2021年高考英语备考艺考生百日冲刺系列
专题43 【读后续写】题型增分攻略四解析版
微技能7 环境细节描写 |
环境描写，可以起到融情于景的效果，衬托人物的内心世界。适当的环境描写可以有效推动故事情节的发展，烘托故事的高潮。如当故事中的人物在碰到困难时，往往要加大笔墨描写故事环境的黑暗、恐怖和不祥，“情景交融”，使读者倍感紧张。环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度，通常在描写时主客观交替进行。 |
技巧点拨 | 操纵的意思 1.描写客观环境：从环境事物本身入手 ①可利用各种形容词，做到“有声，有色，有质感，有味道” 如：the songs of birds(鸟鸣），the thundering clouds(电闪雷鸣），the blue sky(蓝天）， the green grass (青草）， the fragile flowers(娇嫩的花），the fragrant ros(艳丽的玫 瑰）、the tting/rising sun(落日／冉冉升起的太阳） ②可利用动词，如下句中的动词wrapped；shinning；es；turn将山一年四季中美 的描述得极为生动，有动有色。 2. 描写主观环境：从观察者角度描写瑞士国家队 ①可利用Sb. found sth.adj./doing/done 某人发现某物（状态／动作／被）......； ②It was so adj. that we find/feel它是如此......以至于...... ③Sth. kept sb. amazed/sth. held sb. entirely in their power 景物让我完全惊呆了 |
精彩片段 | 片段1 Imagine mountains wrapped in silver water, shinning in the spring sun. Summer es the mountains turn bright green with growing rice.During autumn, the same mountains are gold, and in winter they are covered in sheets of white frost.（有动有色， 四季颜色银、绿、金、白） 片段2 The dark(有色），rainy evening,the wind,the thundering(有声） clouds held me entirely in their power.We saw lots of great sights along the way. I clod my eyes in the speeding(有动） car.Winding(有动）rivers,lofty mountains,deep valleys and sunny beaches kept me amazed. |
微技能8 故事高潮营造法 |
故事中的高潮也通常是故事的转折点（turning point),是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的那一部分。高潮有时候是剧情中的“危机”点。有时它只是达到关键时刻或者转折点时，发生了一些事情，或者人物必须做出决定，从而导致一个结果或其他。 |
技巧点拨 | 方法1 增加冲突 增加冲突是一种有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。冲突带来紧迫感，将故事推向事情的解决或崩溃。可从以下三个方面增加冲突 ： ①人物之间的冲突（人物观点不同，竞争需要等）；最大黑洞 ②人物与环境之间的冲突； ③增加障碍，让人物克服挑战。 方法2 放大内心冲突 放大人物内心活动冲突也有助于设置一个高度紧张和不确定的时刻。 |
七冲门精彩片段 | 现在来观察下面短文中的冲突是如何体现的 We were talking about engagement (订婚）when your grandfather had to go to war. It was the most terrible day of my life when he left. I was so afraid of losing him, the only way I could stay peaceful was to dance.(放大人物内心冲定）And then one day a letter came. There were only three ntences: “I have lost my leg. I am no longer a whole man and now give you back your freedom. It is best you forget about me. ”（増加障碍） Grandma continued to tell me that Grandfather was in hospital and she made her decision not to give him up.(放大人物内心冲突） She took her leave, and traveled away from the city. |
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2021年高考英语【读后续写】题型强化训练四解析版
跟踪检测·迁移应用
练模拟，练规范，夯基提能钢铁是怎样炼成的好词好句
Test 1
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
I like all kinds of chocolate.Mother had bought a bar of it,and somehow I couldn't stop thinking about it.I was helping Father in the yard when I got the idea that I could cut off the end of that bar of chocolate.Mother would be sure to miss it,but before she had any idea who had done it,I could admit that I'd taken it to escape a spanking(挨揍）。I waited until Mother was out feeding the chickens.Then I told Father I thought I'd go in for a drink
of water.I got the bar down,but I heard Mother coming just when I had the knife ready to cut.So I slipped the chocolate into the front of my shirt and left quickly.Before I went back to help Father,I went to the barn(谷仓）and hid the chocolate there.
All the rest of afternoon,I didn't like to look at Father.Every time he spoke it made me jump.My hands began shaking so much that he asked me what was the matter.I told him it was just that my hands were cold.I knew he didn't believe me,and every time he looked my way my heart started pounding.I didn't want the chocolate anymore.I wanted a chance to put it back without being caught.
I was nearly out to where the cows were when I remembered what Father had said once-some of the family money was mine becau I had helped to earn it.Why wouldn't it be all right to figure the bar of chocolate had been bought with my own money? That emed to fix everything.But by the time I had the cows headed home,I had begun to worry again.I decided to leave the whole matter to the Lord.I picked up a dried stick and decided I would throw it up into the air and take my orders from the way it landed.If it pointed west.I'
d take the whole bar back.If it pointed south.I'd take half an inch off the end.If it pointed east,I'd bought the bar with my own money and it wouldn't be stealing to keep it.I swung the stick as high as I could.When it came down,it pointed mostly west-but a little south.That night I couldn't sleep.I kept trying to remember how much that stick had really been pointing to the south.
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At last I got up,slipped out into the yard and took the ax(斧头）from the chopping block.
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Then he stood me on my feet and asked if I thought I had derved the spanking.
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At last/got up, slipped out into the yard and took the ax from the chopping block .Then I w
ent into the barn and took the chocolate outside.By the light of the moon,I was about to cut off the end of the bar when I heard"Son!"I couldn't think of a thing to say.I grabbed up the bar of chocolate and hid it next to my chest before l turned around.Father picked me up and took me over to the woodpile.I didn't know anybody could spank as hard as he did.
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Then he stood me on my feet and asked if l thought I had derved the spanking. He said it wasn't so much that I'd taken the chocolate,but that I'd tried to hide it from him."Son,"he said,"I know you help to earn the family money.We might say the chocolate was yours in the first place.You could have had it if you'd asked for it,but I won't have you being sneaky about things.
Test 2
On Friday evening, Emmett and I went to a movie as scheduled. After purchasing the tick
ets and drinks, we entered the cinema with delight beforehand, waiting for the beginning of the movie.
When I got up in the middle of the movie, Emmett whispered, “ Carter, where are you going?” “I forgot to call my mom to tell her what time to pick us up.” I whispered back, leaving my jacket on the at.
女朋友生日文案I squeezed past the people in my row, trying not to step on any feet while still watching the screen. I didn’t want to miss a thing. Balfour, the good guy in the movie, was trapped in an underground cave.
助动词的用法When I came back, Balfour’s flashlight almost went out. An enormous snake was moving toward him, twisting its body. Balfour struggled to loon the chains around his hands and feet to reach his magic cape (魔法斗篷). With the cape around him, he could completely disappear.
