句9
If possible, I will offer to admit my mistakes and truly forgive her.
第四步：连句成篇
英语自我介绍短文Friday, October 2Sunday
Dear Diary，
I am so anxious about losing my good friend Jenny.I hope we can rid the misunderstanding
between us.To be honest, I have been reflecting mylf the days.
It is normal for even best friends to have a conflict, so I don't need to feel too upt about it.Then, I should offer to greet her to find out what the problem really is.I must respect and support her choice she makes.Most of all, if possible, I will offer to admit my mistakes and truly forgive her.
Through our conversation, I believe we're still good friends.In the near future, our friendship will grow stronger than ever.
[即时演练]
每位同学都希望自己具有良好的人际关系，成为班级中受欢迎的人。假定你是李津，请写一篇日记，描述一下受人喜爱的人所具备的美好品质(对待集体；对待他人；对待自己)。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Saturday, October 3 Cloudy
Dear Diary，
参考范文：
Saturday, October 3 Cloudy Dear Diary，
We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. To enjoy popularity, we should regard the class as our big family and even offer to give up our personal interests whenever necessary.
