读后续写:主旨升华句(成长型)(原卷版)
Part 1成长类故事构造“三部曲”
翻译英语句子第一步:成长前的苦恼(负面情绪塑造)
1、孤独
1. 我从来不轻易交朋友,有一段时间,我除了和一些男孩谈笑风生之外,几乎没有做什么。I never made friends easily(从不容易交朋友), and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys.
2、伤心
1. 我在口袋里什么也没发现,这个事实就像一把长矛刺进我的心脏,立刻开始流血。I found
nothing in my pocket, a fact that emed like a spear piercing into my heart which started to bleed immediately.
2. 看了看周围,我焦急地几乎哭了起来。 Looking around anxiously, I almost burst into crying.
3. 就在我崩溃的时候,克劳利带领的一群男孩从我身边走过。Just at the time I broke down, a group of boys led by Crawley pasd me.
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3、惭愧英文网络推广
1. 她充满了内疚和羞愧。She was overwhelmed / overcome/ consumed with guilt and shame (被内疚和羞愧淹没). (2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试)
2. 她突然活跃起来,挥动着患关节炎的双手。Suddenly she came alive(精神就为之一振),waving her arthritic(关节炎的) hands.
3. 一股罪恶感席卷了我,我不得不承认我去看电影了,这就是我迟到的真正原因。A wave of guilt swept over me(一阵恐惧向我袭来) and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.
4、嘲笑mythroad
他们大声地笑着,像是在尖叫“多漂亮的破表啊!”。Theybendover laughed loudly with Crawley screaming words like “What a finest broken watch!”
5、绝望
我妈妈不让我带,”我撒谎,绝望在我心中沸腾。“My mother wouldn't let me bring it,” I lied, desperation boiling inside me.
6、紧张
1. 与此同时,Karie不安地坐在座位上,双手交叉。Meanwhile, Karie sat restlessly in her at with her fingers crosd (她的手指交叉着). (2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试)
2. 她把真相告诉了老师,心怦怦直跳。She told the teacher the truth , with her heart thumping / pounding/ pumping like a drumautumn的意思(她的心跳得像打鼓一样). (2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试)
3. 在老师办公室前不安地踱来踱去,她终于鼓起勇气,迈着沉重的步伐地走了进去。Having paced up and down restlessly(不安地来回走动) in front of the the teacher's office, she finally gathered courage and plodded in.(2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试)
7、害怕
我不自觉地避免与任何人交流,因为我怕他们当面嘲笑我。I unknowingly (不知不觉地) avoided interacting (interact) with anyone becau I was afraid they’d laugh in my face(我很害怕他们会当面取笑我) .
第二步:成长中(蜕变塑造)
1、惊讶
罗西夫人惊讶地扬起眉毛,惊呆了,仿佛定格在那里一样。Raising her eyebrows in surpri, Mrs Rossi froze, as if rooted on the ground(仿佛定格在那里)
2、希望
杰斯抬起头看着他,眼睛里闪烁着希望和决心。Jayce looked up to him, his eyes sparkling with hope and determination(闪烁着希望和决心).
3、教育与成长
1. “那不是正确的方式。耐心点,Will耐心点。”男孩们离开后,一个声音在我耳边回响。“That’s not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience,” a voice echoed in my ears 英语口语面试(一个声音在我耳边回响)after the boys left.
2. “过去的事过去了,”我心里想。“现在重要的是下一步做正确的事情。”“What was done was done,” thought I to mylf. “What is important now is to do correct things next(现在重要的是下一步要做正确的事情).”
you light up my life3. 尽管愤怒、尴尬和悲伤重重地笼罩在空气中,但这个声音还是让我意识到我在试图给同学留下深刻印象时犯下的错误。Though anger, embarrassment and sadness hung heavily in the air, the voice drew me to the awareness of the mistakes I had made when I attempted to impress the boys.
第三步:成长后的升华(喜悦+感激+升华)
1、喜悦
1. Karie一边看盒子上的标签,一边咧嘴一笑。Karie grinned(grin) as she read the label on the box.(2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试)
2.爸爸看着报纸,嘴唇微微一笑。Dad looked at the paper, with his lips curving into a smile(他的嘴唇弯成了微笑). (2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试)
3.听到这话,Karie咧嘴一笑,一股幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头。Hearing that, Karie grinned from ear to ear, a wave of happiness flooding over her(幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头). (2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试)
2、感激
我看着她,爱与感激的泪水夺眶而出。I looked at her, tears of love and gratitude(感动和爱的泪水)welling up in my eyes.
3、升华句
1. 我确信,将来每当我失去耐心时,我都会记住祖父的话。I knew for sure that every time I lost patience in the future Irecommend什么意思 would remember my grandfather’s words.
2. 这是我第一次真正体会到这份礼物的意义——耐心。It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of the gift --- patience.
3. Aram说:“谢谢你,罗西太太,谢谢你教我做蛋糕来实现我的梦想。”罗西太太握着他的手说:“是你教我如何坚持我的梦想。”Aram said, “Thanks, Mrs Rossi, for teaching me how to make a cake to realize my dream(实现我的梦想).” Mrs Rossi held his hands, saying, “ It is you who teach me how to stick to my dream(坚持我的梦想).”