考点42 读后续写07 成长型（解析版）
【命题解读】
成长类的故事，是高考读后续写常见的一个主题，比如2021年的高考“我”的工资。什么叫“成长”，主要指改变观念和改变态度两类。
加班英语【思维导图】
成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）
1、孤独
I never made friends easily(从不容易交朋友), and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys. （2021年4月宁波二模）
【伤心】
托业考试时间1.我在口袋里什么也没发现，这个事实就像一把长矛刺进我的心脏，立刻开始流血。
I found nothing in my pocket, a fact that emed like a spear piercing into my heart which started to bleed immediately. （2021年4月宁波二模）
2.看了看周围，我焦急地几乎哭了起来。（2021年4月宁波二模）
Looking around anxiously, I almost burst into crying.
3.就在我崩溃的时候，克劳利带领的一群男孩从我身边走过（2021年4月宁波二模）
Just at the time I broke down, a group of boys led by Crawley pasd me.
3、惭愧
西奥多罗斯福1. She was overwhelmed / overcome/ consumed with guilt and shame (被内疚和羞愧淹没). （2020.1
1月潍坊高三英语期中考试）
2. Suddenly she came alive（精神就为之一振）,waving her arthritic(关节炎的) hands.（2021广二模）
3. A wave of guilt swept over me(一阵恐惧向我袭来) and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.（2020届山东省滨州市高三第二次模拟英语试题）
4、嘲笑
他们大声地笑着，像是在尖叫“多漂亮的破表啊！”（2021年4月宁波二模）
They laughed loudly with Crawley screaming words like “What a finest broken watch!”
5、绝望
六级考试题型
我妈妈不让我带，”我撒谎，绝望在我心中沸腾。（2021年4月宁波二模）
“My mother wouldn't let me bring it,” I lied, desperation boiling inside me.
6、紧张
1. Meanwhile, Karie sat restlessly in her at with her fingers crosd (她的手指交叉着). （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）
2. She told the teacher the truth , with her heart thumping / pounding/ pumping like a drum(她的心跳得像打鼓一样). （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）
3. Having paced up and down restlessly(不安地来回走动) in front of the the teacher's office, she finally gathered courage and plodded in.（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）
7、害怕
I unknowingly (不知不觉地) avoided interacting (interact) with anyone becau I was afraid they’d laugh in my face(我很害怕他们会当面取笑我) . （2021沈阳市一模）
成长中（蜕变塑造）
1、惊讶
Raising her eyebrows in surpri, Mrs Rossi froze, as if rooted on the ground（仿佛定格在那里）.（2021广二模）
2、希望
Jayce looked up to him, his eyes sparkling with hope and determination（闪烁着希望和决心）.（2021年汕头一模）
3、教育与成长
1. “That’s not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience,” a voice echoed in my ears(一个声音在我耳边回响)after the boys left.（2021年4月宁波二模）
2. “What was done was done,” thought I to mylf. “What is important now is to do correct things next(现在重要的是下一步要做正确的事情).” （2021年4月宁波二模）
3. 尽管愤怒、尴尬和悲伤重重地笼罩在空气中，但这个声音还是让我意识到我在试图给同学留下深刻印象时犯下的错误。（2021年4月宁波二模）
Though anger, embarrassment and sadness hung heavily in the air, the voice drew me to the awareness of the mistakes I had made when I attempted to impress the boys.
成长后的升华（喜悦+感激+升华）
1、喜悦
1. Karie grinned(grin) as she read the label on the box.（潍坊高三英语期中考试）
2. Dad looked at the paper, with his lips curving into a smile（他的嘴唇弯成了微笑）. （潍坊高三英语期中考试）
3. Hearing that, Karie grinned from ear to ear, a wave of happiness flooding over her（幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头）. （潍坊高三英语期中考试）
2、感激
I looked at her, tears of love and gratitude(感动和爱的泪水)welling up in my eyes.（2021沈阳市一模）
3、升华句
1. 我确信，将来每当我失去耐心时，我都会记住祖父的话。（2021年4月宁波二模）
在线词源I knew for sure that every time I lost patience in the future I would remember my grandfather’s words.
2. 这是我第一次真正体会到这份礼物的意义——耐心。（2021年4月宁波二模）
It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of the gift --- patience.
然而，从那时起，我保证这只破表会一直提醒我耐心等待，直到真相出现。（2021年4月宁波二模）
2、Aram said, “Thanks, Mrs Rossi, for teaching me how to make a cake to realize my dream（实现我的梦想）.” Mrs Rossi held his hands, saying, “ It is you who teach me how to stick to my dream(坚持我的梦想).”（2021广二模）
4、It dawned on Aram that（Aram突然想到）“One should stick to his/her dream no matter what happens.”（2021广二模））
成长类场景描写
一、学习知识而成长
知识就是力量！在改变的过程中，学习不同的知识，然后才能面对各种困难和挑战。比如屏幕前的你，不就是在学习读后续写的技巧吗？请看下面的例句，也是我送给正在学习的你。
It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。
【分析】individual这里表示“个人，个体”。make more attempts 做更多尝试。
二、发挥天赋促成长
认识自身天赋，并且发挥天赋，这是改变我们的现状的一个重要条件。请看下面的例句。Actually, every individual posss talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.
事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。
【分析】posss 拥有。create miracles表示创造奇迹。
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李阳疯狂英语官方网永远不要忽视了梦想的力量！“做人如果没有理想，跟咸鱼有什么区别呢”。请看下面两个例句。
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It's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。
As long as we dare to dream and don't let difficulties get in our way, anything is possible.只要我们敢于梦想，不被困难所阻挡，一切皆有可能。
【分析】take full advantage of 充分利用，realize your dreams表示“实现梦想”
世界大学排名发布四、克服困难促而成长acne
只有克服各种苦难，才能改变现状。请看下面的例句。
The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal (success) finally.
通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标（成功）。
【分析】smooth 表示“平坦的”overcome all the difficulties 表示“克服困难”；make every effort 表示“做出努力”；as long as，表示“只要”，引导条件状语从句。
【模拟题1】（2022·广东韶关·一模）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I was walking along the road to school one day and I met my friend Raine. He suggested that we skip school and go to the movies. I refud as my dad was very fierce and strict. After much persuasion, I gave in. There was a Will Smith movie on and I was a fan.
So we t off to the movies together, bought our tickets, popcorn and drinks and ttled down comfortably. As we were early, the lights were still on. We watched people come in groups, families and there were couples too. Some of them looked like school students playing truant（逃学）like us. As I turned around, I caught a glimp of my uncle Andy and Aunt Jane walking in. They were kind a
nd cared about me very much. I sank into my at quickly to avoid being spotted. I signaled to Raine that there was someone I didn’t want to e and Raine made it more obvious by turning around and asking “Who? And where?” loudly. It made me sit even lower in my at.
To make things wor, they came and sat in the row behind us and were saying to each other how I would
