读后续写素材积累1 2019.10.16
一、环境描写的素材
环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物本身入手，主观则从观察者
角度描写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行，主观描写比重稍大。
主观描写比重稍大。
客观环境描写:八阵图杜甫
Part 1 环境描写的adj要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道
the blue sky(蓝天)the songs of birds(鸟鸣)the thundering clouds(电光闪雷鸣)
the fragile flowers (娇嫩的花);(the dark, raining evening 雨夜交加的夜晚)the green
grass(青草) the fragrant ros(艳丽的玫瑰); the ng/rising sun(落日/冉冉升起的
工商管理类
太阳)…
Part 2 环境描写的verb (vi&vt)要求
一).Wind (blow/click/howl/wail/roar)
1.A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain,…一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。
就像卷起的窗帘。
2.The wind, so and cold, clicked through tree branches and s rred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。
搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。
3.A cool breeze blew through the quiet park.
凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。
凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。
4.A cold breeze wa ed through my hair. (
冷风吹拂过我的头发)
The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some li .
(今日正是放风筝的好天气，强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升。)
二).Water (flow/travel/move/meander/enter)
声音:1.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley. 潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。
在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。
颜色2.The 2.The water
water water was was was deep deep deep blue blue blue and and and sunlight sunlight sunlight gli ered gli ered gli ered on on on its its its looking looking looking glass-clear glass-clear surface.水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。
3.A li le way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling along between green bank. 离此不远，有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。
4. It murmured in a so voice like a li le innocent girl whispered to her loving mother.
似乎它在温柔低语，就一位天真少女对着她那慈爱的母亲细细私语。
(ac on, sound, colour)
三).Sky (stand/ appear/turn)
1.The sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds.
天空是浓浓的灰色，伴着拥挤的朵朵云伴着拥挤的朵朵云
2.Blue skies stood tall and far 蓝蓝的天空高高耸立蓝蓝的天空高高耸立
主观环境描写:
1.Sb found sth adj/doing/done 某人发现某物某人发现某物(状态/动作/被)...
2.Sb saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done 某人看到/听到/感到/闻到某物(状态/动作/被)
3.It was so adj that we find/feel 它是如此以至于以至于
4.Sth kept sb spellbound/amazed/景物使我如此陶醉/惊讶/
sth held sb en rely in their power 景物让我完全惊呆了景物让我完全惊呆了
5.It looked/emed/appeared/felt like …景物看起来像…
二、场景描写的素材(来自原著：追风筝的人)
1. At least two dozen kites already hung in the sky, like paper sharks roaming for prey. Within an hour, the number doubled, and red, blue, and yellow kites glided and spun
in the sky. A cold breeze wa ed through my hair. The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some li , make the sweeps easier.
(放风筝的场景描写，从各个角度，立体描述)
空中已经挂着至少二十来只风筝，如同纸制的鲨鱼，巡游搜猎食物。不到一个钟头,
这个数字翻了一番，红色的、蓝色的、黄色的风筝在苍穹来回飞舞，熠熠生辉。寒
冷的微风吹过我的头发。这风正适宜放风筝，风速不大，恰好能让风筝飘浮起来，也
便于操控。
有龙的成语便于操控。
2.The water was a deep blue and sunlight gli ered on its looking glass-clear surface. 湖水澄蓝，波平如镜，阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉。
阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉。
3. Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sk They danced high above the trees on the west end of the park, over the windmills, floa ng side by side like a pair of eyes looking down on San Francisco, the city I now call home. (场景、比喻)
我抬起头，望见两只红色的风筝，带着长长的蓝色尾巴，在天空中冉冉升起。它们舞
动着，飞越公园西边的树林，飞越风车，并排飘浮着，如同一双眼睛俯视着旧金山，这
个我现在当成家园的城市。
个我现在当成家园的城市。
4. Blue skies stood tall and far, the sun l ike a branding iron aring the back of you neck. Creeks where Hassan and I skipped stones all spring turned dry, and rickshaws s rred dust when they spu ered by.(场景、比喻)
天空一碧如洗，阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈。整个春天我和哈桑在溪流打水漂，到了夏
扬起阵阵灰尘。
天它们也干涸了。黄包车嗒嗒走过，扬起阵阵灰尘。
so and
and cold,
cold, clicked
The wind, so
clicked Somewhere, a a branch
5. Somewhere,
谢谢您的爱branch snapped,
snapped, an owl hooted.
hooted. The
through through tree tree tree branches branches branches and and and s rred s rred s rred the the the bushes bushes bushes that that that sprinkled sprinkled sprinkled the the the slope. slope. slope. And And And from from below, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.
在某个地方传来树枝劈啪作响的声音，还有猫头鹰的叫声。寒风微微拂动树枝，吹过山坡上的灌木丛。而下面，水流在山谷淌动，传来阵阵微弱的声音。传来阵阵微弱的声音。
6. By three o'clock, the rain had stopped and the sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds. A cool breeze blew through the park.(天气)
到三点时，雨停了，铅灰色的天空阴云密布，一阵寒风吹过公园。一阵寒风吹过公园。
7. 7. The The The sun sun sun was was was beginning beginning beginning to to to t, t,
t, gli ering gli ering gli ering red red red through through through the the the cracks cracks cracks between between between the the ramshackle buildings.(景象景象)
太阳开始下山，那些摇摇欲坠的房子的裂缝中，渗出闪闪的红色斜晖。渗出闪闪的红色斜晖。
三、描写时间，动作，心理和情感
一)、情感好词:
1.喜乐
① ① The The The smile smile smile on on on her her her face face face shone shone shone like like like a a a diamond.diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。光。
② A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。 ③ A ripple of excitement ran through them.一阵激动声穿过他们。一阵激动声穿过他们。
④ Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕。笑声在房间里萦绕。
⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
⑥ A wild gaiety(快乐) took hold of her.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
⑦ Unforge able were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。
⑧ I was wild with joy.
我欣喜若狂。
我欣喜若狂。
⑨ I was plead beyond descrip on.
我高兴得难以形容。
我高兴得难以形容。
⑩ She wore a shining smile on her face.
她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
⑪ Her smile lit up the whole room.
她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
⑫ She shed tears of joy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。
她高兴得流下了眼泪。
⑬ Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.
她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。
她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。⑭ She was overflowing with happiness.
她洋溢着幸福。
她洋溢着幸福。
⑮ Her flushed face was shining with excitement.
她激动得满脸通红。
她激动得满脸通红。
⑯ Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悦。
她心中涌起喜悦。
⑰ I was floa ng on air.我漂浮在空中。
我漂浮在空中。
⑱ Amument gleamed in his eyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。
他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。
他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。
2.愤怒:
① I was ized by anger.我充满了愤怒。闯红灯如何处罚
我充满了愤怒。
② He was fuming with rage.
他气得大发雷霆。
他气得大发雷霆。
③ His anger boiled over.他的愤怒爆发了。
他的愤怒爆发了。
④ He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.
他几乎控制不住怒火。
他几乎控制不住怒火。
⑤ He was breathing fire and fury.
他充满着怒火。
他充满着怒火。
夺命田野⑥ His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
⑦ He gave me a look of burning anger.
他愤怒地看了我一眼。
他愤怒地看了我一眼。
⑧ He glared at me with burning eyes.
他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
冉有⑨ He flared up at the word.
他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。
他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。
简单拼图⑩ His face clouded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉。
他气得脸色阴沉。
