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书面表达--应用文写作
【2021届安徽省六校教育研究会高三第一次素质测试】假定你是李华。为弘扬中国文化,学生会将举办主题为“中国文化”的英语演讲比赛。 作为国际学校学生会主席,你将在比赛开始前发言。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。
1. 活动的主题及意义;2. 中国文化博大精深;3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。注意:1. 词数 100 词左右;anytime
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;contraction
3. 短文开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Ladies and gentlemen,
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
Good afternoon! Welcome to this year's English speech competition. As the chairman of the Student Union, I am greatly honored to share aspects about it with you as follows:
Firstly, the theme of this speech competition is Chine culture, which should be mainly introduced to the foreigners. And it goes without saying that holding this activity is very meaningful to us. By doing so, not only can we carry forward Chine culture, but also it can enhance cultural confidence.
In addition, we are suppod to introduce that Chine culture is extensive and profound. For one thing, we have unique language and our national arts are colorful. For another, Chine traditional festivals have a long history.
In the end, I sincerely hope that this year's activity will be held very successfully. And thank you for your active participation.
That's all! Thank you!
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生为学校即将举办的主题为“中国文化”的英语讲演比赛写一篇发言稿。
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时为主
结构:总分总 buildup
要求:
折草记1. 活动的主题及意义;
2. 中国文化博大精深;
3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
warfarewelcome to/ be honored to do sth./ as follows/ introduce…to…/ not only…but also…/ in a
ddition/ be suppod to do sth./ in the end/ for one thing/ for another
第三步:连词成句
1. Welcome to this year's English speech competition.
2. As the chairman of the Student Union, I am greatly honored to share aspects about it with you as follows:
3. Firstly, the theme of this speech competition is Chine culture, which should be mainly introduced to the foreigners.
4. And it goes without saying that holding this activity is very meaningful to us. 身价百倍
5. By doing so, not only can we carry forward Chine culture, but also it can enhance cultural confidence.
小学生感恩演讲稿6. In addition, we are suppod to introduce that Chine culture is extensive and profound.
7. For one thing, we have unique language and our national arts are colorful.
8. For another, Chine traditional festivals have a long history.
9. In the end, I sincerely hope that this year's activity will be held very successfully.
10. And thank you for your active participation.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:becau/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【点睛】
范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句,例如 Firstly, the theme of this speech competition is Chine culture, which should be mainly introduced to the foreigners.中which引导非限制性定语从句;In addition, we are suppod to introduce that Chine culture is extensive and profound.中that引导宾语从句。
【2021届湖南省邵阳市高三上学期第一次联考】假设你是李华,你校最近要举行运动会,请你写一封邮件邀请在你校做交换生的美国好友Jack参加,内容包括:1. 发出邀请;2. 时间、地点和内容;3. 表达期待。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jack,
I am writing to invite you to participate in the sports meeting to be held in our school next week.
Beginning on Monday morning on the playground, the sports meeting will last three days, with a wonderful opening ceremony in the newly-built gymnasium. Two hundred athletes will take part in a variety of sports events, including not only the traditional events like running races, but also some interesting group events. You can sign up for any sport event you like. I’m sure you’ll find it exciting and educational.
You can contact me at any time for further information.列夫托尔斯泰简介
Best wishes.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
transcendent第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是李华,你校最近要举行运动会,请你写一封邮件邀请在你
校做交换生的美国好友Jack参加,内容包括:1. 发出邀请;2. 时间、地点和内容;3. 表达期待。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):the sports meeting (运动会);opening ceremony (开幕式);newly-built gymnasium (新建的体育馆);a variety of (各种各样的)等。