送老人去临终关怀医院
01｜试题呈现
I was responding to a call from a small brick flat(用砖做的公寓) in a quiet part of town. I assumed I was being nt to pick up some party-goers，or someone who had just had a fight with a lover，or a worker heading to an early shift at some factory for the industrial part of town.
When I arrived at 2:, the building was dark except for a single light in a ground floor window. Under such circumstances, many drivers just honk(按喇叭) once or twice，wait a minute，then drive away. But I had en too many weak people who depended on taxis as their only means of transportation.
Unless a situation smelled of danger，I always went to the door. This pasnger might be someone who needs my assistance ， I reasoned to mylf. So I walked to the door and knocked. “Just a minute，” answered a frail，elderly voice. I could hear something being dr
agged across the floor. After a long pau，the door opened. A small woman in her 80s stood before me. She was wearing a print dress and a pillbox hat，like somebody out of a 1940s movie. By her side was a small nylon suitca.
四级听力题型The apartment looked as if no one had lived in it for years. All the furniture was covered with sheets. There were no clocks on the walls, no equipment on the counters. In the corner was a cardboard box filled with photos and glassware.
“Would you carry my bag out to the car？” she said. I took the suitca学校操场 to the cab, then returned to assist the woman. She took my arm, and we walked slowly toward the cab.
She kept thanking me for my kindness. “It's nothing,” I told her. “I just try to treat my pasngers the way I would want my mother treated.”
注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
Having given me an address, a hospice, she asked. “Could you drive through downtown?”
Paragraph 2: we drove in silence to the address she had given me , and it…
02｜写作建议作风建设交流发言材料
根据两段所给提示句判断，第一段着重描写去临终关怀医院的途中发生的情况。可以描写the small woman的神态、神情、动作、步态、语气等，语文教材中关于“祥林嫂”的枯槁的神情的描述可以用来借鉴；也可描写当时的场景，如昏暗的路灯无精打采地发着微弱的光；又如，the small woman倦怠的神情；又如，night是如何的黑，映衬出the small woman即将不久于人世；也可描写整个ride中让the small woman充满回忆的几个特别重要
的地方，如与丈夫一见钟情的地方，结婚的教堂，儿子出生的医院等等等等；也可穿插两人之间的偶尔的几句对话；第二段着重描写到达医院后的情景。可以描写老奶奶对我的感谢，我对感谢的回应（主线）；也可描写医护人员来接老奶奶的动作（辅线）；还可以对关门声进行一个放大处理（特写），把关门声比喻成关闭世界之门的声音。最后结尾可以采用几种常见手法，如思考式结尾, 镜头拉远式结尾, 对话式结尾, 心里独白式收尾, Camera-pan and zoom (摄影-全景+放大)等方法收尾。
03｜写作素材
场景描写素材：
寂静的夜晚：a silent night; a quiet night; a still night
漏光检测>日计划表
路灯：1.昏暗：dim ; faint; dull; a dim/faint/dull street light
2.没精打采的: gloomy a.黑暗的，沮丧的; inanimate a.无生命的，无生气的
人物描写素材：
我（司机）：本文可以忽略二极管检测
临终老人（乘客）：
瘦骨嶙峋的身材：a skinny figure; a bony figure
布满皱纹的脸：Have a wrinkly face; be covered with wrinkles; an old lady with a wrinkle-covered face
空洞的眼神：empty eyes; an empty look; hollow eyes; a blank look
面无表情的：emotionless
一动不动的：motionless
凄凉的：full of grief
孤独的/痛苦的/悲伤的一生：a desolate/mirable/sad life
仿佛木刻似的：like a woodcut statue
只有那眼珠间或一轮，还可以表示她是一个活物。（借鉴关于祥林嫂的描述）
The occasional rolling of her turbid(浑浊的) eyes indicated she was still a living creature.
动作描写素材：
我（司机）：
1.I started the taxi and shut off the meter.
2.I looked in the rear-view mirror. Her eyes were glistering. I quietly reached over and shut off the meter.“What route would you like me to take?”I asked.
星期拼音
3.We drove in silence to the address she had given me.
4.I slowed down and paud, trying to make her look a little longer.
5.I opened the trunk and took the small suitca to the door.
临终老人（乘客）:
1.In front of a building, she sat in the darkness for a long time, saying nothing.
2.In front of another hou, she sobbed. It was where her son had an car accident.
3.Her empty eyes lit up/sparkled/glittered/shone like a cluster of bright stars.
4.She murmured with a trembling/shaking voice, the volume gradually incread and her face softened.
5.She kept thanking me for my kindness.
6.As the first hint of sun was creasing the horizon, she suddenly said, “I’m tired. Let’s go now.”
7.The woman was already ated in a wheelchair.
心理活动描写素材：
我（司机）：
1.I am duty bound(义不容辞的) to pick up her. After all, it will be her last ride.
2.It is my duty to provide emotional support to the terminally ill in my cab.小舅子
3.What if that woman had gotten an angry driver, or one who was impatient to end his shift? What if I had refud to take the run, or had honked once, then driven away?
4.On a quick review, I don’t think that I have done anything more important in my life.
临终老人（乘客）：本文可以省略
