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(2021.4广州二模) Aram and Rossi's Bakery
Walking along the narrow brick sidewalk, Aram took a deep breath. The air smelled of lemons and baked bread and coffee, coming from Rossi's Italian Bakery. He was almost there. Aram still couldn't believe his luck. All his friends were working boring summer jobs - waiting tables and babysitting. And here he was, about to start as an actual baker's assistant, doing what he loved. It was all thanks to his Aunt Rita. She knew Mrs Rossi and had arranged everything. It was the perfect experience for his future career. Rossi's Bakery, he was sure, would one day be known as the place where he got his start.
Ah, here he was - the bakery. A faded wooden sign over the door read "Rossi's Bakery." Aram straightened his shoulders and entered. Mrs Rossi was sitting at the counter, looking old and wi. Aram greeted her and stuck out his hand. Mrs Rossi looked at it for a cond before turning around and waving him inside. "I'm ready to learn everything." Aram said.
＂Great. Let's start with the cash register," Mrs Rossi said, "becau that's what you'll be doing."She showed him how to u the cash register. It wasn't hard. The pastry trays were all marked by price, and there weren't that many choices anyway. "That's it?" Aram said, his heart sinking. "But when do we bake?"
＂Bake? I order wholesale now. No more baking. I'm too old." Then Mrs Rossi silently held up her hands. Aram took in her knótted, swollen fingers, and
he understood. A wave of disappointment struck him. Sadness overwhelmed him so suddenly that he couldn't think of a word to say. He sighed, and Mrs Rossi sighed, too. "I ud to bake it all. Bread and cakes. And no one did it better than me. But that was when the things worked," said Mrs Rossi holding up her hands once more and glancing across the shelves filled with empty bottles labeled with names of the various ingredients(配料) she once ud. Suddenly she came alive, waving her arthritic(关节炎的）hands:"People ud to line up around the corner. Everyone wanted my baked bread."
Then a thought occured to Aram that he could ask Mrs Rossi to teach him.____________________________
Mrs Rossi finally said, "Let's buy the ingredients first." _________________________________________
2021.4广州二模续写语料自测单
1. 非谓语：
(1) ________________（沿着走）the narrow brick sidewalk, Aram took a deep breath.
(2) And here he was, about to start as an actual baker's assistant, ____________________________（做他喜欢的事情）.
(3) Mrs Rossi was sitting at the counter, ________________（看起来年迈睿智）.
2. 环境描写（无灵主语）：
emome(1) _____________________________________________
__________________（空气弥漫着柠檬，烤面包和咖啡的香气）, coming from Rossi's Italian Bakery.
(2) ______________________________________（一块褪色的木头招牌）over the door read "Rossi's Bakery."兼容性英文
正时链条3. 定语从句
Rossi's Bakery, he was sure, would one day be known as the place ______________________________________（他开始的地方）.
4. 人物情绪
(1) "That's it?" Aram said, ______________________（他的心沉下去了）.
(2) __________________________________（失望如潮水般涌向他）. ________________________（悲伤淹没了他）so suddenly that he couldn't think of a word to say.
(3) Suddenly she________________________（精神就为之一振）,waving her arthritic(关节炎的) hands.
(4) _______________________（犹豫了一会儿）, he plucked up all his courage to speak to Mrs Rossi.
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(5) Raising her eyebrows in surpri, Mrs Rossi froze, _________________
英语小故事100字______（仿佛定格在那里）.
厌倦的意思
(6) Hearing this, Aram jumped up in happiness, _______________________（眼睛像星星一样闪烁）.
5.人物外貌
Aram took in her______________________（布满疙瘩的肿胀的手指）, and he understood.
6.结尾升华
(1) 对话式结尾：
宝宝教育网
Aram said, “Thanks, Mrs Rossi, for teaching me how to make a cake to ______________________（实现我的梦想）.”
(2) 感悟式结尾：
______________________（Aram突然想到）“One should stick to his/her dream no matter what ha
ppens.”
(3) 环境衬托式结尾：
Outside the bakery, _______________________________（栖息在树枝顶端的鸟儿欢快地叽叽喳喳）, as if celebrating their achievement.
(4) 回首过去式结尾：
Many years have pasd, looking at the sign “Aram and Rossi's Bakery”______________________（挂在他们店外的招牌）, he was full of appreciation about this place where he got his start as a real baker.
(2) 自然结尾：
___________________________（面包店的每个角落再次排满了人）, and the faded wood sign shined again with a new name “Aram and Rossi's Bakery”
dyd参考答案：
Paral:
Then a thought occured to Aram that he could ask Mrs Rossi to teach him. Hesitating for a while, he plucked up all his courage to speak to Mrs Rossl, "Mrs Rossl, I'm not here to be a cashier, I am here to learn to be a baker. Could you plea teach me?" Raising her eyebrows in surpri, Mrs Rossi froze,
as if rooted on the ground. Scratching her knotted, swollen fingers, she sighed, “ I am too old to do this now. Look at my hands!"＂But I can be your hands!”Aram replied with trembling but determined voice. Moved by his words, Mrs Rossi nodded her head slowly.
Para 2:
Mrs Rossi finally said, "Let's buy the ingredients first." Hearing this, Aram jumped up in happiness, with his eyes sparkling like shining stars. All the ingredients having been bought, all tho empty bottles were filled. Mrs Rossi taught Aram how to make a cake step by step. With Mrs Rossi's guidance, Aram put all ingredients tøgether and mixed them. It looked creamy and delicious. Then, he poured it into the baking pan and put it into the oven. The whole hou was quiet except for the slight sound made by them. To their satisfaction, when the cake was taken out of the oven, the shop was flooded with the sweet fragrance from it. Aram said, "Thanks, Mrs Rossi. For teaching me how t
o make a cake to realize my dream." Mrs Rossi held his hands, saying. “ It is you who teach me how to stick to my dream."
答案：好的结尾：
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