英语专四系列：作文之赏析--店铺的利与弊
第一篇：英语专四系列：作文之赏析--店铺的利与弊
英语专四系列：作文之范文赏析--店铺的利与弊 题目：Studying Abroad: Hardships and Rewards 写作要求
Nowadays more and more students choo to go abroad after they graduate from colleges and universities.They say that they benefi t a lot from it, though some people argue that there are many hardships and diffi culties.What洗车行业’s your opinion about it?
Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Studying Abroad: Hardships and Rewards
You are to write in three parts.In the fi rst part, state specifi cally what your idea is.In the cond part, provide reasons to support your opinion OR describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.Failure to
follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.审题思路
本题是一个观点选择型的题目，就目前大学生在毕业后选择 留学的利弊孰大孰小进行分析。题目可以从以下几个方面入手：
思路1：利大于弊
虽然有困难，但整体上利大于弊，利体现在 ：1.教学软件硬件优异 ；2.有利于将来就业等。
思路2 ：弊大于利
blue movie虽然有好处，但整体上弊大于利，弊体现在 ：1.费用昂贵 ；2.文化差异，难以融入其中等。
思路3 ：应具体问题具体分析，因人而异
留学有益，体现参考思路1；
留学也有弊端，体现参考思路2 ；
是否选择留学，应根据个人情况而定。
Studying Abroad: Hardships and Rewards
There is no denying the fact that studying abroad is a hotly debated2 topic today.As far as I’m，concerned, I believe hardships and rewards coexist and people have to consider it from all sides.引言部分：作者先提出留学是个热门话题，然后说明留学有利有弊应全面综合来考虑。这表明下文将既讲利又讲弊。
Obviously, studying abroad has a number of rewards.In the ca western rerve universityfirst place, a student can have access to advanced science and technology as well as desirable working conditions which mightnot be available at home.In the cond place, he can be expod to entirely new
ideas and trends.Last but not least, by living and studying in a foreign country, one can improve his foreign language much faster than at home.Nevertheless, as every coin has two sides, studying abroad also confronts one with a ries of hardships.For one thing, le
weightarning a foreign language is far from an easy thing at the beginning for most people.For another, a completely new environment with different customs and habits may
also be a barrier to overas students, especially to the young.An added difficulty lies with finance: it can cost a lot to study abroad.主体部分：作者先说有几个显而易见的益处是列举观点时常用的句式。然后用“In the first place,...In the cond place,...Last but not least”。nevertheless进行转折，说明留学会让人遇到很多困难。这时列举所用的句式换为“for ”使文章更富有变化。
Therefore, studying abroad should be viewed as a two-edged sword, which prents us with10 both benefi ts and troubles.The best policy11, as I e it, is to take into consideration his financial conditions and his ability to adapt to new surrounding.Personally，I’d choo to go abroad and study if I find it necessary.总结部分 ：作者概述上面所列利弊，用“a two-edged sword”来概括再恰 当不过，并提出选择店铺的标准应该是“take into consideration his financial conditions and his ability to adapt to new surrounding”。
亮点回放
1.there is no denying that:“无可否认” ；还可以用undoubtedly，without doubt等更为简洁的表达方式。
2.hotly debated: “被激烈讨论的” ；相当于“heavily/frequently discusd”，但比之要g更地道些。
3.rewards: “奖赏、报酬、报答” ；此处表示“回报”，近义词为“returns”。
4.have access to: “能获得”，access的形容词accessible也经常使用在be accessible to的词组中，注意与之区别。
5.desirable:“令人满意的，称心如意的”，另外它的反义词
undesirable表示
“不尽如人意的”。
6.be expod to: “暴露在„„之下”，此处还可以用 “be faced with，be confronted with”等。
7.confront sb.with sth.: “使某人遭遇到
（某事）”，此处注意与be expod to的区别，前者不以人为主语，用主动语态 ；后者以人为主语，用被动语态。
8.far from: “远离”，此处表示ellen
“远非”，相当于never，但语气委婉些。
9.barrier:“障碍”，近义词还有
“obstacle，block，hardship，tback”等。additions
10.prent sb.with sth.: “给某人带来某物”，也可以用
“provide sb.with sth.”，但prent 显得更正式些。
11.policy : “政策、方针、保险单”，此处 “the best policy ”表示“最好的办法”，用法地道。
第二篇：英语作文有关店铺的利与弊
店铺
Nowadays, many people like to study abroad.Studying abroad is often considered as a great opportunity which will lead to bright future in one's ride of passage.Not only can we learn different cultures and knowledge from foreign countries, studying abroad can also enrich our lives.One coin has two sides.Likewi, different people have different minds.Conrvative and negative concerns about studying abroad have been gradually emerging from our society.People start to wonder what goes wrong with studying abroad.There are a couple of issues worth of our discussions.Disadvantages of studying abroad may affect one's life culturally and economically.We Chine will experience cultural shocks if we study abroad and live in another country.Some peers may not be able to adapt to a new environment of their studying and living, which may be very different from that of theirs.Life is beautiful, and it is hard.If one does not feel comfortable with the new culture of another country, he will not be happy about studying in that country.In addition, studying abroad can cost students a great deal of living expens.Some Chine students are so academically successful that they receive schol
arships in their studies.However, most peers who study abroad do not receive scholarships.Furthermore, they have to deal with many unexpected hardships by living away from their parents and homeland.For example, medical insurance, daily foods, clothes, rents and transportation can generate a large amount of living expens.Often time, they need to heavily depend on their parents' overas monthly payments.I have discusd some benefits and disadvantages of studying abroad.Life is not easy that we know.My belief is that for tho students who study abroad should build strong characters in facing of unexpected difficulties in their life.2
第三篇：英语专四系列：作文之赏析--在校大学生结婚
英语专四系列：作文之范文赏析--在校大学生结婚
由衷的拼音题目：Getting Married in College 写作要求
In 2005, the Department of Education lifted the ban on students getting married while still in college.And it has been a hot topic for people from all walks of life.What’s your opinion about it?
Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Getting Married in College
You are to write in three parts.In the this的复数fi rst part, state speciparameter是什么意思fi cally what your idea is.In the cond part, provide reasons to support your opinion OR describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion
or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.审题思路
本题是一道观点选择型的题目，论述对在校大学生结婚一事的看法，可以从以下几方面着手 ：
