专业英语八级(翻译)-试卷106代理服务费
(总分:12.00,做题时间:90分钟)
一、 TRANSLATION(总题数:6,分数:12.00)
1.PART IV TRANSLATION(分数:2.00)
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解析:
2.在人际关系问题上我们不要太浪漫主义。人是很有趣的,往往在接触一个人时首先看到的都是他或她的优点。这一点颇像是在餐馆里用餐的经验。开始吃头盘或冷碟的时候,印象很好。吃头两个主菜时,也是赞不绝口。愈吃愈趋于冷静,吃完了这顿宴席,缺点就都找出来了。于是转喜为怒,转赞美为责备挑剔,转首肯为摇头。这是因为,第一,开始吃的时候你正处于饥饿状态,而饿了吃糠甜如蜜,饱了吃蜜也不甜。 第二,你初到一个餐馆,开始举筷时有新鲜感,新盖的茅房三天香,这也可以叫做“陌生化效应”吧。
羊毛怎么洗(分数:2.00)女人心思
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正确答案:(正确答案:We should not be too romantic about interpersonal relationship. It's interesting that people tend to notice only the merits of others when they first encounter them. This is much like the experience of dining in restaurants. The first dish or appetizer usually impress you, and you are likely to keep singing the high prai of the first two main dishes as you eat them. However, as the meal goes on, you get less and less excited about it. By the time the dinner comes to an end, faults are found in everything. Your joy turns to anger; your prai becomes criticism; and your approval changes into disapproval. One reason for this change is that every time before you start a meal you are hungry, and your hunger makes chaff taste like honey, but when your stomach is full, even honey will be tasteless to you.)
解析:解析:1.本段以口语形式对一个常见的生活现象发表议论,故采用一般现在时为总体时态。 2.第1句的“在人际关系问题上”可译为about human relationships或about interpersonal relationships,比on the issue of human relationship更为简洁;第2句的“接触”可译成encounter或meet,但不宜译成contact,因为contact主要表示“联系”的意思。“看护发素的正确用法
到(优点)”可译成notice或spot。 3.第3句的翻译难点是“餐馆里用餐的经验”,“经验(experience)”作为中心词,其修饰语of dining/havingdinner in restaurants宜后置,使句子符合英语用法习惯。 4.第4句的“头盘或冷碟”容易理解,但翻译时却难找出合适的词来,“头盘”即第一道菜,可译为the firstdish,也可译成starter或appetizer。“印象”一词可由名词转译为动词,译为sth.impress sb.更加地道。第5句的“赞不绝口”可译成keep singing the high prai of,其中的keep包含了“长时间”的意思。 5.第6句的“愈吃愈趋于冷静”可译为as the meal goes on,you get less and less excited about it。 6.第7句的三个“转”,可分别译成turns to,becomes,changes into等,避免用词重复,体现表达的多样化。 7.原文中没有表述出来的主语、语气词和关联词,在译成英语时要注意补充完整,如第5、6句应补译主语you;又如第6句的“愈吃愈趋于冷静”与上文之间存在明显的转折关系,翻译时应增加However一词,明确逻辑关系。
3.大自然对人的恩赐,无论贫富,一律平等,所以人们对于大自然全都一致并深深地依赖着。尤其在乡间,上千年来人们一直以不变的方式生活着:种植庄稼和葡萄,酿酒和饮酒,喂牛和挤奶,锄草和栽花;在周末去教堂祈祷和做礼拜,在节日到广场拉琴、跳舞和唱歌。往日的田园依旧是今日的温馨家园。这样,每个地方都有自己的传说,风俗也就衍
传了下来。
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正确答案:(正确答案:The bounty of nature is equal to everyone, rich or poor. It is for this reason that people all feel strong attachment to nature. This is particularly true in rural areas where people have kept the same lifestyle for thousands of years. They plant crops and grapevines to brew and drink wine, feed cows to obtain milk, and weed gardens to grow flowers. They go to church at weekends and gather in the square on holidays where they sing, dance, and play musical instruments. Their land and pasture in the old days is still their sweet home of today. Thus, each place boasts its folklore which keeps its social customs alive.)
解析:解析:1.本段为议论性篇章,阐述客观现象,故总体上采用一般现在时。 2.第2句的“尤其在乡间”意思是在乡间情况更是如此,所以翻译时应适当采用“增补”技法,可译成This isparticularly true in rural areas。“以不变的方式生活着”可译成keep the same lifestyl
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e,也可译成havelived the same life。“酿酒和饮酒,喂牛和挤奶,锄草和栽花”这三个短语分别含有具有目的关系的两个动词,故用to连接前后两个动词。 3.“去教堂祈祷和做礼拜”可简单译成go to church,简洁明了,若译成go to church for prayers andmass反而显得累赘;“到广场”可灵活地译成gather in the square,比按字面意思译成go to thesquare更贴近原文的含义。 4.第3句的“往日”与“今日”对比鲜明,可分别译为in the old days和today;因上文中有“种植庄稼”“喂牛和挤奶”“锄草和栽花”等内容,“田园”二字应译成land and pasture使意思准确完整。“温馨家园”译成sweet home,自然简洁,符合英文的表达方式。 5.第4句两个分句之间具有表层的因果关系,但从更深一层次上看,“传说”是“衍传风俗”的逻辑上的主语,所以可以将第二个分句译成定语从句,使两个分句之间的关系更为紧密,即译成which keeps its socialcustoms alive:keep alive明显比maintain或prerve等词语更加生动传神。
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