读后续写08 成长型（原卷版）
成长类的故事，是高考读后续写常见的一个主题，比如2021年的高考“我”的工资。什么叫“成长”，主要指改变观念和改变态度两类。
一、思维导图
成长类故事构造“三部曲”
第一步：成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）
1、孤独
I never made friends easily(从不容易交朋友), and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys. （2021年4月宁波二模）
2、伤心
1. 我在口袋里什么也没发现，这个事实就像一把长矛刺进我的心脏，立刻开始流血。
I found nothing in my pocket, a fact that emed like a spear piercing into my heart which started to bleed immediately. （2021年4月宁波二模）
2. 看了看周围，我焦急地几乎哭了起来。（2021年4月宁波二模）
Looking around anxiously, I almost burst into crying.
3. 就在我崩溃的时候，克劳利带领的一群男孩从我身边走过（2021年4月宁波二模）
Just at the time I broke down, a group of boys led by Crawley pasd me.
3、惭愧
1. She was overwhelmed / overcome/ consumed with guilt and shame (被内疚和羞愧淹没). （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）
2. Suddenly she came alive（精神就为之一振）,waving her arthritic(关节炎的) hands.（2021广二模）
3. A wave of guilt swept over me(一阵恐惧向我袭来) and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.（2020届山东省滨州市高三第二次模拟英语试题）
4、嘲笑
他们大声地笑着，像是在尖叫“多漂亮的破表啊！”（2021年4月宁波二模）
They laughed loudly with Crawley screaming words like “What a finest broken watch!”
5、绝望
我妈妈不让我带，”我撒谎，绝望在我心中沸腾。（2021年4月宁波二模）
责任感英语
“My mother wouldn't let me bring it,” I lied, desperation boiling inside me.手机万能充电器
6、紧张
1. Meanwhile, Karie sat restlessly in her at with her fingers crosd (她的手指交叉着). （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）
2. She told the teacher the truth , with her heart thumping / pounding/ pumping like a drum聊斋之龙飞相公(她的心跳得像打鼓一样). （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）
3. Having paced up and down restlessly(不安地来回走动) in front of the the teacher's office, she finally gathered courage and plodded in.（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）
7、害怕
I unknowingly (不知不觉地) avoided interacting (interact) with anyone becau I was afraid they’d laugh in my face(我很害怕他们会当面取笑我) . （2021沈阳市一模）
第二步：成长中（蜕变塑造）
1、惊讶
Raising her eyebrows in surpri, Mrs Rossi froze, as if rooted on the ground（仿佛定格在那里）.（2021广二模）
2、希望
Jayce looked up to him, his eyes sparkling with hope and determination（闪烁着希望和决心）.（2021年汕头一模）
3、教育与成长
1. “That’s not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience,” a voice echoed in my ears (一个声音在我耳边回响)after the boys left.（2021年4月宁波二模）
2. “What was done was done,” thought I to mylf. “What is important now is to do correct things next(现在重要的是下一步要做正确的事情).” （2021年4月宁波二模）
3. 尽管愤怒、尴尬和悲伤重重地笼罩在空气中，但这个声音还是让我意识到我在试图给同学留下深刻印象时犯下的错误。（2021年4月宁波二模）
Though anger, embarrassment and sadness hung heavily in the air, the voice drew me to the awareness of the mistakes I had made when I attempted to impress the boys.
第三步：成长后的升华（喜悦+感激+升华）
1、喜悦
1. Karie grinned(grin) as she read the label on the box.（潍坊高三英语期中考试）中庸什么意思
2. Dad looked at the paper, with his lips curving into a smile（他的嘴唇弯成了微笑）. （潍坊高三英语期中考试）
3. Hearing that, Karie grinned from ear to ear, a wave of happiness flooding over her（幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头）. （潍坊高三英语期中考试）
2、感激
I looked at her, tears of love and gratitude(感动和爱的泪水)welling up in my eyes.（2021沈阳市一模）
3、升华句
1. 我确信，将来每当我失去耐心时，我都会记住祖父的话。（2021年4月宁波二模）
十渡风景区I knew for sure that every time I lost patience in the future I would remember my grandfather’s words.
2. 这是我第一次真正体会到这份礼物的意义——耐心。（2021年4月宁波二模）
It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of the gift --- patience.
然而，从那时起，我保证这只破表会一直提醒我耐心等待，直到真相出现。（2021年4月宁波二模）
3、Aram said, “Thanks, Mrs Rossi, for teaching me how to make a cake to realize my dream黄昏恋小说（实现我的梦想）.” Mrs Rossi held his hands, saying, “ It is you who teach me how
to stick to my dream(坚持我的梦想).”（2021广二模）
4、It dawned on Aram that（Aram突然想到） “One should stick to his/her dream no matter what happens.”（2021广二模））
成长类场景描写
一、学习知识而成长
知识就是力量！在改变的过程中，学习不同的知识，然后才能面对各种困难和挑战。比如屏幕前的你，不就是在学习读后续写的技巧吗？请看下面的例句，也是我送给正在学习的你。
It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。
【分析】individual这里表示“个人，个体”。make more attempts 做更多尝试。
二、发挥天赋促成长
认识自身天赋，并且发挥天赋，这是改变我们的现状的一个重要条件。请看下面的例句。
Actually, every individual posss talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end. 大青叶的功效与作用
旧金山英语事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。
【分析】posss 拥有。create miracles表示创造奇迹。
三、追逐梦想而成长
永远不要忽视了梦想的力量！“做人如果没有理想,跟咸鱼有什么区别呢”。请看下面两个例句。
It's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。
