Parents will always accompany with their kids during the childhood.
错误的原因：1accompany是与物动词要去掉with
Teachers usually help children to gain knowledge about science, math and language, which are a regular part of daily life.
错误的原因： 2 gain knowledge去替代acquire more common n 后面定语从句的谓语动词应该是单数 which is important to their day-to-day decision making. 用单数
If children live in a family full of violence and conflicts they can be very easy to get angry.
错误的原因：人不能说easy, 应该说they can be temperamental
This means that they can save much time and allocate this time to company with 〔应该是accompany〕 their families or focus on their work to make more money.
shopping online sometimes may mislead people make some unwi decisions (两个动词)
It is becau that children in cities can receive more information.
错误的原因：去掉that， becau本身就可以引导从句
Online shopping is changing their lifestyles, they can shopping (应该是go shopping) via the Internet on smartphones, computers or other devices. They do not need (应该是need to) go out and it save 〔应该是saves〕 much time. Then they may have more time to stay with family or to do some social activities with friends.
There are various products are saled 〔两个动词〕online and people can buy what they like without limit. For example they can buy a product which is produced in America through e-buy and this product may not be saled 〔应该是On sale〕 in stores. In this ca,people buy more things so the local economy will e a (应该是an) increa.
More and more libraries are equipped with advanced equipments to help readers.
错误的原因：equipment是不可数名词，没有复数
Technology has the changed the way of people to access knowledge.
错误的原因：“of doing something“是正常的表达，可以说〞the way people access knowledge〞变成定语从句
There are many people tend to arch the web to gather information.
错误的原因：两个动词，在“people〞后面加“who〞，使其变成定语从句
2. Family life and parents 〔觉得这两个有点重复〕absolutely play a vital role in children’s life,while they 〔指代不清，改为children〕are also expod to many external influences.
4. Parents can encourage children to do their interested activities.(貌似没这个说法，改为activities that they are interested)
错误的原因：interested过去分词不可能修饰没有生命的物体。应该是do their favourite activities.
7. the government should implement some policies to punish some behaviors such as destroy the environment.
错误的原因：such as后面跟名词或者动名词 的destroying
1. Tourist play a vital role in prerving the environment.
错误的原因：主谓不一致，改为tourists
错觉
People who prefer to shopping online might spend more than they earn.
错误的原因：prefer to do something.
People are normally expod to various news about celebrities,
错误的原因：news不可数，不能用various形容
Highly unemployment rates have also caud people to work overtime.
错误的原因：4月20日highly是副词，不能修饰名词，只能说忍者神龟四个人的名字the high unemployment rate
People will feel stressful and upt, if overwork.
属蛇的人性格
错误的原因：stressful不能修饰人，只能说stresd，而if 状语从句要写完整的句子，应该是if they overwork.
Men are likely to pay clor attention on their career advancement when communicate with others
When 是连词，后面要加完整的句子，或者分词communicating
Elderly people usually cannot have a good understanding of advanced technologies
这里应该是do not
公司合理化建议It has been argued that whether fast food advertiments should be banned.
错误的原因：“whether〞去掉，主语从句里要有一个独立的句子。
There is an increasing number of young people ek jobs in cities.
帅哥发型
错误的原因：主谓不一致，is改成“are〞；两个动词ek， 改成“eking〞
There has been an increa in the number of elderly population.
错误的原因：〞the number of〞后面要加可数名词复数，population改成people
People who age 50 and over have to retrain to survive in a competitive world.
错误的原因：〞who age〞改成aged
We expo to a world of knowledge on the Internet.
错误的原因：expo与物动词，要么加宾语，要么被动“we are expod to〞
Globalisation can cau harm to local economy
错误的原因：economy可数名词不裸奔，要说the local economy or local economies
Many cities have lost character, which may caud by globalisation.
错误的原因：情态动词要加动词原形，may be caud
Many tall buildings are builded in recent years.
南瓜糕的做法错误的原因：“in recent years〞一般用完成时态，改成“have been built〞
The views in a various of places em to be similarity.
错误的原因：应该是朦胧的朦组词various 或者a variety of; 表语和主语不匹配，应该改成similar
应该是thorough
The cost of fuel will become increa
错误：两个动词，应该将“become〞去掉
Private car u can have negative effect on environment.
错误：effect 和environment都是可数名词，不裸奔，分别写上“a negative effect〞，还有“the environment〞
