雅思作文-小作文
Task One
◆第一章
如何写开头段？
开头段的写法：改写原题，大约在1-2句话。
开头段转述原题，在进行原题改写的时候，方法大约分为三种。
1.增加单词；
2.删除单词；
3.替换单词；
注1：在改写原题的时候，需要对原题进行3-4处的改写即可。如果改动太大，就会暴露出语法错误的可能，所以尽量多地保证原题的原汁原味，不要对其内容和概念改动太大。
注2：在原题里的below一词在改写的时候必须删掉，不能出现在改写后的开头段当中。
真题练习：
剑桥6-Test One-Task One
The graph and table below give information about water u worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
Summari the information by lecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
原题：The graph and table below give information about water u worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
分析：原题当中有两个图，一个是曲线图另一个是表格图，所以在进行描述的时候，可以把原题的一句话(含有line graph and table)分成两句来描述，一句话是描述曲线图，另外一句话是描述表格图。
Part One
原题：The graph and table below give information about water u worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
原题中描述曲线图可以进行修改的部分：
1.give可替换成show/describe/demonstrate/summari/outline/indicate/illustrate
2.information可替换成data
3.water u worldwide前可以增加名词，以此表示“世界范围内的用水量”。即“the amoun
t of water u worldwide”；还可以增加名词或动词来表达世界范围内的用水量变化的概念，即“the changes中国国庆节 in the amount of water u worldwide; the amount of water u worldwide changed”；在整个曲线图当中，还应添加时间的概念，因为图上明确地体现了时间是从1990年到2000年这10年的时间段，我们要进行描述的也是在这10年当中世界范围内用水量的变化。即“…between 1900 and 2000”
改写后的中文：
1. 曲线图显示了1900到2000年间关于世界范围内用水的数据。
翻译：The line graph shows data about water u worldwide between 1900 and 2000.
2. 曲线图表明了1900到2000年间世界范围内用水量是如何变化的
花草图片翻译：The line graph indicates how the amount of water u worldwide changed between 1900 and 2000.
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3. 曲线图展示了1900到2000年间世界范围内用水量的变化。
翻译：The line graph demonstrates the changes in the amount of water u worldwide between 1900 and 2000.
Part Two
原题：The graph and table below give information about water u worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
原题中描述表格图可以进行修改的部分：
1.give可替换成show/describe/demonstrate/summari/outline/indicate/illustrate
2.表格图当中体现了两个国家农业用水量消耗上的不同，所以可以在名词water cousumption前面增加单词组合the differences in agricultural来表示“农业用水量消耗上的不同”。即“the differences in agricultural water consumption”
改写后的中文：
1. 表格描述了关于这两个不同国家巴西和民主刚果共和国水消耗的信息。
翻译：The table describes information about water consumption in two different conuntries—Brazil and Congo.
2. 表格描述了这两个不同国家巴西和民主刚果共和国在农业用水量消耗上的差异。
翻译：The table describes the differences in agricultural water consumption in two different conuntries—Brazil and Congo.
合句：
The line graph shows data about water u worldwide between 1900 and 2000 while the table describes information about water consumption in two different conuntries—Brazil and Congo.最美逆行者电影
考官范文：
The graph shows how the amount of water ud worldwide changed between 1900 and 2000. 员工关系管理(曲线图显示了1900到2000年间世界范围内水的使用情况。)
Throughout the century, The largest quantity of the global water ud for agricultural purpo and this incread dramatically from about 500 km³ to around 3000 km³ in the year 2000.Water ud in the industrial and domestic ctors also incread, but consumption was minimal until mid-century. From 1950 onwards, industrial u grew steadily to just over 1000 km³, while domestic u ro more slowly to only 300 km³, both far below the levels of consumption by agriculture.诡计多端的近义词
The table illustrates the differences in agricultural consumption in some areas of the world by contrasting the amount of irrigated land in Brazil(26500 km²)with that in the D.R.C(10 km²). (表格通过对巴西灌溉地面积(25600平方公里)和民主刚果共和国灌溉面积(100平方公里)进行对比，描述了世界上一些地区农业消费的差异。)This means that a huge amount of water is ud in agriculture in Brazil, and this is reflected in the figures for water consumption per person: 359 m³ compared with only 8 m³ in the Congo. With a population of 176 million, the figures for Brazil indicate how high agricultural water consumption can be in some countries.
真题练习：
剑桥6-Test Two-Task One
The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
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七夕节传说Summari the information by lecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
原题：The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
原题中描述表格图可以进行修改的部分：
1.give可替换成show/describe/demonstrate/summari/outline/indicate/illustrate
2.changes in modes of travel可参照表格当中的标题 “Average distance in miles travelled per person per year, by mode of travel”加工合成改写为
•the average number of miles travlled per person per year, by different kinds of modes of travel
•the changes in the average numbe of miles travelled per person per year by different kinds of modes of travel
•the changes in average distance in miles when per person travel per year by different kinds of modes of trvel.
