2021届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析（一）13
读后续写类25篇（四）
1.（2020·江苏连云港市·高三期中）阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给的段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was six years old and my sister, Sally Kay, was a submissive(顺从的）followingthree. For some reason,I thought we needed to earn some money.I decided we should "hire out" as maids. We visited the neighbors, offering to clean hous for them for a quarter cents.
Reasonable as our offer was,there were no takers. But one neighbor telephoned Mother to let her know what Mary Alice and Sally Kay were doing.Mother had just hung up the phone when we came bursting through the back door, into the kitchen of our apartment. “Girls,” Mother asked, “ Why were you two going around the neighborhood telling people you would clean their hous?”
Mother wasn't angry with us. In fact, we learned afterwards, she was amud that we had c
ome up with such an idea. But, for some reason, we both denied having done any' such thing. Shocked and terribly hurt that her dear little girls could be such“bold-faced(厚颜无耻的）liars,"Mother then told us that Mrs. Jones had just called to tell her we had been to her hou and said we would clean it for a quarter.
Faced with the truth, we admitted what we had done. Mother said that we had“fibbed（撒个小谎）。”We had not told the truth.She tried to explain why a fib hurt but she didn't feel that we really understood.
Mother decided to teach us a lesson, one that we never forgot. Then an idea came to her in a flash. She cheerfully continued preparing for lunch.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150词左右（每段开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As we were chewing on sandwiches, she asked, “Would you two like to go to the movies this afternoon?”
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Mother bent and gathered us in her arms with tears in her eyes.
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【答案】One possible version:
As we were chewing on sandwiches, she asked, “Would you two like to go to the movies this afternoon?” “Wow! Fantastic!” We soon got bathed and dresd up. It was like getting ready for a birthday party. We hurried outside the apartment, not wanting to miss the bus that would take us downtown. On the landing, Mother astonished us by saying, “Girls, we are not going to the movies today.” “What?” We couldn’t believe our ears. “What do you mean? Mommy, you SAID it!”
Mother bent and gathered us in her arms with tears in her eyes. She gently explained that this was what a fib felt like. “It is important that what we SAY is TRUE,” Mother said, “I fibbed to you just now and it felt awful. I don’t want to fib again and I’m sure you don’t either.” That is how my sister and I learned to be truthful. We have never forgotten how much a fib can hurt.
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disguid【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。本文讲述了作者六岁时和妹妹一起做的事，无意中撒谎欺骗了母亲。母亲发现后，不是粗暴的批评，而是想办法用事实对她们两个进行教育。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容lisun“我们一边嚼着三明治，她一边问: ‘今天下午你们两个愿意去看电影吗? ’”可知，第一段可以描写，孩子们听说要去看电影之后的快乐心情以及为看电影做准备。但是为了用事实教育孩子们要诚实，妈妈又故意反悔。第一段后半部分可以描写妈妈
反悔后，孩子们不愉快的表现。
②由第二段首句内容“母亲弯下腰，把我们抱在怀里，眼里含着泪水。”moraz可知，第二段可描写妈妈用事实教育孩子学做诚实的人。
2.续写线索：快乐——准备看电影dance怎么读——妈妈反悔——难过——事实教育——结果
3.词汇激活
新加坡楷博高等教育学院行为类
①孩子准备：get bathed/ dress up/ hurry outside the apartment
②妈妈反悔：astonish us by saying / not go to the movies
③教育及结果：explain/ learn to be truthful
情绪类
①.高兴：fantastic / like getting ready for a birthday party
②.惊讶难过：couldn’t believe our ears/ feel awful
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. We hurried outside the apartment, not wanting to miss the bus that would ta
ke us downtown.（非谓语动词作状语）
[高分句型2]. She gently explained that this was what a fib felt like.（名词性从句）
[高分句型3]. It is important that what we SAY is TRUE.（名词性从句及形式主语）
口边
2.（2020·广东湛江市·高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I stared at the hundreds of jigsaw puzzle(拼图）pieces spread out on the table. “This is going to take a while. ”
“Isn't that the point?” My 17-year-old daughter, Julia, said. “To keep us off the screens during the quarantine(隔离）？compact是什么意思”
“Right,” I said.
“Maybe this will take my mind off everything I've lost,” Julia said. She was a nior in high school, missing the last weeks of school with her friends and teachers. A competition she'
d worked for all school year was now canceled. There's uncertainty about her graduation ceremony. Next week, she'd celebrate her 18th birthday at home, unable to e her friends. But her biggest worry was for the college scholarship she'd applied for. With the university clod,the decision had been delayed.She couldn't choo which school to attend without knowing how much financial help she'd receive. Her whole future felt uncertain.
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