2021届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析（一）12
读后续写类25篇（三）
1. （2020·山东高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。
“The mall? Really, Mom?” 13-year-old Michelle asks her mother as her sister Nicole, three, looks on. “Absolutely.” Patty smiles. “You girls derve some fun, and I need to get out of the hou.” With dialysis (透析) treatments every five hours, Patty rarely ventures (冒险) from her Raymond, New Hampshire, home. She’s also been waiting four years to receive a call—the call that would call her for the double organ transplant (移植) she so desperately needs to live—the call that could come at any time. “There,” Patty smiles. “Let’s go have an adventure!”
Before leaving, Patty phones her firefighter husband Gary. But there’s no answer. Patty and her children arrive at the mall. “Whoa!” Patty laughs, forgetting in the excitement to call Gary.
At 3:05 Gary returns to the fire hou. Just as he’s about to phone home to check on Patty, the phone is ringing! “We’ve got a match!” Patty’s doctor says. “But she’s got to Charlotte, North Carolina, by midnight.” Gary’s heart beats fast as he calls home. “Why doesn’t she answer?” Gary dials again and again.
Gary worries at the fire station. He’s booked four tickets on both of the two flights to North Carolina, a 6 pm from nearby Manchester or a 7:25 pm from Boston. Where are you Patty? With still no answer, Gary hangs up and dials the police department. He and his firefighter colleagues phone local stores and malls.
Now as Patty and her daughters go shopping, the mall loudspeakers are making an announcement. But in the crowded mall, Patty doesn’t hear it.
At 5:45 Gary realizes it’s too late to make the Manchester flight. And if he doesn’t find Patty soon, they won’t make the Boston flight either. Patty still hasn’t returned at 6:40. “Come home, Patty!” he begs, looking at the driveway. 7:00. It’s too late! Gary panics. Suddenly, he hears the sound of a car! “Patty!” he cries. Spotting her car pulling into the d
riveway, he calls the fire department. “Get that helicopter here!” he shouts. “She’s home!”
Paragraph 1:
Patty spots Gary racing toward her, a nervous look on his face and suitcas in his hands!
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Paragraph 2:
At 7:37 the plane takes off.
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【答案】Patty spots Gary racing toward her, a nervous look on his face and suitcas in his hands! She is quite confud about what has happened. “Your organs!” Gary cries. “They’re waiting for you! But we have to get you to Charlotte! Now!” Patty is in shock. Helping Patty into the helicopter, Gary asks the pilot if they can make it to the airport in ti
me. The pilot smiles, “Your fire chief got the airline to hold the flight!” “You hear that, honey? You’re going to live!” Gary says to Patty.
At 7:37 the plane takes off. The plane lands in North Carolina at 10:50. There is plenty of time left for Patty to make the deadline. After a 10-hour-long operation, doctors tell Gary the transplant couldn’t have gone better—the organs are a perfect match. Today, Patty is home recovering, and her doctors say she should live a full and normal life. “I live with the knowledge every day that I am alive becau so many people care about me.” Patty says happily.
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。Patty守在家里等待了四年器官移植，就在她决定带孩子们去逛商场的那天，医生通知丈夫找到了跟她匹配的器官，需要她在午夜前赶到Charlotte, North Carolina，丈夫买好了机票却到处找不到Patty。当Patty终于回来的的时候飞机已经晚点了，作为消防员的丈夫只能调用直升机……
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Patty发现Gary朝她跑过来，脸上一脸紧张，手里拿着行李箱!”和第二段句首“飞机7点37分起飞”可知，第一段应该写从Patty和Gary见面后到上飞机前的对话和准备工作。
②由第二段首句内容“飞机7点37分起飞”可知，第二段可描写Patty到达Charlotte的时间及到达之后的手术及术后结果。
2.续写线索：准备起飞——起飞——到达——手术成功——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①按时到达机场：make it to the airport in time /arrive at the airport in time/appear at the airport before the deadline
②.关心：care about/worry about/ be concerned about /look after/take care of
情绪类
①.困惑：is confud about /does not know entirely/ does not realize
②.震惊：in shock/greatly surprid/can not believe what happened
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Helping Patty into the helicopter, Gary asks the pilot if they can make it to the airport in time.（helping是现在分词短语做伴随状语）
[高分句型2]. I live with the knowledge every day that I am alive becau so many people care about me.（that引导knowledge的同位语从句，同位语从句中包含了becau引导的原因状语从句）
2. （2020·江苏省前黄高级中学高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On Sunday,Nicholas, a teenager, went skiing with his father at Sugarloaf Mountain in Mai
ne. They had a wonderful day and decided to drive home to Massachutts after a final run. They took a chairlift to the top of the mountain, where they split up to go down in different trails. When the father finished his run, he headed to the parking lot to wait for his son. However, Nicholas never showed up.
