读后续写
浙南名校联盟第一次联考
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第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文：根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Dannis was waiting at the airline ticket counter when he first noticed the young woman with shiny black hair pulled tightly into a knot. She wore black boots of soft leather. Dannis struggled to c her face, she was ahead of him in line, but it was not until she bought her ticket and turned to walk away that he realized her beauty, which was fair-skinned and big-eyed. She emed aware that he was staring at her and lowered her gaze abruptly.
His flight was leaving in an hour. To kill time, Dannis stepped into an airport bar and ordered
a Scotch. While sipping it, he watched the flow of travelers through the terminal （航站楼）until he caught sight of the black-haaired girl in the leather coat again, deep in conversation with a blonde girl （金发女孩）."Invite her for a drink?" Dannis hesitated. In another instant ,the two women parated, neither of who directions was toward him.
When next he saw her, Dannis was buying a magazine and became aware someone was pushing him. At first, he was startled （受惊吓的）that anyone would be so clo as to touch him, but when he saw who it was, he smiled.
“Busy place," Dannis said.
She looked up at him and blushed. Wordlessly, she moved away and joined 法人代表证明the crowds in the terminal.
Dannis was at the counter with his magazine, but when he reached into his pocket for his wallet, the pocket was empty. Where could I have left it? His mind was racing, the credit cards, the cash, the identification card..・ His stomach stirred with something very like fe
ar. "The girl who was so near to me!" he said to himlf. All at once he understood she had picked his pocket. What shall he do?
First, find a policeman, tell him what has happened. He would probably never e his wallet again. Dannis gritted his teeth. When glancing around for the police, suddenly,he spotted the black-haired girl, ated against a front window of the terminal・ She emed absorbed in a book・
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1：
A at beside her was empty, and Dannis occupied it.
Para 2:
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girl ran and Dannis ran after her.
第二节：读后续写
Possible version 1:
Para 1：
A at beside her was empty, and Dannis occupied it. He felt a wave of anger swept over him. “Where is my wallet?” he yelled. The black-haired girl glanced up from her reading, with a confud look on her face.Dannis stood up, glared at her and shouted,“ You stole my wallet!” The crowds began to gossip. The girl turned deadly pale, looking so restless that words failed her. A strange silence hung in the air. Abruptly, she leaped from the at.
Para 2:
The girl ran and Dannis ran after her. After a while, Dannis finally grabbed her by the arm. At exactly that moment, a policeman approached them and asked about what happened. Dannis hastened to explain it while the girl frowned with a shake of her head. After further enquiries, the policeman took out a wallet and handed it to Dannis, adding that someone had found it in the toilet. What a mistake he had made! Overwhelmed by guilt, Dannis made an apology to the girl.
(153 words)
六、读后续写具体评价说明
评分原则：
1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：
（1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；
（2）内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况；
（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；河海大学研招网
（4）上下文的连贯性。
我的本领5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
6. 如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。
各档次的给分范围和要求
档 次 | 描 述 |
第五档 （21—25） | —与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语 衔接合理。性生活教育 —内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键 词语。 —所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些 许错误，但完全不会影响意义表达。 —有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 |
第四档 （16—20） | —与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头 语衔接较为合理。 —内容比较丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的 关键词语。 —所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能 有些许错误，但不会影响意义表达。 一比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 |
第三档 （11—15） | —与所给短文关系较为密切，与所提供各段落开 头语有一定程度的衔接。 —写出了若干有关内容，应用了4个以上短文中 标出的关键词语。 —应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，虽 有一些错误，但不影响意义表达。 一应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 |
第二档 （6—10） | —与所给短文有一定的关系，与所提供各段落开 头语有一定程度的衔接。 —写出了一些有关内容，应用了3个以上短文中 标出的关键词语。 —语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，有些语法结构 和词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。 —较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少内容连贯。 |
第一档 （1—5） | —与所提供短文和开头语的衔接较差。 —产出内容太少，很少使用短文中标出的关键词 语。 —语法结构单调，词汇项目很有限，有较多语法 结构和词汇方面的错误，严重影响了意义的表 达。 —缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯。 |
0分 | 白卷、内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。海贼王英文名 |
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金丽衢十二校联考
第二节读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Rescue
Dawn came slowly. A shaft of sunlight reached into the 4-meter-deep crater（弹坑），making the metal of the bomb shine. The boys were numb and tight, and hungry. They tried not to look at the huge shape of 蔬菜丸子的做法the bomb that appeared over them.
Harry suddenly opened his eyes and ized Jack's arm. "Listen!" he whispered. Jack's eye widened instantly, and both boys strained their ears. They could hear a man talking softly. The voice emed a long way off. Jack went to shout, but Harry clamped his hand over Jack's mouth. "Don't shout/' he hisd（发出嘘声），"We'll be blown into pieces."
The soft voice came nearer and nearer. Suddenly, an army captain appeared at the top of
crater. He was talking to a mouthpiece（话筒）around his neck. He stopped talking when he saw the boys. "" he said, “Who are you? " Hairy found his voice, "Jack and Harry Brown." "Is that dog dead?" asked the captain. “No： he's sleeping," said Harry.
