专题02读后续写：环境描写（解析版）
借景抒情、寓情于景是写作中常用的手法。恰当的背景场景描写有利于推动故事情节的 发展，烘托人物的心理活动，给读者身临其境的感受。背景场景描写要有全貌有细节，有全 景有特写，要点面结合，重点突出。可以描写事件发生的时间、地点、环境等，也可以描写 人看到的景象或感受到的某种情绪。
注意：环境描写只是起画龙点睛的作用，环境描写不要写太长，且环境描写一定 为你的内容服务，而不是为了看起来高大上。所以我也提醒大家写作的时候千万不要 本末倒置，写一些无关紧要的套句或者环境描写只会对情节起到反作用。那么接下来 我们先看看环境描写的常见作用以及常见的环境描写素材。
自然环境描写在读后续写中的作用衬托或突出人物性格、心理等
1.暗示或推动故事情节发展增添或烘托某种气氛和意境，奠定基调
2.揭示主题，深化主旨|1 .气氛氛围（1）
A heavy silence blanketed the room.（描写房间的寂静）A hush fell upon the class.（描写教室寂静）
The hou smelled musty and damp, and a little sweet, as if it were haunted by the ghosts of long-dead cookies.（描写屋内环境）An absolute darkness ruled the forest.（描写黑暗）
It didn't take too long for the forest to be enveloped in darkness.（描写森林变暗）There were a deathly stillness in the hou.（描写死寂）
There was a moment of sinister silence, （hen a multitudinous stirring of （he leaves.（描写 暴风雨前的死寂）An air of sadness ttled over the group.（描写悲伤氛围）
It suddenly emed frighteningly quiet. The air was charged with tension,（描写紧张气 氛）The silence of the forest was ripped apart by a sound like a roaring wind.（描写狂风打破 寂静）
There was no view anywhere, nothing but the oppressive and silent scrub.（描写死寂的
树 林）参考答案：
1 .约翰•布兰查德看到这个40多岁的女人很失望。
2.没错，她就是他等的那个女孩。
3.尽管他想跟着那位年轻的女士，他还是停下来，朝那位女士走去，向她打招呼，并 拿出他在图书馆里找到的那本书。
4."我是约翰•布兰查德，你一定是霍利斯•梅内尔小姐。我非常高兴你能见到我，我 可以请你吃饭吗？"
5. ”我不知道这是怎么回事，"她回答说，"但是刚才路过的那个穿着淡绿色西装的 年轻女士求我把红玫瑰戴在我的外套上。
6.她说如果你要请我吃饭，我应该告诉你她在街对面的餐厅等你。她说这是个考验！" 参考范文：
Paragraph 1 :
Almost uncontrollably he made his way to the woman,and then he noticed that she was wearing a red ro. John Blanchard was disappointed to c the woman, who was over 40 years old. Exactly, She was the girl he was waiting for. Though he would like to follow the young lady, he stopped and walked toward the woman, greeted her and held out the book he found in the library. "I'm John Blanchard, and you must be Miss Hollis Maynell. I am more than glad you could meet me; may I take you to dinner ? ”
Paragraph 2 :
The woman's face broadened into a big smile. "I don't know what this is about , "sheanswered, "but the young lady in her pale green suit who just went by begged me to wear the red ro on my coat. And she said if you were going to invite me to dinner, I sho
uld tell you that she is waiting for you in the restaurant across the street. She said i( was a test !"
I 2.气氛氛围J2）the blue sky 蓝天 the songs of birds 鸟鸣 the thundering clouds 雷霆万钧的云 the fragile flowers 娇嫩的花 the green grass 青草 the fragrant ros 芬芳的玫瑰（he tting / rising sun 落 日/冉冉升起的太阳Dark clouds were gathering in the sky.乌云密布。
The night sky was lit 叩 by flashes of light.—道道灯光照亮了夜空。
The clouds had spread and nearly covered the entire sky.云彩扩散开来，几乎遮住了整个天空。
The sun was now high in the southern sky.太阳正高挂在南边的天空上。
The sun went in, and the breeze became cold.云层遮住了太阳，微风有了些凉意。
The mist melted rapidly in the morning sun,在早晨的阳光下,薄雾涣然消散了。
The mountain area is covered entirely in den jungle.山区完全掩映在茂密的丛林中。
We climbed 叩 a winding （rack towards a mountain refuge.我们沿着一条蜿蜒的小道爬向山上 的难所。
The mountain top was covered with snow.山顶被积雪覆盖。
The region is uninhabited except for a few mountain villages.除了几个小山村之外,这个地区 杳无人烟。
Bathed in the sunshine and delighted by fantastic scenery, wc headed for the destination.沐浴在 阳光下，享受着美丽的风景,我们向目的地出发。
