读后续写：历险型
Part1：经典例文（森林遇险） (1)
Part2：历险类细节描写 (4)
①海上遇难 (4)
①洪水 (7)
①地震 (7)
①火灾 (7)
①受伤 (8)
①丛林逃生 (9)
Part3：历险类故事构造“三大套路” (11)
套路一：恶劣环境要烘托 (11)
套路二：转折思维技巧好 (11)
综合素质三观套路三：万能升华要牢记 (12)
Part4：灵活应用 (13)
例1：山洞遇险 (13)
Part5：高考真题再现 (16)
真题1：爸爸与我森林遇险【2018年6月浙江卷】 (16)
真题2：旅游途中遇狼【2017年6月浙江卷】 (18)
Part1：经典例文（森林遇险）
Brady was a recently retired arch and rescue dog.He was not happy and misd his owner Al becau Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Al’s nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had t the woods on fire.Wind-blown flame had l
eaped from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox(火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasn’t helping much. It
had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steve’s arm. “Let’s go! We can make it back to the
river we crosd today.” Steve pulled
Brady’s leash（皮带） and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke，and
pine branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the river…
Brady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a den curtain of smoke across the path. They’d never make it through that. They would have to find another escape route. The dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It emed to him they were moving away from the river.
Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. Theop是什么意思
e boys yelled and shouted for him，but he didn’t come back.
They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up a slope（斜坡）. He couldn’t blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himlf wanted to run even though he didn’t have a clue which way.They hadn’t gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him.
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“Where've you been?"Steve cried Brady stopped directly in front of him and started pushing him back toward the slope they’d just climbed. When Steve still didn’t get it, Brady grabbed the boy's jeans and pulled harder. The message was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of cour he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago. Was he still sharp enough to get them through this? Brady pulled again,urgently, “0K,big guy,” Paragraph 2
Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog stopped to get his escape route. Often he changed direction. How long they’d walked Steve had no idea. He just held onto Brady’s leash with one hand and kept putting one foot in front of the other. He was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound of rushing water. The river! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until they jumped in cool,running water. “Brady, you did it!”
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“你去哪儿了？史蒂夫叫道，布雷迪直接停在他面前，开始把他推回他们刚爬上去的斜坡。当史蒂夫仍然没有得到它，布雷迪抓住男孩的牛仔裤，并拉得更用力。信息很清楚，但史蒂夫犹豫了。他当然记得他叔叔说过布雷迪救他
的命，但那是很久以前的事了。他还能让他们度过难关吗？布雷迪又紧急地拉了一下，“0K，大个子，”史蒂夫决定......
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布雷迪带领他们回到斜坡上，进入树林。这只大狗停了好几次，以获得他的逃跑路线。他经常改变方向。他们走了多久，史蒂夫不知道。他只是用一只手抓住布雷迪的皮带，继续把一只脚放在另一只前面。听到哗哗的水声，他几乎麻木了。河流！孩子们大喊一声，摇摇晃晃地向前跑，直到他们跳进凉爽的流水里。“布雷迪，你做到了！”
Part2：历险类细节描写
①海上遇难
天气
*阴云笼罩着天空。闪电划过天空，接着是雷声。几分钟后，下起了倾盆大雨。The sky is darkened with gloomy clouds. Lighting flashed across the sky, followed by a clap of thunder. Minutes later, there came a downpour.
*风呼啸着，海浪反复拍打着她的脸。
The wind was howling and the waves smacked
repeatedly against her face.
海上
*大海在风暴中沸腾。The a boiled in the storm.
*愤怒的海浪拍打着船舷，水溅得到处都是。The angry waves crashed against the side of the boat, with water splashing here and there.
船
*倾斜Leaned sideways
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*船在波涛汹涌的海上颠簸。The ship was
rocking up and down in the restless a.
*汹涌的海浪把他们的船灌满了水，速度比他们清空船还快。The crashing waves filled their boat with water faster than they could empty it.
救援人
形容老人精神好的成语*但是，当我向远处望去时，我发现一连串的三四个大浪正向岸边涌来。But then, as I looked in the distance, I discovered a ries of three or four big waves heading towards the shore.
如何设置局域网*我不假思索地跑到街上，一路上抱着自己的身体板，冲着一个陌生人喊着要报警。Without thinking, I ran down into the street, holding my body board on the way and shouted at a stranger to call the police.
*我拍着他们的脸叫醒他们，不断地告诉他们要坚强。Patting their faces to wake them up, I continuously told them to be strong.
遇难者
1.*她平静下来，保持呼吸的节奏，这样她才能呼吸均匀。She calmed down to
keep the rhyme of breathing so that she could breathe evenly.
2.*我感到筋疲力尽。I felt extremely exhausted（apparently worn-out）
3.*看着浩瀚的大海，我感到一种恐惧感涌上全身。Looking at the vast a, I felt
a n of fear surging through my whole body.
4.*盐刺痛了我的眼睛，我几乎不知道我能坚持多久。Salt stinging my eyes, I
could hardly tell how long I could hold on.
课堂小游戏5.*盐刺痛了我的眼睛，我几乎不知道我能坚持多久。But I still shouted in my
head: keep on.
6.*他看见一架飞机在头顶上飞过。但没有
手电筒，他在浩瀚的大海中是看不见的。
He saw an airplane flying overhead. But
with no flashlight, he was invisible in the
vast ocean.
7.*他脱下黄色上衣，想她应该去一个空旷的地方，如果他们回来的话，就给
他们打个旗子。He took off his yellow blou, thinking that she should go to an open area and flagged them if they came back.
